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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAPTER EIGHTEEN


INTRODUCTION

It was hard for Prerna to stand by her decision...it was suffocating her😭.And unaware of all this Nihaal was very happy dreaming about his future with Prerna😳.Deepika was trying to cope with the reality😊...and Saksham had some plans...😕

Scene 1 : Terrace

Nirmalyam


Nihaal leaves her in a trance standing there gaping at him...whom she's goin to lose for ever.😭😭😭She could bare no more and weeps out her heart and looks at the two stars😭...

"Oh, Nihaal!!😭I can't break your dreams...I can't sacrifice you...I just can't...Deepika I am sorry,but I can't forget him.He shall die without me."

She finally realises that sacrificing her love would spoil three lives,and she couldn't bare to see Nihaal unhappy,let alone heart broken😭😭.

She stands there gaping at the night sky...happy at the decision she has made.Nihaal comes from behind and closes her eyes😳.

"Nihaal ,what are you doing?😊😕"

"Calm down...when i ask you to open your eyes,open them?Alright!!😳"

"But...😕"

"Sssshhh!!Just do as I say...😊"

"Okay baba!!😳"

"Alright,now open your eyes...😳"

She opens her eyes and sees a beautiful shining chain and a sparkling locket attached to it .😃😕😕

"Prerna ...this is for you.."😃😃

"Nihaal...this looks very expensive...I can't take this..."

"Prerna...this isn't much expensive...I was saving money for this from my pocket money."

He picks it up and goes behind her.She turns and looks at him with love😳😳...

He slides her hair locks from the back of her neck and puts them over her shoulder😳.He then ties the chain to her neck.😳😳

He then whispers into her ears,

"Prerna I love you😳...and this chain will always make you realise that I'm always with you..."

Prerna turns and hugs him with tears...Nihaal smiles and hugs her too...

"Pagli...why are you crying???Tonight is not for crying...it's the night we must celebrate our love..."


Scene 2 : The river

Nirmalyam


They go to the river flowing behind the house and enjoy the pale glowing moonlight glimmering in the river water😳😳...They both stand close to each other holding their hands😳😳😳.

"I promise you Prerna...in the presence of the billions of stars,the moon,the night,the river and everything here...that I'll love you till my death and even after my death...😳"

Prerna closes his mouth with her fingers😭😭...and tears roll down her cheeks...

"Nihaal...I cannot live without you...😭Don't ever leave me..."

They stood there for minutes wrapped in each others arms...with the cool breeze humming tunes of love...😳


Scene 3 : Terrace

They both are sitting on a small couch on the terrace😳😳...

"Nihaal...Deepika must be searching for me...now I must go...😕😕"

"Not now...don't go please...😕😕"

"Nihaal...I was with you for so long...now I must go...it 8:30...and I promised Pappa...I'll be home before 9..."

"Alright...jao"

She smiles at his grumpy face😆...and holds his face in her arms,

"Gussa ho😳...I promise...next time I'll stay for long...and waise bhi tomorrow we are meeting in the college...chalo smile...mere Nihaal ki tarah...😳😳😳"

He turns and looks at her passionately😳...she takes her hands off his face,and looks down...shyly...He holds her hand and kisses it😳...and comes close to her and kisses her on her blushing pink cheek😳😳😳...She shyly throws the bolster on him and gets up smiling😳😳😳...He holds her hand and comes close to her😳...

"Nihaal...please jaane do...koi aa jayega😳😳😳"

But,he just won't leave her...

Suddenly someone comes there and they both are startled...


Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Too Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh right now I'm like 😳 and 👏!!!!!!!!
Awesome can't wait until the last part!!!!! please do write soon and good luck with college!!!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14

Too Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh right now I'm like 😳 and 👏!!!!!!!!

Awesome can't wait until the last part!!!!! please do write soon and good luck with college!!!!!😊

Thanks a lot!!!! 😃
😃
SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
awww such a lovely update😳 phew she changed her mind im soooooo overjoyed!!!!🥳
wanna read more its my drug.😆..lol
keep rocking!👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Ur Welcome! please write soon dying to the rest and about how much of the story is left?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: SaJanLuv14

Ur Welcome! please write soon dying to the rest and about how much of the story is left?

