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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#91

Heloo Ji,

my dil goes dhak dhak after reading this, 😳 😳 😳 that was just prefect,the whole atmosphere,to their small talks,to Jai tellin her abt what he feels abt her to her takin the first step.soo sweet and mushy mushy.me want loads loads more.will be eagerly waitin. 👏

preet 😳

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ferns82

@ferns82

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Posted: 17 years ago

#92

hey great update kanta, loved the beach scene

pls update soon

ferns

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#93

Loved how Jai is giving Bani her space and they are both starting off on anote of friendship 😳 😳

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Twinkle20

@Twinkle20

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Posted: 17 years ago

#94

Sighs...More mushhhhh 😳
👏

Beautiful work once again...No demands except more mushhhh 😉 😳

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HKK

@Hkaurk22

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Posted: 17 years ago

#95

Umm.. theres a puddle on the groudd... and the puddle is me! Haila what mushiness... she will never leave him.. Their date was... *perfect*. Seriously, so simple and serene and they prob realize how wonderful each other is.. LOOOOVELY part.. I want more mushiness... maybe a second date? Or maybe how they are after a couple dates! Or bani realizing what she feels 😳 I dont know... you're so creative you will come up with something uber mushy :) and I cant wait to read it :)