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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
Part-20
Prem gets up from the bed.Was shocked 2 see kali near
him on bed. P:I'm here?
Ka:don't u remember coming here?
P:yes.but..
Ka:u were there with me the whole nite
P:but how cum I sleep here?
Ka:who told that u slept?u were full awake
P:what nonsense?
Ka:yes.but I doubt u were not in this world.otherwise
how can u hav one nite stand with me afterall u've
started loving mukti
P is shocked.P shouts:kaliiiii!
Ka:u scream at me.but this is what happened last nite.i
cried aloud.but u…in one way,it was a rape
P is shocked.he cant believe:tell me kali,r u joking?r u
fooling me 4 a fun?
Ka:do u think any girl wil fool men in this case?
P is speechless.P gets mad:how cum it happen from
me?kali,plz 4get last nite
Ka:how can a girl 4get it?
P is speechless.he cries loudly.

P is driving the car.P thinks:wen I started luving
mukti,wen I wanted her in my life..this happened.why
God?now how can I tell her that I luv her?
Tears fall down.He thinks abt his moments with
mukti.song:zindagi..{musafir}
HE reaches home. Prerna shouts:where were u last
nite?do u no how tense we were?
P:sorry mom.i met my old friend.so we spent time 2gether

Prer:but cant u think that ur wife is waiting here?
P:mukti was waiting 4 me?
Prer:ya.she was really upset
P thinks:that means mukti cares 4 me?
P goes 2 the room.He sees M sitting with a sad face.
P:mukti!
M was relieved:prem!
M runs 2 him:where were u?I no that like a wife I'm
interfering in ur life.sorry
Pit :is fine.i don't mind.infact I'm only happy that like a
wife u started interfering in my life
M was surprised.M:plz call me & tell if u r becoming
late.i was really tensed
P:I saw my childhood friend.we spent time 2gether.why do
u get tensed if u don't see me?
M is speechless. P:tell mukti
M:I dunno.but I missed u
M goes out of the room.P feels happy:mukti missed me
Suddenly he remembers kali.he's mood out.

M thinks:why do I miss prem this much?is it really
luv?if so,I must admit that luv is a beautiful feeling
M imagines P whispering into his ears:I luv u
M is shy.she imagines having romantic moments with
him.song:mere jeevansaathi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
thanks for the update....continue soon!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
thanks for the update carry on soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
Part-21

Prem & family r going 4 a picnic.Prem-mukti in a car.Suddenly
P takes a break & mukti falls on P's shoulder &P holds
her.They look at each other's eyes.M is shy & moves 2
her seat.P imagines M keeping her face on his shoulder
thru out the drive.

They all r sitting on the ground & playing.They roll the
ball.The ball reaches prem.
Slok:wow,bhai has 2 sing now
P was'nr in a mood.P:no way
prerna:why r u not enjoying?sing beta 4 our sake,4
mukti's sake
P looks at M.M is smiling.P smiles at her.P's eyes r on
M.he sings:kaho na pyar hai…..
The ball reaches mukti.
Slok:bhabhi,u've 2 sing
M:no plz.i dunno singing
S:bhabhi,just sing even if u dunno
P:plz sing mukti
M smiles & sings mujse hui..{ishq vishk}.she stresses
the line:maine kiya hai tujse sacha pyar..
P smiles.

P imagines that he & M r alone during nite.Cool wind.M's
red sari is blowing.P catches it.They both hav a
sizzling dance.song:..i luv u..{Mr.India}
P thinks:I don't even deserve 2 dream sweetly abt me
with mukti
P wipes the tear on his eyes.

