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Posted: 19 years ago
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good start noorie way to gooooooo
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Main prem ki deewani hoon - part 1

Anurag and prem are at the airport making their way to india

anurag - prem u got da tickets to india?

prem - yes dad

anurag - ok pass me da tikets

prem *passes tickets*

anurag - im just oing to chek da timings

prem - ok dad

nice sxy hostress come past

prem whistles

hostress - um excuse me

prem - hey sxy

prem pulls her forward

hostress - nice......

anurag - prem bhetta come here!!!*shouts*

prem - uffff

hostress - omg"" u got a dad how iraratatin

hostress walks off

prem - dad!! kya!!

anurag - kuch nahi i didnt like dat hostress

prem - dad i was havin fun

anurag - what!! flirting isnt fun its onli fun wen ya

love da girl hoo u flirtin with

prem - oh come on dad dont tell me about u and prena mom
we will miss our flight

anurag - chup kar

anurags phone rings

anurag - hello

man - hi sir,

anurag - yeh

man - sir u cant go india

anurag - kya

man - ye sir we have a business problem its serious

anurag - ummm kya!! ok teek hain bye

prem - kya hua?

anurag - prem tum india joho i need to stay here business probs

prem - ohhh ok dad as u say

Prem arrives india!!

prem - hey sweety

*hair flikering**gucci sunglasses on*_nice top with a
mini skirt*

noori - hey babes!!

prem hugged noori

prem - oh noori i missed ya babe

noori - missed ya too

prem kissed noori

noori - so where you stayin?

prem - er i dunno maybe at a hotel

noori - stay with me at my flat

prem - ya sure

prem and noori went to the flat.

prem - uff im soo tired

noori - aww pass me ur bags and i will put them away u
just lie down on da sofa and relax

prem lay on da sofa

noori - do you want a nice hot choclate just like in
america wen me and you used to cuddle up with hot
choclate

prem - ye

noori made hot chocolate and cuddled up with prem on da
sofa

prem - i love you

noori - i love you too

noori kissed prem

*muktis house*

Mukti on da phone - sharad!!! tum na

sharad - kya!!! oh mukti i love you jaan!

mukti smiled

mukti - so sharad when you coming to meet me?

sharad - mukti my friend prem has come from america i
need to go and meet him we will both go and meet him ye

mukti - ya sure

sharad - we iwll go and meet him tomorrow he is stayin
at his gfs house

mukti - ya ok

sharad - ok jaane luv ya

mukti - luv ya 2 bye

Mukti disconected da phone

Next day!

noori wakes up next to prem on da sofa

noori - oh shit its 11 o clock need to go work and meet
dad

noori - prem!!! utou!!!

prem - noori !!*moans*

noori - its 11 dammit

prem - kya!!

noori and prem get up

noori got ready

prem freshen up

noori - acha prem im going work

prem pulled noori forward

prem - babes do u have to

noori - yes i do i have already took 1 week of work i
cant afford any more

prem - ok

prme kissd noori

noori - ok now let go of me i really need to go

prem let go

After an hour

bajaj went to noori house

bajaj rang the doorbell

prem opened the door

prem - kya hai

bajaj saw prem in his night clothes

bajaj - um is this flat number 12

prem- kya dekh nahi saktai *prem showed da number 12*

bajaj - um is this noori bajajs flat

prem - haan kyun?

bajaj - um ok i think i iwll go now

prem - go go!

prem closed the door

noori came home

noori - hey babes

prem - hey*kissed noori*

noori - so hows ya day been?

prem - what do ya think boring with out you!

noori - awww so sweeet

prem - oh yeh dis businessman came today he was asking for you i told him to get lost he looked freeky

noori - KYA!!! GET LOST!!

prem - haan kya hua?

noori - HE WAS MY DAD!!

prem - oh my GOD!

noori - oh shit wht were you wearin wen he saw u

prem - um night clothes

noori - aww noo

prem - dont worri i will apologise

noori called bajaj up

noori - hi dad

bajaj - hi u ok?

noori - ye im fine u?

bajaj - im fine i came ova today

noori interupted

noori - um dad tht ws prem u know my child hood friend
hes my boyfriend now

bajaj - oh

noori - um hes says sorri he didnt know it was u

bajaj - its ok bhetta

noori - thanx dad love ya

bajaj - love you too!!

noori - ok dad i better go

bajaj - teek hain bye

noori - bye

noori - phew dads ok about this

prem - phew!

