SS: Lost In Love End pg-3 (08.06.08)

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

hey very nice....but I think you rushed the end, but anyway it was sweet, simple story....Jai is alive, I thought he was dead.....please write more.....

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

tropu
wheres the other five pages? 😆
i think you meant pg 3 not pg8😆 😆 😆

that was an very berry very sweet update👏 👏 👏
see someone can enter for the June 19th competition 😆

i think i was close, i guessed an rose for every year, loved his proposal, poor Jai, but glad they got married, and Ranveer realized his mistake. 😡 😡 😡

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

awwwnnnn hun.. stilll too short.. but something is better than nothing right.. lol.. anywayz great part.. iss ranveer ki tho mein band baja thi hoon ther jaa.. how dare he hurt our jai.. bechara.. lekin shaadi hogayi.. 10 years lekin yeh kya.. only one child.. i was thinking maybe 20.. lol.. anywayz another SS would be lovely.. 😳

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amisha

@amiee

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

awww very sweet story loved it

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: *Piku*

see someone can enter for the June 19th competition 😆

My thought exactly Mamta Di.....trying to make her write one, she won't listen

Anyway, back to the update, it was really shweet shweet proposal Tropu......😃

But the last bit was so rushed....why couldn't you write few more pages? 😭

But loved it.....happy happy ending...I don't like sad endings (unless I write them 🤓)

Lovely, write another one or two...and DO write an entry for the contest....😉😳

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Tropu!! Why wont you enter for the competition????
This was so sweet, so mushy mushy!!
JB got married, having kids. Stupid Ranveer.😡 Jai ko phora!😭

Byebye
Ranjana

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

very nice and sweet.........liked it 😉

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Hey Tropa..a sweet n short story..cute romantic one..but felt that u wanted to finish it off very soon...Lagtha hai u are busy with another FF for us..so June 19th ke liye likh rahi ho? 😉 😆 ..i would really love if you take part in it as you write really well..
Rama

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tam2

@tam2

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

oh there were 100 flowers ... and I thought there were only 3 😕 😆 ... that's very nice of Jai... gifting Bani so many red roses ... 😳 😍 ...

nice ending... 👏 ... but it was rushed... 😕 ... nevertheless... liked it very much... and do take part in the competition... so get going girl... start typing... I think the last date of entering 19th June competition is on 30th ... don't be lazy... 😆 ... so get start with typing... ...

looking forward to reading ur FF as well... 😳...

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divan

@divan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Hehehe...you made Ranveer a bad boy...

I am glad Jai didn't die...and loved giving her roses even after they are happily married. Lovey story Tropa...so another one is being penned hun?

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