ff: no name lol pt 2 pg 5 (8\10)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heyyyy guyssss,

Here I am again with a story, exams r over don't have anything else to do''n I really don't know wat I am writing bus jo accha laga likh diya'.hope its not bakwas if it is lemme know seriously n I wont cont. it'..this is gonna be a short story but I don't have any idea hw many prts its gonna be'.. but I'll finish it jaldi se hopefully.

Oh n again I cant think of any name for it so its gonna be nameless for now'.anyone has a suggestion fr it do lemme know, I'll be gr8ful for that

Luv ya

Mahima

INTRODUCTION

JAI WALIA ' arre waise hi jaise sab ff's main hota hain. Big business man, a hunk etc etc n he is not Buddha in this story

BANI DIXIT- well she is also the same lol'..studyin in college, has big career aspirations, big dreams for herself and her family

Aur bhi characters hain but basically they r the same as ks, so wont go into all that.

And as for the story and wats it about'..well read it and find out heheheehheh but haan its all bout jb as usuall😃

CHAPTER- 1

Bani was in a big hurry to reach home today, usually, she loitered around the college with her frnds after her exam was over but today as soon as her exam was over she rushed out to her scooty and left for her home, without even discussing the paper with her frnds'..afterall a boy and his family was coming home to see her big sis rano and if everything got fixed her sis would be married off to that guy''. Bani and rano were like typical sisters, they luved each other but both would rather die, then let anyone know bout it least of all each other'..both of them kept fighting each other and most of the time bcoz bani would always want whatever rano wanted and this led to many big fights btw them but no matter how big there fight was they never stopped talking to each other for more then a few hrs, if one day they where fighting, the nxt day they wouldn't even remember wat there fight was about, this was a the sweet relation they both shared so of course bani had to have gud look at the guy and see if he was gud for her sis or not and that's y she was in such a big hurry.

Bani reached home parked her scooty and went running into the house, to see everyone running around to do one thing or the other, her mother kiran cooking some yummy delicacies for the guests, her father nishikant was in a big hurry to go to the market to buy some stuff for the guests and rano was getting ready after all only one hour was left before the guy arrived.

Usually bani created lot of fuss when she came back home wanting everyone's attention, sulking at what her mom made for lunch and demanding that her fav. Dish be made otherwise she wouldn't eat and her mom always gave in to her demands but today she was really excited about the prospect of her sis getting married, so she dint even ask for her lunch in fact bani helped her mom around in the kitchen much to kiran's surprise coz usually bani never even stepped into the kitchen let alone help her out and bani even voluntarily cleaned the mess she had created in her room, which she never removed unless her mom nagged her about it a thousand times.

An hour later the doorbell to their house rang and nishikant went and received the guests and settled them in the sitting room of their house'..the nxt few mins went about with kiran and nishikant entertaining the guests, both of them realized that the guy was really a suitable match for their daughter and that their daughter would be really happy if she went into that family''..finally the guys maasi asked them if they could bring their daughter in and nishikant shouted from there only 'bani plz bring ur rano di here'

A few secs later bani led a shy rano into the room with bani wearing a salwar suit and rano wearing a sari....they both did a formal namaste to everybody and sat down.....bani had seen the pic of the guy before so she knew who the guy in question was so she gave him an one over and decided that he was not bad at all'.in fact he was quite good lookin'so bani thought 'hmmm he'll be perfect for rano di'

Bani could never stay silent for more then a few secs and so after remaining quite for a few secs , she decided to talk and looked straight at the guy and said 'hii, I am bani dixit, wats ur name??' she thought okkk I know ur name already but we have to begin from somewhere heheeheheh

And so the guys said ' helloooo, I am jai walia' '''.to be cont.

so shall i cont. ya band karu bakwaas??? 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pankhi Aunty yahan bhi peecha nahi chorongi

Ee part saaro na ho are agle part mein nyarateen

Pankhi aunty i had comented nw translation is ur responsibility
Edited by YOOUSHA - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,

Nice start!! Continue soon!!!!

God bless

dhani

Edited by vardhani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 start plz continue soon!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: YOOUSHA

Pankhi Aunty yahan bhi peecha nahi chorongi

Ee part saaro na ho are agle part mein nyarateen

Pankhi aunty i had comented nw translation is ur responsibility

pankhy anuty she means

this part was not that good will see ur skills in the bext part

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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz cont soon to here more wonderful comments from hani and me
okhh mahima
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Posted: 17 years ago
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a new FF......I really love it when you guys are on holidays or after exam......

I remember your last FF, watever.....had fun reading it.....since you haven't given a name for this FF, let me give a suggestion....how about 'whatsoever'???? 😆....

Actually I haven't read your chapter 1 yet.....will come back to comment 😛

back now......

Hey don't give me heart attack 😆.....Rano and Jai Walia?.......I'm sure there will be twist.........please continue......very interesting......

Edited by niruba - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😲Minks!! Are you sure you didnt make a typo. Ranveer bali instead of Jai Walia. Haila!! Rano and JW. Yeh kya huwa??😲 I is shocked!!!
I really want to know how you are going to handle this.😉😃
i loved the intro and how you described the sisters relationship!! So true
!! I only have sisters so I know!!😆

thanks for a new story
byebye
ranjana

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

😲Minks!! Are you sure you didnt make a typo. Ranveer bali instead of Jai Walia. Haila!! Rano and JW. Yeh kya huwa??😲 I is shocked!!!
I really want to know how you are going to handle this.😉😃
i loved the intro and how you described the sisters relationship!! So true
!! I only have sisters so I know!!😆

thanks for a new story
byebye
ranjana

YES MAHIMA

I QUITE AGREE WITH RANJANA

AB TU KYA KARNE WALI HAI

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Posted: 17 years ago
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saved wil be back ...

Edited

I m sorry as soon as i finished the part, i was called to attend an important errand and after that i forgot to edit my post but now i m here. 😊

it was gr88 begining .. am sure story will be fantastic. Rano for a change bani's elder sister. thats a good change. is the story based on movie Rosa

Edited by gaurifan - 17 years ago

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