P is standing alone at the hill.M goes there:why r u
looking so dull 2day?
P:nothing like that
M:but I feel so.bcoz usually u enjoy these occasions 2
the most.but 2day I feel that u were not so happy
P:no mukti
M:Is it bcoz kali is not here?
P is shocked.He sweats.M:is it bcoz u miss kali?bcoz
u've told me manytimes that kali is ur luv & u luv her
company
P is speechless.M is sad.M thinks:prem is not
replying.so my doubt is true?he still loves kali & he is
moodout bcoz he's missing kali
M turns back & walks.P calls:mukti
M turns back. P:as u think I don't luv kali.i don't miss
her.that's the truth
M is happy

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thanks for the update!continue sn!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
Part-22

Mukti is tired after the trip.M is seen sleeping in the
car.Prem extends his arm 2 touch her,but backs out.They
reach home.M is gone 2 sleep.
P:2day u r very early 2 sleep?
M:we'd a big journey.i'm tired.my head is aching.if I
sleep it'l b ok
M sleeps.P looks at M sleeping. P:so cute

The next morning,M has not got up early.P:mukti,get
up,its abt 9
M gets up:oh,I'm so late
P:u want 2 go out?
M:no,yesterday we'd gone out no?
P:ya,but if u want..
M:no need.infact my headache has'nt gone yet.i want 2
take rest
P:still u hav it.then we'l go & meet a DR
M:no need.it'l go soon
P:no,u've 2
M:but prem,I'm ok.not necessary 2 go 2 hospital
P:but 4 my sake..i'm tensed
M thinks:prem is that much bothered abt me?
M:ok

They both go 2 the Dr.Dr:u can collect the test report
2morrow
The next day,P goes 2 get the report.DR:I'm very sorry 2
tell that mukti's health is not normal
P:what do u mean?
Dr:she has brain tumour
M is shocked:what?no,this won't happen.Dr,plz save her
Dr:no use of medicines actually.operation is
needed.since it's the beginning,she'l b cured
Tears flow from P's eyes.

P is driving back.His mind is full of his moments spent
with M.P:why is God giving us pain?1st unknowingly I did
a big mistake.then mukti's health.if she cums 2 no abt it
in the future she'l b shattered
P reaches home.M:u got the report?
P:ya M:what does it say?I'm perfectly alright no?
P is upset. M:did I tell u that test was'nt
needed?see,now I'm ok.no headache
P smiles with pain.He cud'nt bear the pain.He imagines
hugging M.song:kyonki…{kyonki}.but in reality,he did'nt
hav the guts 2 hug her.
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awwwww so sad 😭 but i know everything will get better.
Continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very touching and emotional part.... plzz cont sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
Part-23..Mukti thinks:Actually what is this luv?what I
feel 4 prem is luv?I always feel like having his
presense.yes,I'm in luv
M smiles:but I want 2 no whether he loves me.as he
does'nt like kali,he loves me?

Prem enters the room.P smiles M.M smiles.M is arranging
the books on the cupboard.she sings:dil mera poochraha
hai..tujse…kya pyar karoge kya..mujse…mujse…
M looks at P in btw.P turns his face back. P thinks:I no
that this song is 4 me.u r asking if I can luv u.u've
started luving me.i must b very happy abt it.but I don't
deserve u as I betrayed u spending a nite with
kali.we've 2 split up.but without ur knowledge,I'l help
u in ur operation.

P goes out.M is dull:Prem did'nt speak 2 me at all
P brings lunch 2 the room.P:mukti,hav lunch
M:why did u bring it here?
P:u must take rest.so u cant roam abt the place.
M:u r treating me like a patient.why shud I take rest?
P:DR said..
M:what did he tell?
P:he said,u r ok.but u need rest.
M:but I've already taken rest
P:ya,but as u r very thin,u need more rest
M:prem..u r teasing me
P laughs. M:did u hav lunch?
P lies:yes M:when?
P:wen I went out..
M:ok M extends her arm 2 take the plate. P:no,I'l
feed u
M feels funny & happy.But she pretends 2 b angry:why r u
pretending 2 b so caring?whats ur next intention?I don't
want u 2 feed me
P:u r a silly crazy girl.u luk really tired dammed.after
u become completely alright u can hav food even with ur
leg.till then I'l take care of u as I'm ur husband
atleast b4 others
M is dull.M thinks:so u want 2 b my husband only b4
others?
M:here no one is there.so why shud u fake in this room?u
need 2 fake only b4 public
P's voice is sharp:now open ur mouth
M opens her mouth.P feeds her.P's eyes r on M.M realizes
that.Msays in her mind with happiness:prem,u luv
me.but like all men,u don't want 2 admit failure
Song:kabhi na{koi aapsa}

