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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi ppl thanx for the support and comments....please do keep commenting...here is the next part hope you guys like...its short...now im thinking of finishing this SS soon...thanx for the support...

Ch8

Massi looked at jai and give him a warm smile...as massi sat down at her place bani came in...she looked straight at jai...and she smiled and sat next to him...the movie was still on and it was Golmaal Returns everyone setting there watching the movie and enjoying...jai looked at bani so does bani...they stared at each other...everyone started laughing at a funny scene...and the jb break up their staring session...they also join in the laughter...jai and the others were so engrossed in the movie...roshani occasionally looked toward jai...bani hate it but she couldn't do anything really...then idea popped in her head...she smirked at roshani...she moved closer to jai...more liking leaning on to him...jai was surprised but he kept quiet and waited for bani's next move...roshani didn't like that...every time she looked at jb...bani would snuggle more closer to him as to say he is only mine and you mind your own business...jai was utterly surprised...this was so new...it has never happened before...bani what was wrong with her thought jai...he looked at her and how peaceful she looked in his arm...jai shook his head and continued watching the movie...

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For the next few days everything for jb seemed good...bani like a good wife did everything for jai....start from morning tea, taking his clothes out...give him his other things...admire him when he is getting dressed giving him his breakfast etc...the family was surprised though not everyone because most of them knew how bani cared for jai...it was defiantly shocking for jigz and roshani because for them it looked more than a caring...

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Yeh ladki sumajthi kiya hai aapne aap ko....said angry roshani...oh coomon rosh...yeh there is nothing what you think...said jigz...didnt you see that...almost shouting roshani said...i mean did you see how she is behaving around jai...im sure this cheap girl is up for something...said roshani...i did rosh i did see everything...even im thinking now that something is going on...and im surprised...what is wrong with jai bhiya he hated her few days back and now...said jigz looking into roshani's direction...thats what im trying to say something is not right....i will never let her get jai from me...said roshani promising her self...

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On the other hand jai is amused with bani's this behaviour...however he likes it...it feel great when someone looks after you with so much love and affection...the last time someone so much cared about him was his late mother...who died and left him alone...all alone in this world...a tear roled down his cheek....

Jai tumhai pata hai meeting bas das minute shruhogi...barged in aditya...

Jai looked up...wiped the tear...smiling at his friend...ha off course i remember...said jai getting up his..

Im sorry jai...is everything fine...asked a concerned aditya...

Yeh everything is fine adi...said jai...bus maa ki bari mai such rahithi....adi placed his hand on jais shoulder...kiya baat hai...tum pheli to kabhi aunty ki bari mai nahi socha tha per achank yeh sub...questioned aditya...nothing yaar i just...umm i guess im missing her alot...i feel like she is here somewhere, very close but she doesn't want to see me...said a broken jai...common yaar dont tell me your imagining people now...you know its nothing like that smiled adi...or per i have noticed lately that something has changed about you ha kiya huraha hai baye...new shaddi huahi kahi iska chakar tu nahi na...said teasing adi...poor jai blused like anything...yakeen mano jai im happy..really happy...im glad that im seeing a smiling jai now days...said adi....jai give him a 'shut up look' look...poor adi went quite...guess its time for me to leave...as adi walked towards the door...he opened the door...and looked back at jai...bani bahut hai achi ladki hai...you know that right...winked adi and closed the door behinf him...jai blushed again...adi is right thought jai...bani is really nice...great person, with good heart and a great wife too...jai stop now before you get late for meeting said jai to himself and laughed at his thoughts....

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do comments....

