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khushboo2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Wow!!! What a good news yaar 👏 ......can't wait anymore 😃 .....hopefully your stories will be published more and more.....so I can read them na 😳 😃 .......I am so happy for you 😃

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amisha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

thanks for the wonderrful birthday gift and congratulations to you for getting your story published looking forward to read it in a magazine do let us know 👏

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msrk

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Congratulations sweety...You deserve it all the way...

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k12345

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Congrats Shoba...you have a blog where you publish..please let us know about it.

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melonie

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Hai Sho Akka,

Wow that is great news...congratulations

Wishing you all the best for your future endeavors also

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huma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

congo sheena diiiiiiiii thats wonderful news i hope and pray mopre of your wonderful stories carry on getting published cos u truly are an amazing writer and deserve it!

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RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Sheena, congratulations!!!!😃👏
This was a wonderful story and I hope more of your stories will be published. Just let us know whether you want to test your stories on us😉

Thanks for this story. the whole perspective of Bani's character and her simple take on the things around her was well desribed. It make my heart go out to her. also the rural environment was very suiting and thanks for explaining the program to us.

Thanks Sheena and congratulatons again!!

Byebye
Ranjana

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Taz234

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Congrats my pyaari billi!!! 🤗 Really great news!!! 👏 👏 I have yet to read this ss story...saw that u posted it the other day but was having problems accessing IF 😡 ..mera toh comment box bhi gayab tha! 😕

Anyways will catch up on this ff over the weekend..socha pehle congrats toh keh doon 😳 😳 U truelly are a superb writer⭐️👍🏼... hope u have many more stories published in future! 😃

Tazoo

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Taz234

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Posted: 17 years ago

#39

Hi Sheenuuuuu🤗 That was a fantastic, mindblowing story dear!! 👏 👏 👏 Seeti maarne ka dil kar rahahai!!! I loved how u wrote the story...self narrative style... writing as if u were Bani, how she was feeling etc. Liked that...gave the ff a different feel. 👏 👏

Bani, losing her family then going to stay with her uncle and enrolling into a school. The archery backdrop was very interesting. Bani wanted to make it in the team going for the olympics. 😊

That line which Jai said is so true

Do you know that Indian Olympic team had one bronze medal in 2000? And we are a country with over a billion people. I am disgusted, no one cares about sports in the country except for cricket. I want our school to train an archery team that's worthy enough to go to Olympics."

India does mainly focus on cricket more..so many other sports that people could paricipate in. If i remember clearly..India got a few good medals in the last olympics..was in shooting i think. 🤔

Tarun really pushed her hard didn't he. Making her eat, improve her shots. Jai was also very supportative. I liked Jai's role in this story wasn't there all the time but was watching and suppoting Bani as much, whilst she trained for archery

Loved the ending. Jai stating he knew Bani fancied him. (Ab isse kaise pata chala? 😳) and that he would be there for her and wait for her until she is off marriagable age..awww!! 😳

Super ff!!!!👏 👏 👏 Hope u write more stuff like this. I enjoyed reading that! 😃

Tazoo

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Auditi Ahsan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#40

Hey Sheena 😃 🤗

1st of all a Very Biiiiiiiiiiiiig Congrats to u yaar.... u seriously deserve it.... 👍🏼 😉

U write sooo well buddy 👏... btw which is the first story that was published & which 1 will they publish now??? 😕

& now this SS was really Toooooooooooooooooooooo GooooooooooooooooooooooooooooD!!!!! 😃

The way u expressed each & every feelings of the gal.... & offcourse the sir's.... both Jai & Tarun was A-W-E-S-O-M-E!!!! 😉

Once again Congrats 👍🏼!!!! & do let us know when ur story is published & how we can get it.... 🤗 😃

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