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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Part-28..Prem tells in his mind:don't go mukti.cum back

Mukti:don't tell my parents abt it.they cant tolerate
it.i'm their only daughter.i'm their only hope.if that
is gone…
All r upset.M goes.P's tears fall down.

Anurag:I'm supposed 2 throw u out of this house.but I'm
not doing it.bcoz then wen Anand & nita ask,what answer
can I giv?
Prerna:only mukti is my daughterinlaw.don't dream that
u can liv happily with kali here.i'l never allow it
All turn their faces off & go.

Prem stares at kali:bcoz of u,I lost everything
Kali:bcoz of me?so u did'nt do any mistake?
P is speechless.P thinks:my only one mistake took
everything from me
P pushes Kali outside:go
Kali falls down.she gets up:u can throw me out 2day,but
not always
P is speechless.
Kali:u don't hav 2 b angry with me.its ur deed that
snatched mukti away from u 4ever
P cant bear anymore.he closes the door.

Mukti reaches home. Anand:u r alone?where is prem?
M:he is very busy.i wanted 2 spend sum days with my mama
& papa.that's why I came here
Nita smiles & hugs M.M thinks:wen my mama papa cum 2 no
it..?
M is going crazy.

Sneha is angry & cums 2 prem:I no that ur only aim was
2 hurt mukti.but this was too much.wen she started
having softcrner 4 u,u ..i no that it cant b full
cheating as u were very open in ur relation with
kali.but still u crossed ur limit & kali became pregnant
& thus mukti's heart is wounded
P:I don't luv kali.i dunno how it happened
P tells the circumstance in which he'd 2 spend with
kali.
P:now tell.i was completely wrong?I cant b 4given?
S is confused:but u were wrong.no excuse.its told that
ppl's real color cum out wen they r unconscious.so if u
did it wen u were unconscious that means..
P:enuf
P goes.

Mukti-Prem r in their rooms. P:I miss u mukti.i cant bear this
separation
M:how can I b separated from u prem?
They both sing:hai meri humsafar{QMQM}
Funk'n Desi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
👏 plz continue!!!i love your song choice tu jahaan main vahaan from salaam namaste!!
plz continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
Part-29...Sneha thinks:I've 2 speak 2 kali.but how can I
meet her?I don't know her number & dunno the way 2 go 2
her house
S is confused.

S is driving the car outside.She sees kali in a car.

S:that's kali?I think so

S follows K's car.Kali reaches her house & gets
inside.S parks the car outside & gets inside the
gate.she is at the verandah.

S hears kali's talk.she looks inside thru the
window.Kali is talking over the ph.S listens.
Kali is laughing:I've almost succeeded.i think I'm going
2 get prem 4ever.seena,did I tell u that I'l get
prem.see,my pregnancy drama gave me prem.
S thinks:pregnancy drama?
K:ya friend.i was never pregnant.infact nothing has
happened btw us.i'd put sleeping pills into his
juice.poor prem drank it & wen he got up,I made him
misunderstand that sumthing bad happened btw us.
S is shocked:that means prem is innocent?
K:he loves mukti very much.but I broke their
relation.they can never b reunited.now he has no other
option.he has 2 accept me,bcoz that fool thinks that I'm
pregnant with his baby
K laughs.
S is so angry that he enters inside & shouts:that'l
never happen kali
K is shocked 2 see her.
S:do u remember me?I'm prem's bhabhi as well as mukti's
best friend.i'm a gud friend.but I was never a gud
bhabhi.i never prem.but now I regret on my
harsh behaviour with kunal.u can never snatch prem from
mukti.bcoz they r made 4 each other.that's why sheetal
got a naughty idea that united prem-mukti.eventho they
were enemies,that turned into luv,bcoz god has decided
what 2 do.u cant fool us anymore.r'nt u ashamed of
this?u can only gain prem's body,not his heart.then
why?
Kali is upset.S goes.S sees sheetal on the
way.S:sheetal!shall I drop u?
Sh:thax.
S gets inside the car.Sh:ur cell is switched off?how many
times I & mukti tried 2 contact u
S:anything important?
S:ya.mukti's parents came 2 no everything.
S is shocked:what?
Sh:a new change is needed in her life.so they r sending
her 2 delhi.her uncle & aunty r there.she'l stay there &
wil try 4 a job.everything was sudden.now I'm coming
from the railway station.we both tried 2 call u from the
station 2 tell abt this.but ur cell..
S is shocked:what? mukti has left 2 delhi?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
very nice
i luv it
please cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
Part-30..Sheetal:ya.the train wil leave only after an
hour
Sneha:we hav 2 stop mukti
S:what?
Sn:yes.she shud'nt go.she shud b with prem
Sn explains what she saw at kali's house. S is
surprised:Oh my God!
Sn tries 2 contact mukti Sn:no range
Sn tries 2 contact prem.Sn:Oh!prem's cell is switched
off
S:I'l get down here & catch a taxi.i'l go 2 prem's
house & tell him.u go 2 the railway station
Sn:ok
S gets down.

