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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG..awesome updates!!

Jai feeling insecure..hehe..sign of love yaar...and poor plumber, serves him right to say stuff like this about Bani!
Poor bani yaar..don't kill her!!
Loved it yaar!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!! double treat!! ohho!!!! these duffers needs others to make themselves understand... accident!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa plz plz plz cont soooooooooon
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OMG!!!! Poor Bani and Poor JW!!! I hope he helps to nurse her back to health (thereby bringing them close ;) ) I cant believe she got into an accident.. pleasae dont do any permanent damage and such.. I cant wait for the next update!!!!! Please dont hurt her :(

And do update soon.. Iknow you gae a double treat... but OMG you cant leave us hanging like this, yaar!
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Posted: 16 years ago
after getting so many gaalias , i've decided to update to get rid of all your conceptions that i'm pure evil. i'm not. i'm just a little naughty sometimes.😉😆


Chapter 37

"Mr. Walia, I am sorry, but you cannot go past here. You will have to wait outside….," the Doctor politely informs him, bringing an arm out to prevent Jai from going any further. Rano clings onto him from behind, tears streaming fast down her cheeks.

Jai: (desperate) Buttt----
Doctor: Mr. Walia, I guarantee you that my team and I will work our hardest to save your wife's life. Trust me…. Hopefully with God's grace on our side, she will be fine.

Before he can give Jai another chance to intervene, Dr. Mathur follows his assisting nurse into the operation room, letting the glass doors close behind him. Moments later the bulb situated up on top of the doors, turns red, indicating the beginning of the operation. Like a dead body, Jai falls down onto the bench nearby with his face as white as a sheet of paper. Rano doesn't bother in hiding her tears, shedding them freely. She looks over to her brother-in-law, noting his state, and feels her heart go out to him. She also sits down besides him and gently places her head onto his shoulder. Taking her arms, she wraps them around his, wanting him to know that they are in this together, he is not alone.

Jai stares off into space, heeding no attention to his saali, feeling numb to the core. His own words come back to haunt him…..

"Our marriage has only been a compromise"…… "Woh raat ek gaalti tha…"…. "It should never had happened"……

He is the reason for his wife's condition right now. It was because of him that she had run off…. That she had been hit by that car…. If only he hadn't said anything, she would still be at home….with him…. None of this would ever had happened…. It's all because of him… Just him….

"I am sorry Sir… I am very sorry… It is because of me that your wife's ill…. I didn't mean for this to happen…. I-----," Jai distantly hears the man across from him speak. Snapping out of his lost daze, he looks over to the regretful man, who seems as if he will breakdown any second.

It's not his fault…. In fact, he even tried to stop the car as soon as he saw Bani in the street…. It was just too late… And with him taking time to come to the hospital to see how his wife is proves that he is sincerely sorry and wishes for her well being…. He's a good man and Jai does not blame him.

This was what he wanted to say to the poor man, but no words seem to come out from his mouth, instead he remains quiet. Finally he feels Rano's presence and hears her sniffling and cries, which he had blocked out ever since the whole incident had taken place. He had been terribly shaken before and went into a shell of shock….

Jai startles Rano momentarily as he takes her into his arms, trying his best to pacify her. He strokes her hair and murmurs that her sister will be alright…. That she has to be alright… She needs to live for them both. Rano, feeling tears arise in her eyes all over again with her Jiju's response of comfort, nods her head quickly in agreement and hugs him equally back. She is well aware of the anguish her brother-in-law is currently going through, in fact, he is perhaps even more impacted by her sister's accident than herself…. And here he is pretending to be brave and optimistic, only to soothe her.

Minutes fly by, which feel like eons to Jai and Rano, when finally the other members of the Walia family arrive. They come with tears and disbelief over the news. Neither Jai or Rano narrate what had happened when asked, it was only the sorrowful man who did. Mausi looks over to her nephew with water brimming in her eyes, and her heart aches on seeing his broken condition. Never in her years of raising him had she seen him so forlorn and devastated. Not even on his own parents' death.

She wants to reach out to him, comfort him, tell him everything will be fine, but she can't… Because she herself has no knowledge of whether Bani will be well…. How can she take a husband's grief away while his wife is fighting between life and death?

Jigyasa bursts into tears in her ex-husband's arms, who himself is desolate over this shocking incident.

Pia finds her baby sister crying her heart out with Jai Walia as her support. Racking with soft sobs herself, she makes her way over to her and gently calls out for her attention.

Pia: Rano….

Rano looks up from Jai's shoulder and replies in a watery tone…, "Pia…" Immediately Pia gathers her into a tight-locked embrace, and begins in shushing her, telling her only to think positively… Nothing will happen to their Bani Didi.

Pushkar stands idly to himself, keeping his eyes on his brother, who seems so lifeless that it brings tears to his own eyes. He is hesitant to reach out to him, not knowing whether he is the right person at the moment to give him comfort, but is glad instead when Mausi steps in, sitting beside her shattered nephew.

Mausi: Munna….

On hearing his Mausi's motherly voice, Jai looks to her and in moments breaks down in hot tears. She brings him to close to her and soothingly runs her hand in a back and forth motion on his back….

Jai: Mausi-----…… Bani….. Meri Bani…..
Mausi: (speaking in a quivering tone herself) I know beta….. I know…..
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Sometime later when everyone begins to quiet down and instead look distraught and motionless, Dr. Mathur steps out from the operation room and approaches them with a grim on his face. Jai is the first to notice his presence and quickly springs up from his seat, rushing over to him.

Jai: (hastily) Doctor, kya hua? How is my wife? ---- Is she fine?
Dr. Mathur: Mr. Walia…. We have reached a problem…. Your wife has lost a lot of blood from the accident…. And unfortunately we do not have her blood group in our banks….
Jai: (shocked, infuriated) What do you mean you don't have her blood group? Have you called any of the other hospitals around?
Dr. Mathur: Yes we have, and they are running low on AB+ as well. We need that blood for your wife as soon as possible. We cannot afford to wait…. Your wife may possibly die if we do not get it to her in time….

Everyone shatters at this piece of news and instantly become to worry. Mausi and Dadi quickly begin to chant prayers with tears rolling down their faces.

Jai: Then take my blood! I don't care, take as much as you need. Just please, save my wife. (he says urgently)

Jigyasa squeaks behind him, "But Bhaiya…. Aapka blood group B negative hai….." Jai becomes crestfallen on this reminder and frantically turns behind, looking back at both Rano and Pia, who immediately tear up all over again. He approaches them both, and takes Rano's arms into his hands.