Edited by SonamKHAN - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sonam.. great part yaaar.. continue sooon.. but yeh kya this was such a short part.. how were ur exams?? i have one today.. lol.. anywayz continue sooon yaaar with a longer update.. and if u want i can murder roshni and jigz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr88 part
mina dear
loving this changed bani
jigs and rosh are shocked seeing the change in jbs relation
plzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you gals for liking it....
im really upset at the moment cuz of davia...hope she gets well soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey mino....
great part....
bani was trying to make roshni feel jealous😆....that was funny😆
loved it...
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im loving this changed bani
gr8 part
do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is so different from the typical Bani.......nice part.....please continue.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dear frinds thank you so much for your support and lovly comments...like i said earlier that im finishing this ss soon...but i dint really knew that soon...anways...hope you all enjoy the LAST PART...i tried to make it nice but somehow my brain was died today...especially when i read the post about daiva...i laterally cried for her....i felt miserable...the real reason that im ending this ss is because i have run ot of ideas now...when i started this ss/ff i planned alot of thing and had lot of ideas...but now i dont have any.... i know im really bad writer but still i tried my level best to be as accurate as possible... hope you guys like this part and the epi...even if you dont comment today i wont mind...because its finished now anyways...but please do pray for davs....sorry if it is boring...

Note: the walia's have returned back to the WM...

Ch9

As usual bani send lunch for jai and adi uncle...in home the lady's sat there to have their lunch...roshani come to kitchen where bani was helping tony in food preparation ...kiya baat hai bani...aaj kal tum bahut haisub ki khaiyal rakthi hu...said roshani...of course roshani ji...yeh tu har bahu ka farz hai ko woh aapne family ka khaiyal rakhi...so im just fulfilling my duty...said bani...ziyada baanie ki koshish mat karna bani...said irritating roshani...app kehna kiya chathi hai..questioned bani...you know what im trying to say...said roshani....ummm one thing i know...bani moved closer...that your very stupid and shamless woman...and you know what i have never seen a shamless woman like you...heay dont you dare...tried roshani..pointing her finger at bani....SHUT UP....i know what your aim is...but trust me you will never succesed because i will never allow you to do so...or ha agar todhi se sharm hai tujmai tut um yahase chup chap chali jaogi...said bani and left a dazed roshani...

How dare her...how dare her say this to me thought roshani...now watch me bani what i will do rust me this time...your flying really high right...this flying is just for few days now and then it will be me and jai and i promise that i will make him mine...VERY SOON...said roshani and left the kitchen...

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In the evening when jai and adi arrived roshani run to jai and hugged him and then kissed him on the cheek infront of everyone...jai was surprised and the others were disgusted bani looked form the kitchen and as she saw that she felt sick,...she run to her room leaving everyone...roshani and jigz exchanged looks and grinned...massi looked at jai...jai knew what massi's look meant....he left the setting room walked towards their room...

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How dare him letting her kiss him like this thought bani...as she wiped her tear...the flashback of that scene keep coming to bani...she felt lost...the click of the bedroom door brought her back...she knew it was him...let him come im not scared of him...i need an explainiation...thought bani....jai knew she was upset...he approached her slowly...he wasn't sure of what to say....sighing he said...bani...deko isa kuch bhi nahi hai....mai nahi janthi roshani ne isa kiyu kiya..but trust me i didn't do anything...pleas im sorry...pleaded jai....bani's heart almost dropped as she heard her mighty husband apologising to her...getting no response from him jai turned to leave....but bani hold his hand....he stopped and turend around to look at bani...their eyes meet...god knows for how long they keept staring at each other looking at each other's eye...bani was still in tears....jai moved closer with his thumb he wiped her tears... his hand caressed her face gently then his thumb found its way towards her pink glossy lips...he caressed them before he captured her lips for an extensive kiss...the kiss depended for long...the passion of kiss set their bodies on fire....one by one their clothes came off and soon their unknown bodies were joined together and their discovered a new life for....

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Nobody bothered to call them for dinner...they were grown up people and mature...they knew what may have happened...like very Hindi film...when heroin is upset the hero goes to make up with her...

Jai lay awake and bani laying on his chest...they were aware of what just happened between them...the one kiss lead to so many thing that none of them ever thought about...will it's not about thoughts...initially their relationship started in a way that none of them ever dreamed of...jai hated her but again he is a man...he had so many time the urge to make love to her, to his wife but he stopped himself...because every time then he would remember that bani was pia's sister who eloped with his so called brother... but now today nobody stopped him from making love to his wife...

