FF: The Prom Night part 10, pg 16(the end - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
jai finally said it, and they even kissed 😳 yipeeeeee, I just hope roshni doesn't come in the way, wooow jai is possessive, punched ranvir cause bani was helping him, pushy's gonna lose the bet hahahaha.

nice part
continue soon

thanks 4 updatin

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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
at last Jai confessed his feelings......wonder how Pushkar will react to this, he was the one who started this game......Jai punched Ranveer, poor boy, I wish Bani does the same thing to Roshni 😆.....nice update, worth waiting.......please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
that was something good after a long time!its true " sabar ka fal meetha hota hain"😛,gr8 update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gre8888 part ......pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
All I can say is "WOW" 😳 I'm realllllyyy happy for JB 😳 😳
cont. soon and best of luck with school 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part pls cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg omg.. wow.. u did not just doo that.. itni jaldi jai kissed her and confessed his love.. but jai should say sorry.. lol.. that was harsh.. anyway zgreat part.. continue soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

Hai Pooja,

Beautiful updates...loved the way the story is progressing 👏 👏 👏

Didn't like Roshini's behaviour that much, but then she was bound to to be like that 😡 😡

Jai and Bani secretly stealing glances....their jeleous was all potrayed very well 😳 😳

Whoa finaaly Jai Walia lost his cool...feel bad for Ranveer poor guy...aww they kissed and he confessed that was very sweet 😳

Want to see the pic of that dress when she wears 😉 😉

Pls cont soon 😃 😊

Edited by melonie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Poor ranveer,, he was left behind with a black eye while they went off romancing ,, cute update
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Posted: 17 years ago

19th June

Finally the most awaited day arrived. Whole college was excited. They can't wait for the evening. Girls are waiting to show their new dresses, new shoes, jewellery but our boys were no less. They want to impress their girls and finally show off their dates to the world. Similar were the case with Jai and Bani. There happiness had no boundaries. Jai was coming to pick her up at 7 pm and today she wanted to look beautiful for Jai for herself. From 3 hrs she was being ready well cant say 3 hrs its actually two hrs coz for 1 hour she was constantly requesting Pushkar to come for party but he didn't even move. Remembering Pushkar and his antics she still wants to laugh.

Yesterday when Jai and Bani were immersed in their deep passionate kiss Pushkar had suddenly barged in their room and had see them kissing.

"Bani? Jai? What is this?" was his instant reply

Hearing Pushkar they had separated and was looking at him guiltily thinking abt his bet.

"Umm… Pushkar" stammered Bani and looked towards jai who was no less than Bani.

"You two are together," asked Pushkar

Finally getting courage "Yes" said Bani

"Then what about my bet"

"Forget it" said Bani trying very hard to look normal because if her brother knew that she is under guilt then he is no longer gonna leave them.

"What? Because of me u two are here together and now u people are backstabbing"

"So what? Because of u I had faced a lot of problem mental problem, physical problem. Now I am happy and not gonna do anything u say. If u want u can tell Mom abt the speeding fine"
said Bani praying to all gods that he wont do that.

Pushkar thought now Bani is not gonna agree no use of threatening so only one way begging that's it

"Plzz plzz Bani. Last time just last time do it for ur brother sake. I wont take any money further. Just let Jai ask Roshni for the prom. U can join later and can be together afterwards. Just let them go together" begged Pushkar.

"No"

"Plz Bani. Plz Jai tu mera yaar hai na"

"I said no means no"
But Pushkar was looking at Jai with lots of hope in his and Jai on the other hand didn't know what to do he was just looking at both brother n sister and their argument.

Finally Pushkar went as if losing looking both of them with hurtful eyes well trying to thinking they might melt but Poor Pushkar didn't work.

"Bani do u think we did right. Pushkar was looking really hurt"

"O don't worry Jai u don't know him. These are all one of his antics. He will come around tomorrow. And he also deserve for playing other emotions. Forget that Where were we?"
saying that Bani pulled Jai with his collar towards herself.

7pm Bani's residence

The bell rang, Bani ran from her to door with full excitement to receive Jai and opened the door but Jai wasn't there. She looked at the ground and found Jai tying his shoelace. On hearing the door open Jai looked up and his world simply just stopped. Bani! She was looking breathtakingly beautiful. She was looking so elegant, so graceful, so divine, heavenly. He had no words to describe. The dress was fitting her so perfectly as if it was specially made for her. The colour light blue with white colour blended in it was making her look as pure as sea, as innocent as the first drop of rain falling from sky. Jai's breath caught in his throat.