Jai: Tum dono to uski behen ho…. One of you can donate the blood to her…. (hopefully)

Both Rano and Pia look at one another miserably and back at their sister's husband, hating to have to break terrible news to him.

Rano: Mr. Walia… Main aur Pia… humare blood group Didi ke saath match nahi kaarte…. (trans: Mr. Walia… Mine and Pia's… our blood group does not match with Didi's.)

Jai stares at her stunned, and shakes her slightly out of frustration from a response he did not wish to hear….

Jai: Yeh kaise hosakta---- tum dono to uski---
Rano: (crying) Ji, hum uski behen hai…. Paar our blood does not match …. Main A positive hoon… aur Pia B positive….

Releasing her arms slowly, Jai steps away from them and crashes back into the wall behind him, completely lost and hopeless about where to get the blood from.

Jai: My Bani is in there dying… and I cannot even do a simple thing as getting blood for her….

Pushkar, not remaining silent anymore, steps forward over to his brother. He places a hand on his shoulder, causing Jai to look up at him with suffering eyes.

Pushkar: Bhaiya… Bhabhi is not going to die… We won't let her… She has to live… She has to live for you and for us. …. You are not in this alone. We are here…. (pausing for a second) My blood type matches with Bani Bhabhi's…. I will donate her the blood.

Electrified by this, Jai stares at his younger brother in surprise. Pushkar nods his head, confirming the fact. Not even giving Jai to properly react towards his favor, he rushes away to the Doctor.

Pushkar: Doctor, I will give her my blood….I'll give her all of it, please, you need to save her.
Doctor: We will only need a few quarts from you son…. Nurse (calling behind him)…
Nurse: Ji sir…

The nurse quickly takes action by assisting Pushkar towards a separate room to prep for the blood transfusion. As Pushkar walks along, he meets his brother's jolted eyes which stare at him with a mix of gratitude and disbelief…..
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Just as soon Pushkar comes walking out from the room, rolling down his sleeve, Pia confronts him with tears sparkling in her eyes. He looks at her dumbfound as she silently stares at him in awe.

Pushkar: (softly) Pia…..

Bursting into fresh tears, Pia hugs her husband tight, crying into his chest. He begins in calming her down.

Pia: You are too good of a person Pushkar… I will never forget this favor of yours…
Pushkar: Pia… if she is your sister….. Then she is my sister as well…. We are all family…. And family look after one another….

Pia looks up at him with a slightly happy smile and receives an affectionate kiss on her forehead. That is when she remembers his weak state.

Pia: Pushkar… you should be laying down… You have just given blood… You are weak…
Pushkar: No… I am fine… Besides, I don't want to be resting while Bani is..….

Pia nods her head in acknowledgment and doesn't bother to protest, she leads him back to everyone else before the operation room, where they wait impatiently and desperately for more news of Bani…..

After long hours pass by, the operation room's bulb dims and it's doors open. Everyone either stand up or straighten their posture on the sight of the Doctor. Their hearts pound fast as he comes close and then stops in his tracks.

Doctor: …. The operation was a success…. The patient is alive.

Everyone around Jai quickly wear smiles and animatedly chatter in delight and cheer for this much awaited piece of information…. They are oblivious to the heavy burden in his chest being uplifted and his heart racing fast in a frenzy. More tears escape from his eyes, but this time from overjoyed relief and exhilaration. He walks to the Doctor, feeling light with rushing emotions, and at once asks him if they can see her.

Doctor: (smiling) Of course Mr. Walia… She has been placed in another room. But only one person is allowed…. She is resting.

Jai turns around, staring at his family unsurely. They, however, only smile back at him.

Aditya: Jai, if Bani had to choose which one of us she would want to see first, it would be you.
Mausi: Yes Munna… Go and see her… You are her husband, you have that right.

Jai though still seems hesitant and switches his gaze over to his two sister-in-laws. They catch his hesitance and only confirm what everyone else suggest.

Rano: Trust me Mr. Walia, Didi would want to see you the most…. Even over us.
Pia: (smiling politely) Please go….

Smiling in gratitude, Jai does not waste anymore time and in a flash disappears with Dr. Mathur at his side, leading him towards his wife's room….
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Dr. Mathur: Here she is Mr. Walia…. You may go in.

The Doctor opens the door for Jai, allowing him to go in. He slowly enters in and rests his eyes on the hospital bed in front of him, in which his wife lies on, attached to IVs and an oxygen mask hovering over her nose and mouth. He hears the door close behind him and knows that the doctor has left to give him privacy.

Now with a heavy heart, he walks to Bani's side, and tears on seeing her condition. He sits down beside her on a chair, and takes her cold hands into his own. He caressingly runs his hand down her hair and tries to relish himself in the fact that she is alive and well…. But he cannot ignore that he has brought her to this very bed, caused her to almost fall in the depths of death, and endangering herself. Bringing his forehead down against their joined hands, Jai silently begins to cry to himself……

Jai: Bani…. I am so sorry…. Yeh saab mere wajah se hua… I have hurt you once again…. It seems that is all I am ever capable of doing when I'm with you…. I did not wish for this to happen…. I never wanted any of this to happen… In fact, I never even meant any of those things I had said to you earlier before…. If I had known that those words would hurt you like this, I would never had said them… I had only thought I was giving you the happiness you wanted…. I never wanted to let you go, I didn't want you to leave me…. But I had thought you would be happier without me… That I was depriving you from getting that happiness you wished for…. But now I realize that I was just speaking rubbish…. You never wanted to leave me…. You want to be with me just as much as I want to be with you…. and that your happiness lies in me, just as mine lies in yours… I am sorry for calling our marriage a compromise…. It may had been based off as one, but that had changed a long time… Nor do I regret that night when we had become one in body and soul….man and wife… In fact, that night will always be a cherished memory for me… It was that same very night in which I realized that I have fallen in love with you…. Bani… You are everything to me… You are my whole world… You are the woman that I love and will always love… I want us to be happily married… I want us to have lots of children who we will spoil and love together… and I even want us to grow old together… just like any other married couple…. I regret never telling you all this before… I was misunderstood and under the conception that you did not share the same dreams and hopes that I held…. Instead I believed you wanted to have that same life, but with another man…. I was wrong to believe you still held feelings for Pushkar…. I should have spoken to you about it, but I didn't… because I was afraid… I was afraid whether you would confirm my worst fears…. I was afraid of losing you…..

