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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
gr8 start
rano & jai
no thanks 😆
u cud name ur story, Unexpeced Twists. 😆
or Hidden Love
yea, i know lame 😆
anyways pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
yain meri ages old ff kaha se nikaali cm?? meri cm ho ya meri dushman??.....swati mai cm ki baat toh phir bhi sun leti but abb tumne bol diya hai toh,,,,,,well heheheeheh i guess nw i wont lol
jinny yaar nt eatin bhaav time hi nahi milta n plus i dont even rem wat i was goin to write in this story......but since tum log itna bol rahe ho i'll do one thing i had written the 2nd prt of this ff ages ago i'll post dat one and den i'll try and update whenever i get time theek hain??
chalo lemme go and search d nxt prt and then i'll post it okkk
luv ya
minks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
cm, swati and jinny here is the nxt prt just for u ppl and nw read it hwever bad it is and then give me gud comments hahahaahahaha....luv u guys
Chapter- 2

Bani was sitting lost amongst her frnds…today had been bani's last exam for her bachelor's degree…..usually she was always making a ruckus after her exam but today she was sitting quietly in one corner all glum and visibly upset over smthin.

Bani's best friend raashi was noticing bani's unusual behavior for the past one week……bani and she always did combined studies and usually bani never let her study quietly for more then half an hr, coz she would either crack a joke or then tease her over one thing or another but during the past one week she came to her house and studied seriously and had remained uncommunicative, which was a really out of place behavior for bani coz everyone knew she could never stay quite for more then a few mins and here she had been all gloomy for more then a week so obviously something very untoward had happened to her, though raashi had tried to get her to talk but she wasn't willing to do it, but she knew bani would tell her everythin in good time coz she could never hide anything from her.

Raashi sighed and looked at bani who was sitting lost in her thoughts, raashi had brought her to her home after the exam in hope to get her back to her bubbly self but all in vain…..finally she could bear it no longer and asked her "bani….wats the problem yaar??? Look at urself, wat has happened to u??.....common tell me wats bugging u so much…..i don't like this gloomy-doomy frnd for mine....i want my old bani back plzzzzz"

Bani suddenly looked at raashi with eyes brimming with tears and then she just hugged raashi and began crying in earnest…….raashi was shocked at this sudden happening she did not know how to react coz never since she had known bani had she seen her cry and there frndship went back to when both of them where in 8th grade in school and come what may u would always find bani smiling, raashi was devastated seeing bani like this, she dint know wat to say, hw to calm her down….it was always bani who did all that for her and never the other way around.

So she sat silently letting bani cry her heart out and when finally bani stopped crying did she ask "wat happened bani??"

Bani sniffed and replied haltingly " do u….u remember a guy…..a guy was coming to see rano di about a week ago…..they came…and…and they went away and after two days they called daddy and told them….that…. that…..the boy did not want to marry rano di ……but ME…. me…me not rano di but me…… u….u don't know wat hell it has been for me….this is all my fault….i shouldn't have gone in front of those ppl….i shouldn't have talk to that guy……..now I can't face anyone at home least of all rano di….i just cant even begin to imagine wat she must have been going through….being rejected that too bcoz of her own sister…I am such a bi**h…… she must hate me na raashi??….though she said she doesn't and mom and dad dint say anything to me either but …..but I know hw they all must be feeling…..and that that jai walia….i hate him….hw dare he do this to my sister and then think I will marry him of all the ppl in the world…..i wish I could go and kill him for this……..bcoz of him my sister must be hating me all bcoz of him"…………to be cont

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
gr88 part
wow thanku for not letting jai get married to rano
we always want jb together
thanku soo much updating ur ff
loved it
and doo cont soon
otherwise will tell hani to comment in kutchi
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: minks

yain meri ages old ff kaha se nikaali cm?? meri cm ho ya meri dushman??.....swati mai cm ki baat toh phir bhi sun leti but abb tumne bol diya hai toh,,,,,,well heheheeheh i guess nw i wont lol

jinny yaar nt eatin bhaav time hi nahi milta n plus i dont even rem wat i was goin to write in this story......but since tum log itna bol rahe ho i'll do one thing i had written the 2nd prt of this ff ages ago i'll post dat one and den i'll try and update whenever i get time theek hain??
chalo lemme go and search d nxt prt and then i'll post it okkk
luv ya
minks

thats like agood girl
and thanku dear for updating
love u for this
😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

wow minku finally u updated after ages 👏

thanks for posting and i assure u that i won't think about eating u if u will keep posting regular updates😆 jyada der maat karna as i might feel starved and then run after u.
loved the part minku, so my guess was correct na that he will chose our bubbly bani and now bani will make him suffer, can't wait for their meeting now and i am sure rano and dixits will surely try getting bani married to JW as that buddha is a good catch for them na
do continue soon
luv and thanks a ton for updating
swati
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
As the oldest saying here at IF - KS goes...............aisa to hona hi tha...kyunki.....BANI N BUDDHA ARE RESERVED & PRESERVED FOR EACH OTHER!!!!! wat say folks??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
gr8 part
thanks for not letting jai- rano get married
i love jb
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

I don't know about Bani but I think Jai made the right decision 😆 nice update.......please continue SOON

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

hey i just read your FF...very good start...plz continue soon...

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