That time the sad mukti was sitting inside the train &
weeping: where is my life going. song:kal ho na ho…


Sheetal goes 2 prem's house.She asks:where is prem?
Prerna:who r u?
Anurag:another gf?
S:plz,I want 2 meet prem immediately.its very
urgent.its abt his life
Prer:he himself has spoiled his life
S:no.his life has'nt spoiled.
S tells the truth.All r surprised.Prer weeps:Oh my son.i
mistook u
Slok:but prem bhayya is not here.
S:what? mukti wil soon leave 2 delhi.she's at the railway
station
Prer:Oh!
Tushar:Don't worry.we'l enquire where he is

Tushar & sheetal get inside the car & look outside 2 no
whether prem is seen
S sees Prem sitting on the beach. S: prem!
T stops the car & they go near him.
T:why r u sitting here?why did'nt u tell us where u were
going?u cud'nt atleast not sutched off ur ph
S:mukti is leaving 2 delhi now
P is shocked:what?
T:don't u want 2 stop her?
P is sad:I want 2.but how can I?
S:u can stop.kali was fooling u
S tells him the truth.P is shocked:what?oh my God!I
want 2 see her now
They all get inside the car.

Sneha reaches the railway station & sees Mukti inside the
train
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
aww tht was soo gd plz count
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
that was gr8, update again yaar!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Part-31....Sneha:mukti,cum out
M is surprised 2 see S & cums out. S:mukti,don't go.if u
go,premwil b alone
M:no.he has kali
S:how stupid.u no very well that prem does'nt luv
kali.but u r forced 2 believe the opposite
S tells her the truth.M is shocked. S:now don't go.
M:if premloves me,he'l cum here & stop me.if he
does'nt cum,I'l go

Prem's car is stuck up on the road due 2 heavy traffic
block.P:oh!

Announcement that the train is going 2 move.M is
upset:see,prem did'nt cum.i'm going
S is upset.M keeps her leg inside.suddenly she hears a
voice from behind:muktiiiiiiiiii
M turns back.that was prem.P is looking at her.M tells
in her mind:prem,tell me not 2 go
P's lips shiver:plz don't go
M is happy.but she hides that feeling:why?
P:bcoz I luv u,I need u
P cums closer.P takes her in his arm.M is stunned.He
keeps her down.P hugs her.M is surprised.P smiles.She
hugs him.All smile.

They go 2 their house.Prerna:get inside with the right
foot.this is the real grihapravesh
M-P smile & get inside.

M-P in their room.K removes her mangalsuthra.M is
shocked.P:this did'nt hav any meaning till now.our real
marriage is going 2 happen now
P ties it sround her neck.M smiles.He takes sindoor &
puts it on her maang.M smiles.
P:now,u r my wife
M:u r my husband
P:I cant believe that now I luv the person whom I used 2
hate most
M:even I cant believe it
P:do u luv me?
M:why r u asking like this?
P:it's a nice feeling wen u tell so.tell
M is shy:I luv u
P looks into her eyes deeply.M is so shy that she cant
look at his face.P smiles & hugs her
Song:bheegi..{Gangster}

THE END
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
is this the whole fan fics end because if it is then :'(
SFatima328 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
awwwww the its done/finished so sad it was such a good story(tip:u should have continued it with some romance and tiny fights or something like that 😆) but it was good thanks! and good job! 👏

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