He pauses for a brief moment before carrying on….

Jai: Bani, I still want to create my life over again… but with you in it…. For many years I've been very lonely and have been missing that presence of a companion in my life… All that changed though, when you came into my life… Ever since our marriage, you have begun to fill that empty void with your warmth and loving nature…. Those same very characteristics of yours that eventually got me falling hard for you…. I love you Bani…. And I want you to know that here on after, I will never let you feel pain again… I will love you so much and make you so happy that you won't ever have a chance to complain…. You will have that life that you have always craved for…. That you deserve…. I just hope that you will give me that chance…..

He kisses her hands sweetly and strokes her hair one last time, before deciding on getting up to leave, thinking it's best if he let's her rest for now. But just as he releases her hands and stands up to go, he feels a haste grip on his hand holding him back. As he turns behind and looks down, he finds his wife's small hand keeping him from leaving. Startled, he stares up and sees Bani fully awake and looking hopeful with tears glistening in her eyes, despite her weary state. Jai sits back down hurriedly and stares dumbfound at her, not sure on how to react by this. He watches her lift her other hand up to her oxygen mask, and begin to remove it. He, however, brings his own forth to stop her from doing this.

Jai: Bani….

Bani takes his hand and holds it in place, preventing him from stopping her. She successfully moves the mask away and breathlessly stares up at him with her hazel eyes.

Bani: How come you never told me? …..Why did you not tell me that you love me? (softly demands)
Jai: (quietly answers) …..Was it necessary for me to? ---- Could you not see it in my eyes?
Bani: I wanted to believe so many times that I did…. But I was unsure… You are a master in hiding your feelings… and your actions led me to doubts.
Jai: Why didn't you say anything? (turning it around on her)
Bani: ….. Didn't I make it obvious enough?… Everyone easily caught on how I felt about you…. Except you…
Jai: (miserable) …. I am a blind fool Bani….
Bani: (tears rolling out from her eyes) … I have pined for your love day and night…. And hoped endlessly that the day you would love me back would come… Only to have that all crashing down when you spoke about ending our marriage… Mr. Walia, even thinking about being away from you breaks my heart… How did you expect me to spend the rest of my life without you?
Jai: (croaks) I was only thinking about your happiness….
Bani: … My happiness only lies in you…. How could you possibly think it would be anywhere else? All my life I have been dealing with only troubles and suffering…. And the one time that I actually was truly content with my life, you were going on to take that away from me…
Jai: …. Bani…. I am sorry…. Please forgive me…. I have made a mistake… I know this….
Bani: Sorry isn't going to be enough Mr. Walia… You will have to pay for all the heartache you have put me through….

Jai looks at Bani pleadingly, willing to do anything for her forgiveness.

Jai: I will accept any punishment you give me… I just want you to forgive me….

Bani stares up at her husband long and hard, before taking his hands and bringing them close to against her heart.

Bani: I want you to accept me as your wife truly… I want that perfect married life that every woman dreams of…. I want to have children with you that I know you will love with all your heart and bring them every happiness in the world…. I want to be your everything… I don't want to be just your wife, but your friend and confident as well… You must share all your feelings and problems with me as I will with you…. I want you to love me endlessly for the rest of your life…even when we grow old when normal couples begin to become tired of one another….

Jai's heart begins to swell in festivity on hearing her punishment, a punishment he will happily oblige to without any hesitance….

Jai: (smiling in relief and satisfaction) Are you saying that we are an abnormal couple? (slightly intrigued)
Bani: (smiling herself) No… We are different from others….because our love has no bounds… and we will not only be together for just seven lifetimes, but for many lifetimes to come….

Not able to control himself, Jai takes his wife's lips with his into a subtle, but passionate kiss. He caresses her soft lips once more before pulling back and resting his head on her bosom. Bani brings her arms around him and runs her fingers through his black hair affectionately.

Jai: I promise you, I will fulfill all of your demands. I won't disappoint you. You have my word….
Bani: (content with his promise, sweetly) I know you will….and please, from here on out, do not blame yourself for anything…. What has happened is now in our past… We must only think of the present and our future together….
Jai: Paar Bani, agar aaj tumhe kuch hojata to…. Main kabhi aapne aap ko maaf nahi karpoonga…. I do not want to live in a world without you by my side, main to aapne jaan ko---- (trans: Bani, if anything had happened to you, I would never had forgiven myself. I do not want to live in a world without you by my side, I would have given my life----)
Bani: (cutting in quickly) Nahi…. You should not think like that… Don't you dare ever think about speaking like this again… main aapko chorke kahin nahi jaaongi…. I am bounded to you forever… (trans: I will not go anywhere and leave you.)
Jai: (overwhelmed with passion for her, says all in one breath)…. I love you Bani.
Bani: (shyly) I love you too Mr. Walia….

Hearing this, Jai raises his head, gently breaking out from their embrace, and lovingly strokes her cheek….

Jai: Jai…. Sirf Jai…. Tumhara Jai…

Jai watches her turn slightly pink from this but her eyes shine with clear delight. He kisses her forehead tenderly and then places his own against hers, grinning at her while she smiles cutely back….
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A few hours later after Bani rested with her husband lying right by her, the rest of the Walia clan barged in a flock and quickly surrounded her bed, startling both Jai and Bani. Jai helped his wife up in a sitting position when asked by her so she could talk to their family. All at once everyone expressed their relief on her well-being and received several scoldings for being careless, especially Mausi. Slightly agitated with everyone attacking his wife, Jai hotly told everyone to leave, telling them that Bani needed her rest and to come back later.

Seeing everyone's pouting faces, Bani soothingly places her hand on Jai's shoulder, bringing his attention towards her.

Bani: Aap please fikar maat kijiye… main bilkul teek hoon… waise bhi, main bhi saabse baath kaarna chaati hoon.. (trans: Please do not worry… I am absolutely fine… Besides, I also wish to speak to everyone.)
Jai: Bani, there's time for that later… Not right now… My number one priority is for your recovery… I don't want you to over exert yourself…
Jigyasa: (smiling) Bhaiya teek kaehte… We should all let you rest… We will come later to visit…

One by one everyone gives Bani their own farewells and hugs, promising to see her later on. As they start leaving the door, both Jai and Bani here Dadi mutter, "Yeh hero ko achank kya hua…suddenly woh itana over protective hochuka…If this continues, soon he wont let us be around Bani puttar at all." (trans: What has happened to hero all of a sudden? Suddenly he has become so overprotective.) Everyone who hears this attempt in stifling their laughter, but to no success. Bani giggles to herself while Jai just scowls.