P tells her:u r a gud girl.but due 2 misunderstanding,I
married u 2 avenge u.but I really regret.i don't want 2
giv u pain anymore.
M is happy. P:so we'l divorce soon.u must sign
immediately
M is shocked
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
Part-24
Mukti's eyes r filled up with tears.She turns back. M
thinks:prem,what did u do 2 me?I thot u won't go away
from me.but I was wrong.u don't luv me
Prem's eyes r full of tears & says in his mind:I no
whats there in ur mind.but I'm doing this 4 ur gud.u'l
get a better person.but I won't put u out of my heart.my
hear wil always b there with u.but b4 that ur surgery
shud happen.only then I can handle u 2 a gud guy
peacefully
P:there is no hurry.u can take ur own time 2 sign
P goes out.M wipes her tears.
M-P r sad & think abt the moments they spent
2gether.song:pyar humko bhi hai
Pyar tumko bhi hai….to ye kya silsila ho gayi


Mukti is sad & is sitting outside:how can I tolerate
this?plz God,help me 2 overcum this.i was so cool abt
divorcing him.Marriage & Divorce r silly things & its
common in balaji soaps.but in real life its not
silly.its very hard.its so painful.how r sum ppl
marrying & divorcing so easily?I cant imagine moving
away from prem?prem,plz cum near me & tell that u
don't want 2 divorce me
M's tears fall down.Prem cums singing:kiska hai tumko
intezar main hoona..
M smiles.Suddenly she realizes that it was only a
dream.M cries.P sees it from a long distance.He feels
sad:no,I cant wound her heart.afterall she's a
patient.happiness givs a patient overcum her disease
P cums.M wipes her tears. P:mukti,if u don't mind,can we
go 4 a date
M is surprised:I mean just 2 hav candlenite dinner
M smiles.P extends his arm.M holds it.

They r near the dining table.Only candlenite.All the
cuples r having candlenite dinner there.P's eyes r on
M.M becomes shy & she looks down.
There was announcement:Cuples can cum & dance.The best
cuple wil get prize
P:can we dance?
M did'nt no what 2 say
P:I no that we won't win.bcoz tho u r an experienced
dancer,I dunno anything abt it.i was'nt interested also
M:if u r not interested,then how cum u want 2 dance now?

P:I dunno.i feel like dancing with u
M smiles:but u r not a bad dancer.i've seen u dancing
during special occasions like our wedding function
P smiles. They both dance 2 gori..{main hoon na}
They announce the winner:the best dancing cuple is
Prem-mukti
They r surprised.They receive the prize.P talks:I just
cant believe that we r chosen as the best dancing cuple
as I'm an ignorant dancer.i must thank my wife 4 this as
its bcoz of her charming dance we won 2day
M smiles:I shud thank my husband,bcoz its he who took me
2 the dance floor.otherwise I wud'nt hav danced
M-P look at each other with a smile

They reach home.M is happy.P thinks:2day I realized 1
thing.i cant lose mukti at any cost.i want her 4ver with
me
Suddenly ph rings.P takes:hi I'm kali.i want 2 see u
P:no way Ka:but its urgent.
P:no.i'm 4getting my past.now only mukti is there in my
life
Ka:how can u 4get everything?I'm pregnant
P is shocked.M was hearing everything thru extension.her
receiver falls down.M is shocked.

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