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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
nice ff 😛 ....
jai past was sad 😭 ....but wats bani's past 😕
plzz cont.soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
nice title seguested by Kanta, hey g8t update, really emotional part of Jai's life
cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Thank you, I appreciate all of you taking the time to drop a comment.

A special thanks to Divan, Chickster and Pooja1_76 for suggesting names for this ff.

The name of this ff is now going to be Justajoo, which was suggested by Chickster.

BD

Edited by bdev - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Justajoo i like it more.

or like Destiny will never change

pooja
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Thank you for all your comments, loved everyone of them.😀

Special thanks to Chickster for the title.Thumbs%20Up
CHAPTER 4A

Jai stood at the airport, breathing in the warm Mumbai air. He had missed this place, the smells, the sounds, the buzz he felt everytime he was here. But, his heart felt heavy. He didn't really want to come back home. He had made up countless excuses for not being able to come, but when he heard Anu's voice on the phone, all of them seemed to evaporate. She had become his weakness over the years, and when she asked him whether he was coming to meet her, all he could said was yes. Anu's flight had landed three days ago, he had delayed his arrival as much as possible, but he had promised her that he was going to be there today for her babyshower, and then stay for a week.

He stared at the limo that was waiting in front of his private jet, unsure of whether he could do this, whether he could face his past. He felt numerous conflicting emotions at the same time, and he could feel himself getting weaker by the second. But, then Anu's face flashed in front of him, and he was on his way home.

Krishna kept staring eagerly out of the window, waiting for Jai.

Mom, please relax. Bhaiya will be here soon, Anu said, muching on some hot pakoras.

Anu had been having a lot of cravings lately and was glad to be back home. Krishna and Bani indulged her in every way. She liked Bani, she was very sweet, and she loved the way she help take care of everyone in the family. She got along great with Rano, though they were a few years apart in age, it didn't stop them from forming a great bond. She didn't know much about them, except that Bani was a widow, and they had nobody except each other. Anu felt sorry for them, she couldn't imagine anyone turning away such nice, loving people and especially a wonderful kid like Aman. He was just a year and a half old. She giggled thinking about him, he was probably the naughtiest kid she had ever met, but he always had an angelic smile, that it was had not to laugh at his antics. She was always curious to know more about their lives, but Bani never spoke about her past, and although Rano's dislike for them was evident when she would occasionally pass a comment about them, she never really said anything else.

A loud honk bought her out of her thoughts. She saw her mom immediately get up and run into the temple. Anu walked to the door, and opened it. She saw Jai walking up, and she wobbled towards him as fast as she could and hugged him, catching him by suprise.

You should be taking it easy Anu, he said gently, patting her affectionately.

Please bhiaya now don't start. Ma has already given me long lectures, she said pouting.

Jai smiled at her childishness. They walked together to the entrance, where he saw Krishna standing with a thali. Jai felt uncomfortable, but for some reason, he stood still. Krishna began the aarti, and then out of habit raised her hand to put the tikka, but stopped midway. Jai looked at her for a moment, and found himself lowering his head towards her. He felt her hand touch his forehead, and then looked up to see Krishna smiling at him and tears clouding her eyes. She gave him the prasad and moved so he could come in with Anu.

Okay bhaiya, you go freshen up, then you can join me in eating pakoras, she said walking towards her half eaten plate. He nodded and looked at Krishna, she was looking at him intently, he gave her a small smile and walked upstairs.

He sat on his bed, and took in a deep breath. He was still hurting, but he couldn't really be angry with her anymore. She looked so much like his mother, and he couldn't deny the fact that she was a wonderful mother to Anu. He had tried to convince himself other wise, but it had all come crumbling down when he had seen her crying at Anu's wedding, the vision of that kept haunting him these last few days. He had imagined his mother doing just that. He was sure he could never have a great realationship with her, but he deicded that at least he could be civil with her.
He then began to unpack his bag, when he heard a child giggling. He turned around and was suprised to see a boy peeking through the door. He wondered who he was, but couldn't help but smile at him. As soon as he did that, the boy hid his face behind the door. The child peeked in again, trying to hide himself and just peering in.
Hi there, are you hiding from me? Jai asked. The boy just giggled and hid himself again.

The next time when he peered in, Jai ran towards him. The kid squelaed in delight and went behind the door. Jai jumped out and hugged him, screaming 'caught you', only to find he had caught a woman by her legs instead, causing her to almost trip.

She looked at him scared off her wits. He immediately let go of her.
I am sorry, I was just......., he pointed to the kid who was now catching her leg and giggling at him.
The lady gave a small embarrassed smile, and said its okay. I am Jai, he said. Bani, she said smiling at him. Before she could say anything else, the boy started to run. Excuse me, she said running behind Aman. Bani glanced at him and saw him running in his hand through his hair looking horribly emabrassed. She couldn't help but smile.

Jai smiled to himself and walked into the washroom to freshen up. He stared at the mirror and wondered who the woman was. He had never seen her before. She had a beautiful serene face, and a beautiful smile, it seemed so genuine, so pure, there was not an inkling of pretence anywhere about her. Her son, he was just aorable. Jai never really spent time around kids, but there was something about him that was just so captivating. He chuckled remembering the scene before. The boy sure did have an infectious laugh. He felt his heart suddenly feel lighter at the thought of the two of them, it was like a refreshing breeze in the hot arid weather.

He was bought out of his thoughts by a knock at the door. Come in, he said, walking out to see his father walk in.
Hello papa, he said.
Uday smiled at him, hello beta.
Jai walked up to him and bent down to take his blessings. Uday felt emotional, Jai had stopped doing that after his mother died, infact he mostly avoided him after that. He felt choked up and hugged him. Jai felt his eyes get misty.
Uday then turned to leave and on his way out said, It's good to have you home beta.
He entered his room and saw Krishna waiting for him. He smiled at her, a big burden seemed to have lifted off of him, his Jai had come back. He sat down with her and she leaned her head on his shoulder, both savoring the moment.
BD
Edited by bdev - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
wowow1!! just read the whole thing!!! it was amazing!!!!
👏🏻very interesting with the little twist w/krishna and jai and bani w/a kid
can't wait to see how it will come all together!!!! pls cont sooon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Bdev,
Your most welcome 🤗
That was a great update - I can't wait to see how the relationship between Jai, Bani and Aman develops.
Keep updating 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Hey amazing update... Jai/Bani/Aman...hm...very cute I liked the moment between Jai and Uday Jai is being civil...Great Anu preg... Nice Update!!! Update soon Nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Ooooooh well :) JW is pighaling like ice cream huh... Thats the effect Bani and this child have on him... I wonder if he will realize that if he loves Aman then he is almsot in the same position as Krishna, and maybe forgive? Looovely udpate :) Some cutie JB moments are a must .. but Im sure you will show.. wonderful ff... hope you update dil se too.. LOL is that a hint or what?😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
hey BD .........😜........................nice update....................pls cont sooooooooooooooooooooooon

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