Catching Pushkar as one of the last to leave, Jai takes this opportunity to speak to him.

Jai: Pushkar….

Pushkar, stopping in his tracks, turns around and stares hesitantly over at his older brother.

Pushkar: Ji Bhaiya…
Jai: Yahan aao… (trans: Come here.)

Jai casts Bani a side glance, who smiles encouragingly at him, and stands up from his seat, walking over to where he stands.

Pushkar looks uncertainly at him, wondering what he has to say, and is stunned as he takes him into an affectionate hug. He looks over Jai's shoulders and at Bani, who smiles elatedly at them. Quickly he feels tears rush to his eyes and hugs his brother tightly back.

Jai: Thank you… Thank you so much… You have saved my wife's life… I hate to even think that if you weren't here, what would have happened… I will always be in debt to you for this favor…

Pushkar pulls back and gives Jai a meek smile, his eyes still brimming with tears.

Pushkar: Bhaiya… I did what anyone else would had done for their family…. I want you to know that I am willing to do anything for you and Bhabhi… Especially for you… You have given me everything that life has to offer… This is just only a small thing I have done as a payment to your favors you have given me…
Jai: (smiling, placing his hand on his head) You have nothing to pay back to me… Everything that I had done… I had done for my brother… Forgive me Pushkar… I have been horrible to you for the past few days…

Overwhelmed from being acknowledged as his brother once again, Pushkar instantly hugs Jai, who is slightly taken aback, but smiles.

Pushkar: You have every right to be angry, hate, or even scold me… You are my older brother… And I should be the one apologizing to you Bhaiya… I am sorry… I am sorry for being a terrible brother… But I promise, I will never deceive you again…. I have learned my mistake.

Jai pulls Pushkar back, holding on to his arms, and smiles in a knowing manner.

Jai: I know you won't beta…. I trust you….

Not able to withhold his oncoming smile on hearing beta coming from his mouth, something that he had been used to being called for the last 10 years and had missed for the last few months, Pushkar nods affirmatively at Jai. Grinning happily at his little brother, Jai ruffles his hair, earning himself an ecstatic smile in return….

Bani: Pushkar…

Bringing his attention away from his Jai Bhaiya, Pushkar looks over to Bani who beckons him over with a single soft nod. Pushkar gives Jai a fleeting look, who pats his back, urging him to go on.

Pushkar: Yes Bhabhi…

Bani, smiling serenely up at him, takes her devaar and best friend's hand into hers and stares at him gratefully.

Bani: Thank you for saving my life.
Pushkar: Bhabhi… I had told you before in the beginning of our friendship… I never want to hear thank you or sorry from your mouth…
Bani: I know… but I still want to… You are a good person Pushkar… and a wonderful friend.
Pushkar: It was the least I could do Bhabhi… I did it as a duty of a civil human being… and after all you have done for me. You've brought my marriage back on track and have returned my brother to me… I will always be obliged to you for this.
Bani: (cheekily)… What are Bhabhi's for?

Pushkar chuckles at this…
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Two weeks pass by with everyone coming in and out from the hospital, making sure to meet Bani at least once a day. Pia and Rano were the ones who made the most trips, and even volunteered at one point in staying at the hospital with her. However Bani reassured them that she would be okay and that Jai is always by her side, never leaving her alone for a second.
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Jai comes out from the bathroom, freshly dressed in a black suit and begins in brushing his hair in front of the mirror. From behind he hears a teasing whistle, and looks through the mirror only to roll his eyes at the sight of his best friend and sister staring back at him with smiles.

Jai: Get lost Aditya.
Aditya: Ouch, so grouchy in the mornings. Why is that? Is it because you're away from Bani?

Jai just ignores him and continues in making his hair. Jigyasa comes from behind with the puja ke taali in her hands.

Aditya: Jai, what's the use of coming home if you keep going extra early to the hospital and leave from there very late. Why not just stay there?
Jai: (sighs, putting his brush down) Aditya, you very well know that Bani insists on me staying home. Otherwise, I would had stayed there with her as well.

Aditya opens his mouth to say something, but gets hit on his chest from his ex-wife, who warningly glares at him.

Jigyasa: Quit harassing my brother. Today's a very happy day for him. I don't want you setting his mood off.
Aditya: Kya? What am I doing? I'm just having some innocent fun. Can I not pull my own best friend's leg?
Jigyasa: No, you may not. Not until he comes back safely home with my Bhabhi. Then you are at liberty to do whatever you want.
Aditya: (mutters) Killjoy. (Tiffy, i got this one from you.😉😆)
Jigyasa: (snaps) Excuse me?
Aditya: Did I say anything?
Jigyasa: Yes you did. You called me a killjoy.
Aditya: I am appalled by your accusation. I would not. Why, you are my best friend's sister and my ex-wife, surely I would never say anything bad about you.
Jigyasa: Aditya Bali--- you are such a pain sometimes.
Aditya: You cannot blame me for anything, it's not my fault if you are hearing things. Perhaps you should consult to a psychiatrist.
Jigyasa: Yoou----
Jai: (agitated) Stop it you two. You are in your thirties, yet you behave like children. Do I always have to remind you of this?
Aditya: Jai, if we are children, then you are our mother.

Jai grimaces at this, while Jigyasa tries her best in holding back her laughter.

Jai: What are you two doing here anyways? And together? I had thought you two can barely stand the sight of each other?

He is surprised on seeing both his sister's and his best friend's face turn a color of red, which gives him an instant flashback of when he had confronted them when they had been teenagers of the very same matter. They had turned a familiar shade of red even then. He gets disgusted, just like he had been back then on finding out the truth of his best friend and sister's relationship.

Jai: You two are back together… After years of hating each other, how can you possibly fall back in love?

Jigyasa only turns a brighter shade of red and doesn't meet her brother's eyes. Aditya, however, speaks for the both of them.

