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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
hey noori looking good, continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
hey nice fan fic
count soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
woow nori...its really nice....plz plz continue
soon ok bye 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Main Prem Ki Deewani Hoon - part 3

*Next day*

Noori sees prem up and early and is shocked

Noori: arre prem you have woken up early

Prerm: yeh i am going to see mother india

noori: what mother india whos that

Prem: sorry i am going to see my mom

Noori: oh i see so ur excited huh

Prem: yeh totally i mean i haven't seen her for so long

Noori: ok well i am going to mom and dads

Prem: cool i will see you later

Noori: of course

Noori kisses Prem Goodbye

Meanwhile at bajaj household

Prerna: UFF mansook ajj mera beta arra hai aur tum bindi
bana rey hoo chalo tum jao main kuch bana thi hoo

Monsook: teek hai madam

Prerna: aajj main aloo gobi banao ghi for my son

20 mins later Mr bajaj enters

Prerna: arre mr bajaj app

Mr bajaj: mmmmh prerna the food smells delicious

prerna: really

Mr bajaj: yes mere jaan

Prerna smiles then the doorbell rings

Prerna: mera beta agya (she smiles)

Then prerna rushes to the door

Mr bajaj: sumbaal kay prerna

Prerna answers the door and its noori

Noori: hi prerna mom

Prerna: arre noori tum

Noori: haan main kyon kush nahi hoo

Prerna: yeh baath nahi hai beti maine socha tum

Noori interpts

Noori: i was your son

Prerna: yeh

Noori: its ok mom I understand anyways dad kaha hai

Prerna: kitchen mein admiring my aloo Gobi

Noori: chalo mein abi ayye I am tired and I wana rest

Prerna: teek hai beti

Noori rushes upstairs to her old bedroom and lies down
for a bit

Mr bajaj: arre Prerna koun tha daarwaza mein

Prerna: Noori woh tuk Gaye hai and gone for a rest upstairs

Mr bajaj: oh ok main baad main ausko baath karoga

Meanwhile Mukti and Shahrad are in the park mukti's head
is on shahrad's lap

Mukti: shahrad hunare shaadi kaab hoge and when will our
family agree that we will love each other very much

Shahrad: fiqaar maat karo mukti humare shaadi hoge sirf humara parivaar kay ijazaat chaye nah

Mukti: haan leekan mein tumse bohot pyar karte hoon aur mujhe koi ijazaat chaye

Sharad: it's not like that mukti mujhe yakeen karo

Mukti: paata nahi kya karon abh mujhe jaana hai dad said to be home early

Sharad; mukti lishen to me

Mukti walks off

Sharad: kyon kismat hai aisa humara

Mukti hides behind a tree and cries

Mukti: yeh kaun sa nayee khel hai yeh humare liye KYON
DAMNIT (she cries)

Meanwhile In America anurag is in a meeting

Anurag: yes mr Garcia I look forward coming to Spain soon

Mr Garcia: I can't wait do come mr basu (Spanish accent)
Then his mobile rings

Anurag: excuse me mr Garcia

Mr Garcia: take your time (Spanish accent)

Anurag: hello

Prem: hi dad

Anurag: arre prem how are you beta

Prem: i'm fine dad aur app

Anurag: i am fine just finaliing a deal

Prem: thats great dad anyways i am going to see mother
india

Anurag: mother india woh kaun hai beta

Prem: arre prerna mom

Anurag begins to remember prerna and the red dupatta going over his face

Prem: DAD HELLO

anurag: huh oh um teek hai beta i have to go now

Prem: ok dad bye

Prem makes his way to bajaj house

Meanwhile at bajaj household Noori is thinkin about prem and begins to phone him

Noori: kaha ho tum

Prem: acha no hi bas kaha ho tum

Noori: woops sorry jaan hi jaanu abh kaha ho

Prem: i'm in the car makin my way to mom's house

Noori: oh i see

Prem: ok sono i am there now so i will see u later jaan

Noori: ok bye

Then the doorbell rings and prerna rushes to the door with a tray (sorry don't know wat its called) and opens the door and smiles

Prerna: prem

Prem: mother india i mean mom

Prerna smiles and puts a tikka on prem

Prerna: aao come In now tell me where were you since
yesturday you got me so worried

Prem: sorry mom i stayed at um my friends hous

Prerna: oh acha teek yaha rooko i want you to meet
somebody

Prem smiles

Then prerna makes her to mr bajaj's office

Prerna: mr bajaj prem is here come and meet him

Mr bajaj: really chalo

Mr bajaj fellows prerna to meet prem

Prerna: prem beta

Mr bajaj frowns and thinks is he the same prem noori
told him about and prem turns around and is shocked to
see mr bajaj and so is mr bajaj

To be continued

wats goin to happen now?????????????

Lots Of Luv

Noori XxXxXxXx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
noori thanks a lot for updating this yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
😛 yhhhhh u updated 😛 thx 😛
count soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
another fan fic i am going crazy yaar
u guys are super duper writter

wowo

u guys reallyu have talent
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
you should continue but I want prem be with mukti

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