I'll update soon when i get time...right now very busy...the exam dates are yet to be announced...and internal exams cud explode any time...a lot of extra classes and what not???Someone puh-lee-zzz stab me!!!!!😆😆😆don't take it seriously...am a bit crazy!!!!😆and about the end...even i dunno...i just move along with the story as it comes into my mind.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noha450

awww such a lovely update😳 phew she changed her mind im soooooo overjoyed!!!!🥳

Really....thanks a lot my cutie pie...sis😃

wanna read more its my drug.😆..lol
keep rocking!👍🏼

DRUG...You make me remember KEAT's ODE to a NIGHTINGALE...

where he narrates of dozing into a state of drowsy numbness on hearing the nightingale's song."as though of hemlock i had drunk,or have emptied some dull opiates into my drains".😃😃😃

I'm a lot busy...gone crack with my exams hovering over my mind...🤢I'll update soon in what ever small time i get.

luv
PJ😃

Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sorry for the late reply..
was busy with work..
wow so many emotional paartts..
loved themm
thank god that she is not giving him up!
loved the taare scene!
so cute!
cant wait for the next part continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey sorry for the late reply..

was busy with work..


Totally understand😃
wow so many emotional paartts..
loved themm
thank god that she is not giving him up!
loved the taare scene!
so cute!

Thanksssss😃
cant wait for the next part continue soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
CHAPTER NINETEEN


INTRODUCTION




Prerna realised that the decision she took was utterly wrong,she realised she could not live even for one moment without thinking about him,let alone leave him forever.Deepika was her best friend,and she knew it was very hard for her to accept the truth that Nihaal loves someone else,but she also knew that if that someone was her,she would feel happy for her and would move on in her life...

...The night was splendid⭐️⭐️⭐️,and the breeze lisped love odes in their ears😳😳😳...taking them to the mysterious world of love...They stood their lost in their dreams😳😳😳...when suddenly😲...


Scene 1 : Terrace

Nirmalyam


They both were starled and looked at the doorway.It was Nihaal's mother,Gauri Shastri.

"Ma..."😕

She came close to Prerna,who was trembling with fear and looked at her😕😕.Prerna was scared and she released his hand😕...She looked down😕😕...

"Prerna...so,this is why you always came here...You know what you've done..."

"Aunty...I'm really sorry...I...I..."and she starts crying😭

Nihaal holds her hand and she looks at him ,nervous and confused.Nihaal assures her with his look that everythibg is fine.

"Prerna..." calls Gauri

"Beta...don't feel scared...Nihaal told me everything...I know you both love eachother...and 'am really happy to know my son's choice..."

She then blesses them both and leaves😃😃.

Nihaal smiles at her and she hugs him😳

After some time...they hear Deepika's voice calling her.

"Nihaal,I must leave now...or she'll see us together.😕😕😕"

"So,what??Waise bhi now you are going to be mine forever...she has to know it some day,then why not now."

"Nihaal,please try to understand...I don't want to shock her😕😕😕,i'll explain everything to her later...Bye...I must leave...See you tomorrow in college.😳😳"

He holds her hand and pulls her towards him😳😳😳...takes both her hands around her waist and holds her close to him😳😳...his eyes full of passion😳😳...and her eyes full of love.😳

"Nihaal!!...let me go..."😳

"First,you'll have to give me something..."

their was a naughtiness in his eyes.😆😆😳

"What???"

"You know what?"😳

"Nihaal...no way ...not now...I'm going..."

But,before she could go...Nihaal suddenly cries out loudly pointing to the sky...

"Oh!! look at that..."

She looks up...and he kisses her softly on her lips.She stands there mesmerised for a few moments and then shyly runs away from him...😳




Little did she know that a terrible fate was waiting to be unleashed upon their love.




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