Aditya: (shrugs) We've had our differences, but we never stopped loving each other…
Jai: God… I feel like I'm twenty again and trying to digest the fact of you two in a relationship together.
Aditya: Why does it disgust you seeing me and Jigyasa together? We have kids together for crying out loud. We're not a bunch of teenagers anymore, we're grown adults.
Jai: Oh, so now you remember you're an adult and not a child. Whatever, you will never understand because you do not have a sister---- and Bani does not count (he adds in on seeing Aditya opening his mouth to protest). You did not grow up with her. So it shouldn't bother you seeing her with me. ----- Besides, whatever happened to that woman you were seeing in the office.

Aditya's eyes widen at this, shocked that Jai had managed to find out.

Aditya: (trying to pull it off) What woman?
Jai: (snapping his fingers, trying to remember) Tina?… Reena?… or was it Sonia?
Jigyasa: (bitterly) Sonia.
Jai: (smiling a little) So my baby sister knows.
Jigyasa: Of course I know. I got it out of him.
Aditya: Kya Jai, tum mere dost ho ya mere dushman? (trans: What Jai, are you my friend or my enemy?)
Jai: Dushman of course.
Aditya: (sighs) It didn't work out. I tried to move on because your baby sister was playing hard to get. But Sonia wasn't ready to commit to a man who had two kids already that were only ten years younger than her. And I realized that no matter what I'm still always gonna be in love with Jigyasa.

Jigyasa seems to become smug on this piece of news and Jai just rolls his eyes again, not wishing to hear anymore of his friend's and sister's personal matters.

Jai: Well good for you. May you two have a long happy married life and actually maintain it this time. Now if you will excuse me, I have to get to my own wife. I want to discharge her from that hospital as soon as possible.
Jigyasa: Oh Bhaiya, not before you take prasad. That is why I had come in the first place.
Aditya: (snorts) She's lying, she was following me. I'm telling you, she's head over heels for me.

Jigyasa hits Aditya one last time before offering her brother the prasad. Jai willingly takes it and receives a tika on his forehead from his sister, who says that he is off to bring his wife back home and from now on his life will change for the good…..
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"Ddddiiiii!!!," Rano screams as she pounces into Bani's private room. Bani, who had been occupying herself by watching TV, but not really watching it, smiles on seeing her sister and expectedly looks behind Rano to see her husband come walking in. She waits for a few seconds, but is disappointed on not seeing him come. However, she does not have time to dwell on this because Rano approaches her at the bed, sitting down on it beside her, and takes her hands into hers.

Rano: How are you feeling? Better than before I hope.
Bani: (smiles in an assuring manner) Yes, much better.
Rano: The nurses here are taking good care of you, right? If not, just give me the names Di and I will get Jiju to have them fired right away.
Bani: You will do no such thing… They are taking care of my every needs. Do not tell your Jiju lies---- (immediately stopping in her sentence) …. Rano, what did you say?
Rano: I said, give me names and I will---
Bani: No…. I mean… What did you call Mr. Walia…
Rano: (realizing what she means, smiling) Jiju… He had asked me to call me that. He said he doesn't want any formalities in our relationship anymore.

Bani smiles at this, absolutely pleased with this change in her sister and husband's relationship.

"Rano is like another sister to me… More of a daughter actually… But Bani, what I mean to say is that, your responsibilities are my responsibilities… your family… has become into my family. Don't think of yourself alone anymore…," he had told her only a few days ago.

Bani places her hand on Rano's cheek and looks at her lovingly.

Rano: Kya hua Di? Why are you getting so sentimental on me? (noticing her forming tears)
Bani: Arre Budu, you cannot let me enjoy anything can you?
Rano: (smirking) Nope.
Bani: (chuckling a little) I am just happy that my family is finally complete. Nothing's missing anymore.

Rano places her hand over her sister's and smiles back at her. She decides on moving on away from emotional issues.

Rano: Are you sure they are taking care of your well being?
Bani: (sighs) Yes baba…
Rano: (pleased) Good. That is what I want to hear.
Bani: (hesitant) Rano…. Have you come here alone?
Rano: Yes, Di, why? I took a rickshaw. …. (teasing smile) Were you expecting someone else?
Bani: (blushes) Nahi, I was just asking. …. Woh, Pia nahi aaye… isliye… (clearly lying) (trans: Pia hasn't come this time… that is why.)
Rano: Hain hain, sure. Of course you were expecting Pia…. Are you sure it is not my Jiju instead you want to see?
Bani: (pink in the face)….
Rano: (laughing) Saaf saaf aapke chere peh dekhariye mujhe… Aap Jiju ke liye intezaar khar rah the… haina? (winks) (trans: It's clearly written on your face… You were waiting for Jiju, right?) … Well too bad Di, he doesn't want to see you… He says he has become tired of coming back and forth to come and see you…
Bani: (upset on hearing this)…. But today I am supposed to be discharged… He wouldn't forget… would he?
Rano: (feigning shock) Really?--- You are supposed to be discharged today??? But Jiju was saying you weren't until two more days.
Bani: (now really sad) He has forgotten me…..
Rano: (giggles madly) Didi, oh god, calm down… I was kidding… Please don't get upset… Geez, he has become your whole world all of a sudden… All I ever hear from your mouth is Jiju's name…
Bani: (defensive, embarrassed) I do not speak of him all the time…
Rano: And all you ever think is about him nowadays.. You have forgotten everyone else…. Arre, give us other people your time… Or are you just going to spend it on your hubby dearest all the time?
Bani: (mad now) Jah… Tu mere kamre se jaoo… main tujhse baath nahi kaarna chaati… Tu mujhe baut saatati ho… (trans: Go… Leave my room and go… I don't want to talk to you… You harass me a lot.)
Rano: Okay, teek hai….

Rano jumps up and walks to leave, but is instantly stopped by her sister.

Bani: Arre Rano… I was just kidding… you took me seriously. Come back here….
Rano: Kyon bhai? I thought I tease you too much…. Waise bhi, main aapka paati dev ko bholnaliye jhaari thi…. (trans: Besides, I was going to go call your husband for you.)

Bani's face quickly brightens up on hearing this, bringing a small smile onto Rano's lips. It's cute how she always smiles and her eyes sparkle whenever she mentions Jai to her.