The grumbling of bani's stomach brought him back to reality...he looked at her down...she felt his gaze upon her...she felt embbaressd and shy...she closed her eyes and look snuggled more to him... jai smiled...bahut bhook lagi hai kiya?...questioned jai...bani opened her eyes...not meting his eyes...she nodded...muji bhi bahut bhook lagi hai par kaani ki nahi...bani looked up...jai looking into her eyes...muji tumhari bhook lagi hai...he finished his sentence by pulling her to himself and kissing her lips again...they felt breathless...muji bahut bhook lagi hai...and its late too i need to go down and get something to eat...said bani...jai didn't wanted to get up from the warm cosy bed...but he knew that both of them were hungry and bani needed to recover a bit after what they did...anyone one their placed would feel tired...

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In jigz room: Jigz tumnai nahi deka...they way that bani looked at jai and how jai followed her to the bedroom...gpod nows whats happening ther...said a sacred roshni...oh common rosh dont worry i know jai bhia he will never do anything with that middle class girl...reasured jigz...bahut hai vishvas hai apne jai bhia par jigz...thought roshani....let me get jai first then i will hundle you....and so she left jigz room...

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Bani utho tumhe bhook lagi hai na...hum niche jayengi kaana kani...chalo jai tried to pull bani with him...bani felt really shy...she covered herself with the sheet...aap uthiye pehli per mai uth jaonga...jhai knew how she felt so he teased her more for some time...but then jai got up and put his robe on and the bani got up...they both headed towards the the stairs...and in the meantime roshani came out of jigz room....roshani got a jhatka when she saw jb together wearing their robe and holding hnds walking towards the stairs...tear iwld up in roshani's eyes...she managed to call jigz...jigz was shocked when she saw her beloved jai bhia holding bani's hand...they both cried for nonstop for hours and jb had their dinner in kitchen helping each other in preparing the food, feeding eachother and teasing eachother...at the end the cleand up and walked hand in hand to their bedroom.....

THE END

Epilogue

Roshani cried for her loss and so did jigz...roshani did lost the war and there was nothing left for her...she left WM as she couldn't bear to see jai with bani...jigz alway fumed over things...but bani was no less...jigz and bani were always in a cold war...time passed but them two never changed...

From that day onward...three months later bani find out that she was pregnant...jai fainted when he heard this...he was on cloud nine...like other family members...jigz was happy too...of course his brother was going to become dad soon...soon jb were blessed with a baby boy whom they named Rehan Jai Walia...this new arrival was the life of everyone...jai cut down on his work and spend most of his time with the family but special with Rehan...rehan was so much used to jai that every night he would wait for him restlessly....at night jai was always bani's ...two years later bani was pregnant again and this time they had another son again...and they named him Rohan jai walia...and then two yeras later jb finally had a little girl...this girl was just beautiful...she was loved by everyone...including rehan and rohan...even though rohan felt jealous but he still loved his little sister...they named her Krishan after jai's mum...and she was the real Krishna....and princes of the family....

Rano and sahil got married and they had one son...named varun...ranveer after long time finally decided that he wanted to get married too...baiscally he was influenced by jb and sahil and rano...so he got married to rashi...jigz remind the same until aditya found a woman for himself...he couldn't see aditya and meera together so he in adi and meera's engagement party she confessed her love for aditya....and they got remarried....and lived happily....

Pia and pushy after getting married moved to London...now both work and they have a daughter called ria...even though they are happy but still not that happy...they do feel guilty for whatever happened but they couldn't face jai and bani...but some dau the have to returen back to india...but the questions is WHEN?

Hope i have done justice to all the characters...initially like i said above i started this as fun fic and at that time i had lot of ideas...but then my mamaji was diagnosed with cancer and then he died and my exam came....so i forgot everything...and since i dont like leaving things uncompleted...i started to continue this ff/ss after a long time....i sincerely thank all of you for support and encouragement....without your comments i would have never started this ff......

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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was really grt...
liked each n every part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey mina
gr88 part
loved it
u ended the story quite nicely
thanx dear
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