noori hugged prem

prems mobile rang

prem - excuse me

prem - hello

sharad - hi yaar

prem - sahrad!!! tum

sharad - hi so you odnt mind me coming over to see you
do you>?

prem - no sure its 12 flat on george road mumbai

sharad - ok im comin

prem - see ya den

sharad - see ya

noori - koun tha

prem - well noori its my friend hes coming to see me is
tht ok?

noori - ya sure thts fine

To be continued

Plz plz comment on guys plzzzzzz

Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
heyy nooorriiii jaaaan u n prem hey 😉 wasnt shaurya enuffff 😉 lol i like it so far, keep up da gd work!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey noorie its really good wow good statring 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
mukti and prem look good together 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow great job plz continue!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Main Prem Ki Deewani Hoon – Part 2

*After 1 hour*

Noori opened the door

Noori - um I guess your sharad

Sharad- ya hi and this is Mukti

Just as sharad turned sideways he sees her running to
him from the elevator

Noori: your invisible girlfriend (Noori begins to giggle)

Then mukti appears

Mukti: nope arre noori

Noori: arre yaar tumne nahi paatya kay tumhara boyfriend
sharad tha

Then prem pops his head

Mukti: and you didn't tell me that prem was your
boyfriend

Sharad: can we come in now

Prerm: ya sorry Noori tum bhi nah u can talk inside

Meanwhile at Bajaj residents

Prerna is worried that prem hasn't come yet

(prerna or mr bajaj haven't seen prem and don't know what he looks like now)

Prerna: kaha hai prem uff auska flight kaal land hogya
tha aur abi nahi ayya its been all night Mr bajaj

Mr Bajaj: arre fiqaar maat karo shayed he has gone to see his friends and ended up staying the night

Prerna: uff i want to see him mr bajaj its been almost 20 yrs

Mr bajaj: i know leekan fiqaar maat karo he will be here soon

Prerna: ur so good to me I love you mr bajaj

Mr Bajaj: I love you too

Then they hug

Meanwhile at the flat

Noori: no way

Sharad: yep

Noori: but I have never seen you or anything

Sharad: well I was promoted to the 22nd floor so

Noori: oh lucky you

Sharad: thanks

Meanwhile Prem and Mukti are in the Kitchen

Mukti: so when did you and Noori meet

Prem: well we were childhood friends and then we ended
up falling in love

Mukti: aw so sweet

Prem: what about you and sharad

Mukti: it was love at first sight we meet in a caf I
was a waitress there

Prem: cool

Noori enters

Noori: hey guys that looks delicious prem

Prem: anything for u ( then he kisses Noori on the
forehead)

Noori: mukti um sharad is calling you

Mukti: oh ok then main abi aye

Noori: take your time

Then Noori kisses prem

Mukti: hey jaan

Sharad: hey

Then mukti sits on the sofa next to sharad

Sharad: you know Noori works at the same company as me
leekan she is on the 21st floor and I am on the 22nd
floor

Mukti: wow really

Sharad: yeh its so weird nah

Mukti: ya

20 mins later Noori, Prem, Mukti and Sharad are having
spaghetti bolognaise

Noori: mmmmmm prem this is delicious

Mukti: ya prem you are truly talented

Sharad: yep

Prem: thanks guys leekan Noori is my inspiration

Noori: so sweet

Meanwhile at bajaj residents

Prerna is getting ready for bed and Mr Bajaj is doing
paperwork

Prerna: arre Mr Bajaj app abhi paper work karee hoo

Mr Bajaj: haan prerna it's important I get this done

Prerna: leekan its too late kaal karna

Mr Bajaj: nahi prerna this has to be in by tomorrow

Prerna: fine whatever good night

Mr bajaj: arre naaraz hoo mere saath

Prerna pretends to be asleep

Mr bajaj: ok fine main tou kaam finish kiya main tou
tumhare saath mazaak kiya tha

Prerna: KYA

Mr bajaj: arre maine socha you were asleep

Prerna: very funny

Mr bajaj begins to kiss prerna's cheeks then her nose
then her lips then prerna gets up and runs to the
balcony and it begins to rain and she begins to dance
ayega maza abh barsaat kah from the film andaaz

Plz Plz Plz Plz Comment on

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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
plz guys read and comment on

Luvs Ya

Luv Noori
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woww its koooooooooooooooooooooooooooool 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
people make gud fanfic yaar carry on noorie

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