Bani: Woh yahan aaye hai? (trans: He is here?)
Rano: Duh Di… Who do you think brought me here?--- Well actually it was only after I bugged him a lot that he agreed to take me along.
Bani: Tumne kaha ke tum rickshaw se aaye ho… .(trans: You had said you came by rickshaw.)
Rano: DDDDiiii, think with your head… Do you honestly think Jiju would had let me come here by the rickshaw? He refuses to let me go anywhere anymore without taking one of the drivers.
Bani: Uffff,… forget it. Tell me, kahan hai woh? (trans: Where is he?)
Rano: He is in the process of getting your discharge papers done. I was with him before, but got bored, and decided to come here to you instead. He must be coming any moment now.

Just as she says this, Jai comes walking in through the door with a small travel bag in his hand, flung over his shoulder, and a the discharge papers in his other.

Rano: Loh… agaaye aapke paati dev… Khush? (trans: Here comes your husband…. Happy?)

Jai looks up from the papers in his hands and smiles brightly over to his wife, who flushes red from her sister's words. Rano had made it seem like she had been desperate for her husband to come… well actually, she had been but she does not want it to be obvious. She tends to get very restless when he's not around.

Jai places the bag aside onto the chair near Bani's bed and places a loving kiss on her head, bringing a sunny smile onto his wife's lips.

Jai: Good morning Sweetheart… Looks like you're coming home today.
Rano: Jiju (she says in a sing-song voice) you won't believe how much Di has asked about you… Seriously, I have become tired in calming her down that you are on your way… What magic have you put on my sister that all she ever wants these days is you?
Bani: (gripping onto his arm) Thank God aap aagaye… Aab aap iss pagali ko chup karwao… Main thakchuki isski fulti baatein ko sunke… Yeh mujhe baut saatati hai… (pouting at her husband) (trans: Thank God that you are here… Now you get this crazy girl to be quiet… I have become tired from hearing her silly talks… She harasses me a lot.)
Jai: (warningly) Raanoo…
Rano: Jiju, aap Didi ke saath hamesha kyon daehte ho? Khabhi mujhpe bhi vishwaas kariye na… (trans: Jiju, why do you always take Didi's side? Sometimes have some trust in me too.)
Jai: (sighs) Aisa nahi hai Rano… Tum to jaanti ho ke maine manna kiya Bani ko taang karnliye… She needs her rest… You will only hassle her more… (trans: It's not like that Rano… You know I had told you not to bug Bani…)
Rano: (remembering this) Sorry Jiju… won't do it again.

Jai turns his attention back onto his wife, who stares at the bag he has brought along.

Bani: Jai, iss bag mein kya hai? (trans: Jai, what is in this bag?)
Rano: Wah … we have now moved to a first name basis, now have we?

Both Bani and Jai gives Rano a look, which she takes as a message to shut up.

Rano: Wow..… You two get annoyed easily…
Jai: Poke fun of us later… I don't want a preview of what we're gonna have to face back home… You can team up with Aditya, teek hai?
Rano: (happy on hearing this) Okay….
Jai: (turning to Bani) I brought you clothes to wear once we need to leave for home…
Bani: Hum aabhi nahi jhaare? (sad, not wanting to stay any longer) (trans: We're not leaving now?)
Jai: (smiles, strokes her hair) Nahi… I still have to discuss with Dr. Mathur about your recovery in detail… He's busy with another patient at the moment… We will have to wait for some time…. Have you eaten?

Bani shakes her head in a negative.

Jai: Kamaal hai… has everyone in this hospital died? Where are they? It's ridiculous that they cannot even do their own jobs right…
Bani: Please do not get angry… I had told the nurse that I would like to eat later…
Jai: Baannniii, what is this? Why did you not eat?
Bani: (sheepishly, murmurs) I wanted to wait for you…. I knew you would have not eaten before coming here… so I had thought we would eat together…
Rano: (smiles) Jiju, you had to admit one thing… My sister is sweet…
Jai: (glares at Bani) Too sweet if you ask me….

For the next thirty minutes, after quickly ordering a breakfast for his wife, Jai and Rano stayed with Bani in her room until Dr. Mathur was available to talk to. Jai did not really mind the wait, he was enjoying sitting with his wife on the bed with her resting her head on his chest and entwining his hand in hers. He whispers sweet nothings into her ear, causing her to blush throughout… Rano, chose to sit up front and watch the TV instead, giving them a little privacy to themselves… No one disturbs them up until a nurse comes walking in, informing Jai that Dr. Mathur is waiting for him in his office. Jai goes off to meet up with the doctor, leaving both sisters behind….

Rano: Di… Let's get you ready while Jiju speaks with the doctor… That way we won't be wasting anymore time when he comes back… I know how much you are impatient on coming home.

Bani nods her head in agreement and lets her sister lead her to the washroom, where she receives help in changing into a saree….
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Everything was chaotic back at the Walia Mansion. Everyone were in a frenzy, making preparations in excitement for Bani's arrival. They knew from now on things would be different. Now they will officially be a family… There will be no more estrangement.

Anu and Rohit had even arrived to welcome Bani home with everyone else. Even little Arun accompanied them there.

They all await for Jai and Rano to bring the Bahu of the house back home, where she belongs….
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Arun who had been bored doing nothing in the Mansion, having neither his Rano Maushi aur Jai Uncle to entertain him, sat by the windows waiting for them to come. A few minutes into his waiting, he sees a black Mercedes pull up onto the driveway and he chirpily announces that his Jai Uncle has come…..
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Just as Jai steps out from the passenger seat of the car, he sees everyone in his family standing at the front doors of the Mansion, looking eagerly at them. He sighs while shaking his head in bewilderment, and comes around the car over to Bani's side to assist her out. She had injured her leg in the accident so she is not that well in walking on her own since it is still in the process of healing completely. But it is not so serious that she has to be given a set of crutches or be put into a wheelchair. She declined those options before anyway.

Bani opens her door and places her hand into her husband's outstretched one. She lets herself be hoisted up from her seat and uses her husband as a slight support by leaning into him and placing her hands on his chest. She looks behind him and over at her family, who some excitedly wave at her. She smiles and tries her best in not laughing at their excitement. Bani meets her husband's eyes and he smiles back at her as well.

Jai: Welcome home… (he murmurs to her)

Rano springs up at their side and urges them to go on. As Bani takes a few slow steps forward, she feels a shot of pain rise up in her leg and lets out a soft sound of agony. Jai, worried by this, quickly questions her of what is wrong.

