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Posted: 19 years ago
sukhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii u r just tooooooooooooooo gooooooooooood,but why am i saying it ,u already know it 😆 😆 😆 that how much crazy i m abt ur stories 😉 and bythe way others also i reallllly like ur story alsooooooooooooooooooo
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks yaaron..I will continue soon:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8888888 Sukhi! 👏 👏
And sorry guys 4 being late n pardon me again!I will post the later part in evening....Now I will have to log-out 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok!Finally I am!
Rishabh is angry with Prerna...still the next day Rishabh couldn't cancel the programme of sea-beach as there was nothing to do in his office as he had postponed them!!
In the beach-hotel they had a ROMANTIC LUNCH as Rishabh had planned b4!Prerna is overwhelmed seeing this!She just remained looking at Rishabh in both loving n guilty manner but never Rishabh was seeing her!She is upset with his anger!
At the end they sits on sands in the beach.Prerna put her hands around Rishabh.Rishabh looked at her weirdly as if what she was doing!Prerna was looking at Rishabh when he turns away his look elsewhere!
Meanwhile suddenly Prerna saw a girl of abt mid-age sitting at a lil distance was constantly looking at them!Prerna ignored that at first!But again n again she observed that the girl was constantly watching them!She sharpens her eye-sight n discovered that she was actually looking at Rishabh!!Prerna was disturbed but could tell nothing to Rishabh as she knew that he won't listen to her!She was feeling impatient n awkward n gets up n as she was gazing that lady,unconsciously she holds Rishabh's hands n pulls him with gr888 force! Rishabh was taken aback at hwhat she was doing.He asks Prerna 'What the hell r u doing?Leave my hands!'Prerna got her senses n looked at him n tells 'Nothing.Actually I wanna leave the place!'Rishabh is again surprised 'Then where r we going?'Prerna says 'Nowhere!'as she was not in her sense fully due to anger!Rishabh says 'What?????Nowhere!!!???'Prerna tells 'Actually....Ok!Come with me!Pls I wanna leave this particular place right now!'
Rishabh assumes that something is wrong n never protests her!Prerna leads him to a rock n both of them sit there!Rishabh again asks what the matter is!But Prerna looks here n there as if trying to find something!And soon sees that lady with an olderly person coming towards them!Prerna is highly irritated!Again after sometime she finds that lady repeating that behaviour!And she got out of her head n firmly turns to Rishabh n asks him 'Do u love me Mr.Bajaj?'Rishabh is shocked at this ques n asks 'Whay?I mean...suddenly this type of Ques!'Prerna is in not-to-listen-anything state!She gets close to him n tells 'If yes,then hug me right now!'Rishabh is 😕 n tells 'Right now????B4 every1?In this beach?'Prerna is frustrated n pulls Rishabh near her,closes her eyes n began to snug him in his shoulder!Rishabh is embarrassed n tells 'What r u doing Prerna!'n was trying to push her!But Prerna hugged him ever so tightly n continues to do that naunces!After a while she opens her eyes n finds that still that lady was watching them!She suddenly pushes Rishabh away n gets up!Rishabh could not understand anything!Prerna straightly goes to that lady n asks her 'What the hell is ur problem?Why r u constantly following us!Can't u understand that He is my HUSBAND?Is this the way to look at other's husband!'
Prerna finds that the lady wasn't watching at her n neither resonses to her attitude.She is more furious!She then asks the person that why isn't she listeneing at her!That man was too confused n tells Prerna that The lady is squint-eyed n as well as deaf!So she isn't responsing to her!
Prerna is soooooo embarrassed at her behav n was speechless due to shame!Rishabh was standing nearby her n comes forward n tells that man 'I am sorry 4 my wife's behav.We r extremely sorry 4 the inconveniences!Pls forgive us!'He handled all the situation n the man went with that lady!Then he turns back to Prerna n Prerna was sooooo ashamed that she couldn't gaze at him!Rishabh gives her an ANGRY look n lives that place in ANGER!Prerna remained thinking 'GAwwwwddd!I came here to clear the misunderstanding n what happened???? 😡 'She followed her hubby in a gloomy state!
To be continued....
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was so funny& cute 😳
namzy is right, u guys are geniuses! can give kekta's writer team a run for their money man..should compile all this at the end when u are done & sticky it as short romantic stories of the Bajaj couple 😳

with that said..continue on..we fellow fans are loving every moment of it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks guys 😳 😳 And will do it soon! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awww...this is really cute Guddi. 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
This is great.