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He slowly stood up and now it was Bani's turn to gasp. Jai in his black tuxedo made Bani weak in her knees. He was looking so dashing, so handsome, so attractive, so gracious and so so sexy. Sophistication and sex appeal resembled from his every part. Black that was his colour. Simply for him. Both of them were staring at each other oblivious to whole world. It was their love, which was making the other person more special.

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"Bani beta dhyan se jana".
The shout of her mother brought them back to earth. Both smiled consciously and Jai came forward, gave her a feather like kiss and whispered

"You are looking breathtaking". Shiver went through her body and managed to say just thanks.

The Ballroom

The ballroom was filled with peoples. It was different colour glittering all over the place. All laughing, smiling some dancing some just chatting. Jai and Bani arm entwined made their entries. As they entered all the people face turned to their direction. They were looking such a beautiful couple full in love content in themselves. Stunning Bani with sexy Jai. Slowly they made their way to where friends were. Both of then were having their lifetime fun enjoying each other's company, peoples compliment, gr8 food and finally the slow sensual dance. They were so immersed in themselves when a faded blue eyed Ranveer tapped on Jai's shoulder.

"Jai May I have the pleasure to dance with lady of the night"

Jai just glared at him.

"I promise I will be a gentleman and wont behave as other day"

"You better be"
saying that he released Bani. After sometime Bani was anxious to see jai but he was nowhere to be seen. Bani was tired of dancing that's because she was missing Jai. She excused herself and was going towards restroom when someone handed her a dozen of black roses with a card in it. Before she could ask any question he was gone.

"People used black roses to signify death but I signify it as a rebirth after death. The rebirth which u have given to me from the old lanky, dull Jai to new sexy and handsome Jai😉"

She knows that it was given by Jai but she still couldn't find him when someone gave her another dozen of pink roses with same card in it,

"Its u: gracious and elegant just for me"

Now she has no patience left to meet Jai when suddenly got another dozen of white roses.

"I have heard that the most pure and innocent relation in human culture is friendship. There's secrecy, there's love and there's trust that what we have."

Bani was simpy staring the card when someone gave her another dozen of white roses with red tips and card in it.

"Its signifies our unity and our togetherness forever"

The emotions filled in her coudnt even let her read the card properly. With blurr vision she finally read the card properly when someone was waiting for her with Yellow roses with red tips and card in it.

"I know I have hurt u a lot. First of all with the stupid bet and mostly being with Roshni. I never said u sorry for that because it wasn't enough. It was the phase when people finds happiness in everything but I gave u tears and grief. It was the phase of falling in love but I was known to it."

Suddenly everything went dark and their was just two stop light at the center of the hall focussing Jai and Bani.

Bani eyes were brimming with tears whereas Jai was smiling giving her two different roses one burgundy and another red. Bani looked at him with question filled eyes.

"I was confused which one to give first burgundy telling how beautiful u are or red telling I LOVE YOU so thought of giving both at same time"

Bani smiled through her tears and hugged him back not able to speak even a word. Jai pulled himself back bended on his knees, as Bani gasped, and placing his one hand on his knee, he held Bani's left hand in his right one and said:

"Bani I know its crazy we had just confessed our feelings one week ago and I am already here with a proposal. Bani I want u always besides me, walking with me through happiness and sorrow, through joy and grief. I want to spend my entire life, my every year, my every day, my every hour, every minute, every second with u. I want to grow old with u, have a beautiful family, babies, dog, a beautiful garden. Will u take an honest man out of me? Will u marry me?"

Bani was so overwhelmed with her emotions that she couldn't reply anything to him and just nodded indicating "yes". Jai took out a solitary ring from his pocket and slipped through her finger, stood up and kissed her sealing both of their fates.




THE END
OK guys that was end of it and if u are all thinking of Roshni then well she couldn't make to the prom coz she had no partner. She was so confident in herself thinking Jai would ask her for Prom that she said no to every other boys which left her alone and Pushkar he is hiding at his home from his friends with whom he had bet.
I really enjoyed writing this FF but am really sorry as well that u people had to wait so long for last two chapters. Thanks to u all for ur supprt and encoraging comments. Hope u like the last part and I will try to write new FF😉.


Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago

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