Rano: (worried herself) Jiju, I think it is her leg. Didi, can you walk?
Bani: (trying to brush off the pain) Hain, I can… Don't worry…

She takes one more step forward, and scrunches up her face, trying hard not to make her physical pain obvious. However, Jai catches this, and wordlessly stops her. He astonishes Bani by lifting her up in his arms and carry her on over to the doors of the Mansion. Her face turns crimson just as they arrive before their family and hides her face into the crook of his neck as she hears Pushkar and Saahil whistle together at this scene. The rest laugh at Bani's reaction and the boys' openly teasing.

Saahil: Waah… kya scene hai… Hero uske heroin ko baahon mein laake aaye hai… (trans: Bravo… what a scene… The hero has brought his heroin in his arms…)
Pushkar: (praising) Waah.. .kya baath hai….

Jai gives them both a warning glance, causing them to immediately shut up but snigger to themselves.

Aditya: Now boys, we don't want our Jai--- I mean, our Hero to get angry and be the death of us now do we?
Rano: (remarks from behind) Too late Adi Uncle, you've just made his number one on his hit list.

Everyone else laughs, making the atmosphere around them even more light and enjoyable.

Mausi: Accha teek hai… baut mazaak hochuka hai… Hum saab milke dono Munna aur meri bahu ko badmeh satoonge… aab keliye… let's welcome them home. (trans: Okay, enough jokes have been made… We will all together harass them later on… but for now… let's welcome them home.)

Jai takes this this as his queue to come inside, but just as he makes a motion to move forward, Mausi instantly stops him.

Mausi: Munna… not like this… you must wait for a moment….. Jigyasa…

Jigyasa steps in front, moving up through everyone else, and presents Mausi with a thali with a burning diya and other objects on it.

Jai: (protesting) Mausi, iskliye kya zaroort hai? (trans: Mausi, what is the use of this?)
Mausi: Zaroori hai Munna… Mere baache saath ghar aareh hai… aur Bhagwan ke kripa se Bani aaj bhi humare saath hai… waise bhi, main jaanti hoon ke tum dono ke shaadi peh yeh rasaam adhoora raahgayi…. Main usko pura kaarna chaati…. (trans: It is necessary Munna… My children are coming back home together… and by god's grace Bani is still among us here today… Besides, I also know that this ritual had been left incomplete on your wedding day… I want to fulfill it.)

Both Jai and Bani look at one another at hearing this, and then at everyone else who stand behind Mausi with smiles on their faces.

Mausi: Arre tum dono saab ko ghur ghur kyon dekhareh ho? Mujhe saab pata chaalgya…tumhare shaadi ki saachai.... Aur main tum dono se baut gussa hoon… Aisi bhaari baath mujhse kaise chupaaye? Aur mera saabse bhara shikayaat tujhse hai Jai… Kya main tumhari Maa nahi hoon? --- Kya main tum dono ki Maa nahi hoon--- Kya main koi ajnabi hoon ke tum dono yeh baath mujhse kaay nahi paayi? (trans: Arre, why are you looking at everyone else so intently? I know everything… The truth of your marriage...And I am very angry with you two… How could you hide something so big from me? And my biggest complaint is against you jai… Am I not your mother? Am I not both of your mother? Am I some stranger that you two could not confide in me?)

Jai opens his mouth to reply, but Bani beats him to it.

Bani: Nahi Mausi… aisa kuch nahi hai… (trans: No Mausi, it is nothing like that.)
Mausi: (not letting her finish) Mujhe kuch nahi sunna… Main bus yehi kaaehna chaati hoon ke aaj ke baad tum dono mujhse koi baath nahi chupaaonge… Aur tum dono aab ek dusre ke saath khushi khushi aapne zindagi jeeonge… You will live a happy married life….and bless me with tons of grandchildren who I will spoil rotten. (adding on cheekily) (trans: I do not want to hear anything… I just want you to know that I do not want you two to hide anything from me from hence forth…. And now you two must live a happy life together…)

Jai smiles broadly at this while his wife turns beetroot, causing everyone to chuckle.

Jai: Mausi, I guarantee you that we will meet to your expectations…

Mausi elatedly smiles at this, pleased by his promise. She takes the thali in her hands and happily begins in welcoming them home, swinging it around in a circular motion and gently showering their heads with flower petals afterwards. She puts a tika on both of their forehead and steps back, allowing them free entry into their home.

Mausi: Munna, now you two may come in with your right foot first….

Everyone watches with smiles as Jai place his right foot in first and proceeds in walking over the threshold, keeping his wife close in his arms…
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He gently places her down onto their bed, which is surrounded by various different flowers and get well cards. Bani stares all around at them, awed by everyone's generosity and concern for her well being.

Bani: (softly gasping) Itane saare phool? (trans: so many flowers?)
Jai: Hmm… Some of them were brought back here from the hospital… I will have them thrown away soon…
Bani: (instantly) No… I want to keep them… Everyone has given them to me with so much love… I do not want them to be thrown away….

Jai sits down besides her on the mattress and cups her cheek with his hand.

Jai: Whatever you want…

Bani smiles shyly as a reply, feeling special by his centered attention on her. She slowly begins on turning red after realizing that they are alone and that too in their very own bedroom, bringing a laughing grin onto her husband's face.

Jai: Kya hua? Why have you suddenly become into a tomato?

Bani continues in blushing and immediately shakes her head in refusal, not wanting to tell him and make things even more embarrassing for herself.

Jai: Bani…

Smiling at his childlike whining, Bani casually plays with the buttons of his coat and lowers her head, allowing her hair to fall over her shoulders and hide her face like a curtain…. She again shakes her head.

Bani: It's nothing… (shyly)

Jai pushes her hair tenderly back and takes her chin into his fingers, pushing it lightly up, making her meet his eyes.

Jai: Bani, you were the one who had said we will always share our thoughts with one another… Here you are already breaking that motion… Tell me, what is on your mind?

Bani takes in a heavy breath before quietly answering to him….

Bani: ….. Main.. (hesitant)
Jai: Tum…
Bani: …..Aap….
Jai: (prodding her on) Main…
Bani: (nervously) Hum….
Jai: (repeating) Hum….
Bani: (breathes out) … yahan…ek saath…. (trans: Here… together.)
Jai: Hmm…
Bani: (becoming flustered and slightly breathless with his intense gaze) … akele… kamre mein… (trans: alone….in this room.)