Dear Moderator Sukhi, please make a sticky of these short stories. They are fabulous. We must preserve these stories so that even the new fans can read when they join here.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok!Posting the rest 1....
Prerna follows Rishabh n sits in the car!She was too ashamed n keeps him givinh those guilty looks!Rishabh never looks at her!
At the way storm starts.Rishabh increses the speed.Still in mid-way their journey stopped due to falling of a tree in the road!Rishabh-Prerna get out from the car n runs to a nearby BUNGLOW!That bunblow was of a Panjabi-couple!But already the rain had started n they were fully drenched!The Panjabis saw them n comes out of the house!They were standing in the lounge!And on their request to take shelter there,they both agreed as both of them couldn't find any notation of stopping the rain!
The panjabis gave them a separate room with a fire-place!Prerna put the fire on n finds that Rishabh was nowhere in that room!She was worried!She rushed to the door n peeps n finds none!She ran to the window n saw Rishabh standing in the rain outside!Prerna understood that Rishabh did this 4 he was angry with her n didn't want to stay with her in that room!Prerna felt sad!N almost began to cry!
The Panjabis came to the room to ask them if they need anything!N they finds Prerna crying standing beside the window!They go the window n sees Rishabh there!They understood everything!They came down n tells Rishabh 'Why r u standing here?'Rishabh tells 'No,4 nothing....'The man tells 'Understood.Husband-wife fight!Arre this happens everywhere n u r punishing urself 4 this?'Rishabh was confused.The man again tells 'Ur wife was saying that ur health isn't in proper condition!Still u r drenching n causing trouble to both of ur health n ur wife?See her,she is standing there n crying 4 u!Go n otherwise I will drive away from my house in this rain if u cause suffer my Bhabhiji!'
Rishabh smiles n goes to the room!They both sit in the opposite direction to each other!Prerna was looking constantly at him with guilty looks!And this time Rishabh too often was watching her!N each time being caught was turning his face away in other direction!N after a while,he finds Prerna shivering in cold!He gets up n brings a blanket from the couch n goes nearer her n covers her up.Then goes to his place n sat again!Prerna was looking at him,n after sometime she finds him too shivering in cold!She walks to him n covers him up with that blanket!Rishabh was trying to refuse that but at last Prerna did it forcibly n sat beside him!Silence reigned at that place!

Then after sometime Prerna broke the silence 'Mr.Bajaj,I know whatever I did was ashaming,but u know what Mr.Bajaj....I lost everything in my life!I lost my Prem!Then Anurag!Then I was abt to lose my Sne**!And again I lost my Prem!Each time I felt the pain of fear of losing!And today whatever I have is only becoz of u!God gave me chance to live my life again through sending u in my life!And this time I really never don't want to feel the fear of losing u again!If I depart with u ever,then it would be the last day of my life!Everything I can have partly,but the 1 thing I wanna posses fully,the only thing I can say 'is only mine' is u!I never ever wanna lose u Mr.Bajaj.'
Her eyes were all teary n voice was getting chocked!Rishabh was looking at her all the time n her eyes were on the fire!Then Rishabh holds her chin n looked straight to her eyes 'Prerna,U r fearing to lose me!U know Prerna for the first time I fell in love,all I thought that I am the happiest person of the world!All I wanted was u to be with me all the time!All I needed was ur love n smile to make me happy!But everything changes with time!And this time too!And I am happy with the changes coz I never knew that the best was yet to come!Never knew that Life has stored this 4 us!Never knew that our relations has yet to take a greater dimensions!N never knew I could love u more that ever!I Believe me Prerna.I do.And when the love is increasing day by day,why will we get separated.Remember 1 thing Prerna that WORLD can stop MOVING,TIME can forget to PASS,SUN can stop RISING,but there is n will be a man who will continue loving u forever.N that's Rishabh BAjaj.'
Prerna is overwhelmed with happiness n holds his hands tightly!Rishabh smiles n holds her n places her in his arms!They both continued their hug vever so passionately!
There were rainfalls outside!The room was dark!The fire was burning be4 them!And the most PASSIONATE couple kept on feeling the charms of being in each other's arms:)))))
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The End
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG...that was chooo chweeeeeet 😳 all those lines which Rishabh told Prerna made my heart melt. 😳 😆.
That was really cute.Gr8 story. 👏

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