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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey sheena..
Brilliant work..It took me time to take upthis story..for its different title ..I hought..it might be arevengetrack..which i was not in amood to read...
But you story took me by surprise...It was a pleasant one...
Sheer brilliance...beautifullysaid and done..but thre are no jai's and tarun left..who will take an initiative and help our 1 billion country help excel in olympics...

AMzinginly written...
please do write more of such stories..I knw i being greedy..but your power play and now this were thorughly enjoyable...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai Sho akka,

Very...very...good story 👏

Loved it a lot, very different 👏

Liked the way you described Bani's journey...it's sad that her parents left her...poor girl 😭

The story looked so real, I could really imagine everything you wrote 😛 👍🏼

Aww Tarun died, that was sad 😭 😭 😭 ...glad that Bani has Jai now by her side 😳

Thankyou for writing such a wonderful story 😃 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shoba, that was such a beautiful story. Esp, in the beginning when you described how Bani felt about her mom's behaviour.

'Pia always fought with me for no reason and mother always sided with her'

You know something.. even I do that sometimes. I side the younger one only because he is little one and she should know better. If only I knew... I almost cried there, shoba.

I liked the way you concentrated on Bani life and her dreams.. rather than diluting it with JB love story. You have proved once again that a story needn't always be a mushy love story to be great.

A very touching story and brilliantly told. Here's to you , shobs.👏👏👏

Keep writng..

-j

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shoba loved the narrative of a young girl facing all the hardships at a very tender age. Very different from your others and very inspiring.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice short story, Sheena Di! 👏 It was really inspiring. I enjoyed Tarun's role a lot and of course Jai's small little parts. 😉 😆 😳 The last bit made me a little emotional when Tarun said he's going to meet his family. Overall, a very well written story. 😃 Always enjoy reading your writings. 😉 😃
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very real like. very inspirational. thank you for writing it.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi All:

For those of you who don't know the story of Eka Lavya here is a brief story.

Source: Wikipedia

In the Hindu epic Mahabharata, Ekalavya is a young prince of the Nishadha tribes, and a member of a low caste, who nevertheless aspires to study archery in the gurukul of Dronacharya. After being rejected by Drona, Ekalavya embarks upon a program of self-study in the presence of a clay image of Drona. He achieves a level of skill equal to that of Arjuna, Drona's favorite and most accomplished pupil. Fearful that Ekalavya will excel him, Arjuna begs Drona to take action. Drona goes to Ekalavya and demands that Ekalavya turn over his right thumb as a teacher's fee. The loyal Ekalavya cripples himself, and thereby ruins his prospects as an archer, by severing his thumb and giving it to Drona.


Why did I give the title to the story?

Drona was the teacher who asked EkLavya to cut off his thumbs in the old days. Today, it is the society that does it to women in rural India. They cut off their opportunities, and give them lower priority compared to boys. That's why I called her EkaLavya's daughter. Some one who is from the wrong side of tracks, becomes a great archer overcoming so many hardships.


@Bristy: he he! You didn't forget the 'H' part...LOL! thanks Honey!

@akash99: Thank you Akash!

@divan: Kanta, Thanks, India doesn't do what China does...China is very nationalistic and competes with teh rest of the world and are very proud - they believe in something called face saving. If they send athletes and they fail in those sports, it's considered like losing face. India doesn't take pride in the same way.

About Rakhi, I just didn't have the time to do research for the story, that's why it's not finished. But I will one of these days!

@msrk: S, thanks! I am really not going to write much pm the current track of KS. It's just not my cup of tea anymore...True! We need more benefactors like Jai and Tarun - it's not that we don't have talent in India. Thanks very much! I will try to write more stories like this - because romance in KS is no more - might as well do more interesting things.

@Melonie: Thanks Sweety, her parents died leaving her an orphan. The girl had to grow up a lot! Yes, Jai helped her and Tarun helped her a lot. Hope she makes it to the Olympics.

@Juney: Thanks G, yes! Kids tend to see things differently than parents. We think because some one is a year or two older they have behave themselves and be a better example. You are absolutely right, in my actual story, there is no Jai and Tarun is an old man. I just modified it to fit the KS section. Thank you very much!

@moonlitnight: Thanks Tropa...

@k12345 - Priya, thank you very much! She is a very inspiring girl. Wish we have more girls like that in India and more opportunities like what have been given to her.

@Indian_Goddess: Dil, thank you very much! I tried to think of an older male character in KS, but there isn't one, so had to use Tarun there. 😆 😆 😆 Jai's action and role is minimal in this story.

@aaratig: Thanks Aarati! Appreciate your comments.
Edited by Sheena_Row - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow wow wow 👏 Shoba aka, you just proved that you are not only capable of writing love stories but also inspiring story like this.....beautiful, simple story of an ambitious girl and her journey of life.....I loved it so much.....wonderful piece of work.......please write more like this......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fascinating, Shoba - absolutely fascinating. If parents spend money and educate daughters, or even let them participate in sports, the girls reap a life-long benefit...
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Di,

that was very insipiring story and beautifully written.the message was soo beautiful.with all your stories I always get to learn something new, really liked the protrayal of Tarun's character.you etched out bani's pov very nice.lookin forward to reading more amazing stories like this. 👏

preet 😳

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