Her voice trails off and she burns hotly under his intrigued expression and the stirred emotions evoked in his dark eyes…. She bites on her bottom lip, regretting even thinking about this fact in the first place… She watches him closely, waiting for a reaction or response…

Jai: (breaking into a coy smile) What are you trying to imply?

Bani feels her heart jump out of anticipation as she sees a familiar mix of passion and desire form in her husband's eyes, one that she had encountered a few times before… Shivers run down her spine as she feels her husband caress her bare waist with a swift back and forth motion of his thumb… Her skin tingles from his touch…

Bani: (squeaks) Kuch nahi….
Jai: (his voice husky) Do you intend on having your ways with me Mrs. Walia?… Because believe me, I won't resist if you do…

Her insides become chaotic as Jai slides his hand up her lower back and leans his head into hers… Bani's hands tremble from nerves and a strong desire of her own… She closes her eyes as she feels his lips brush lightly across her jaw and near the area under her earlobe, a very sensitive spot for her…he teases her like this for awhile.

Her hands grip tight onto the open flaps of his coat and she lifts her head up, giving more access to him as he makes his way down to her neck, planting sweet kisses along the way and nuzzling her in the crook of her neck. Bani pushes off his coat from his torso and snakes her arms around his neck, bringing him close… Her breathing becomes ragged as she feels Jai instantly take hold of her waist and press her against his own frame, kissing her feverishly along the column of her throat and collarbone in the meanwhile.

She runs her fingers through his hair, creating havoc in Jai's systems. He moves away from her neck and kisses her sensually on her cheeks, lower jaw, and earlobe. Rubbing his nose against hers, he whispers, "Bani… kiss me… please." Bani feels her heart pound hard against her chest and nervously hesitates in initiating a kiss with him. She showers small, feather like pecks down the structure of his jaw and around the corners of his mouth. Jai groans in protest and greedily takes her lips with his own, engaging her into a heated, crazed lip lock. He leans in forward, causing her to move back and fall onto the mattress, and firmly holds onto the side of her lower stomach, keeping her in place under him. He is careful in not crushing her, fully aware that she is still yet to recover completely.

After what seems like an eternity for Bani, she feels Jai caress her lips slowly before pulling back and gazing down at her, dazzled. She stares back at him in a breathless state and entice-full eyes. He softly presses his lips against her forehead and murmurs into her ear, "You need to rest." He moves himself away and stands up from the bed, only to be stopped by his darling wife who holds him from leaving.

Bani: Stay…. Don't leave.

Jai does not have the choice to refuse and neither wishes to as his wife pulls on his arm, beckoning him to join her back on the bed. He sits down and wraps his arms around her slender waist as she places her head on his chest, leaning into his side, and keeps her hand over his beating heart….
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She opens their bedroom door only to find the two of them on the bed, in a deep slumber, nestled in each other's arms….. Mausi cannot contain her on growing smile, pleased on seeing her two children like this. She had come to call them for lunch, but she does not have the heart to wake them. Bani needs the rest and Jai had gone through two weeks of stress and worry over his wife's recovery, barely sleeping himself. Deciding that it's best she leaves them alone, Mausi quietly closes the door and retreats back on downstairs…
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kaisa tha? I hope good. i'm sorry if any of you feel that i have rushed things between Jai and Bani, and didn't do a justifying job at it.

please leave comments.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok...im totally shocked that i managed to be first 😲😲...im not sure how that happened...but none the less...im psyched ...sorry for delay...actually...i had read the update on tuesday but i had class and stuff...so couldnt come back to comment...😳😳😳...lekin aab aayi hoon...that is what counts...right 🤗...

omg...im listening to "Love Suicide"...a great song regardless of the title...and the lyrics say "I'll be the greatest fan of your life"...completely reminded me of jai!! 😳😳😳...he is too cute in this past update...he was so sorry and worried...typical JW in love with his Bani 😍...this is for you 🤗...omg omg...so happy that you didnt drag the misunderstanding any longer...it was so painful to read 😭😭😭...dono ke beech mein itna saara pyaar...aur itne saare ghalat fehmiyaan ...but omg...pushkar...my jaan...he made it all good...in case you didnt know...i love him...just LOVE him...😳😳😳...he is too good for pia i tell ya...just too good...he is prefect for ME...did i mention i love him 😉😉...lol...

the update was great...from beginning to end...rano and jai, jai and bani, adi and jigs, everyone was perfect...👏...i totally had a blast reading it...it was the perfect transition between classes...had your update, some tropicana strawberry-melon juice, a turkey and cheese sandwich, pasta salad and a chocolate chip cookie...😃...what an afternoon...

cant wait for the next update yaar...make it soon iggy...please 😃😃😃...of course when you have time 😉

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Dil,

Thanks dear for the pm…..thanks a looooot for the long part…………I'm sooooooo happy to see your update.......Fantastic update!!!! 👏👏👏 ..Loveeeeed it........Thank god Bani is alive…..loved jai/rano relationship….liked the way they are supporting each other…….jai's feelings, his love,anguish ,his fear of losing his bani, the way he was regretting, his confession, everything was beautifully portrayed…..I'm glad Pushky n jai patched up…liked the way adi pulling his wife's leg….so masi knows the truth….last part was hot, sweet ,cute n romantic….. 😳👏 beautifully penned…..loved all jb moments….plzzzzz update soon.....can't wait for the next part.........

Love,

Ammu.

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Posted: 16 years ago
GRATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....................LOVED ITTTTTTTTTTTT....soooooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
thanko yaar.....you made my day....such a wonderfulllllllllllllllllllllllll update...marjava marjava mitjava.....over JB in your FF....
beautifull update....
Romanticsssssssssssss....
loots of JBssssssssss ones...
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
Sonam
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Posted: 16 years ago
Dude! Nothing short of amazing! This part was the one we had been waiting for! With JW doting over his wife like that and confessing his feelings to her beause he didnt want to lose her. Beautifully written! Everything from start to finish and Rano's reln with JW was awesome too!

I cant wait for more but I hope that you continue with it ! This FF is awesome. Thanks for such a lovely long update and for not making us wait too long!
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Posted: 16 years ago

That was a fantastic update. I totally loved it. I'm glad that all teh differences have been sorted out. I loved the way that Pushkar stepped in and saved the day.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update jaani!!

OMG...OMG...OMG..they confessed! OMG...they FINALLY confessed!!😳

OMG...such a sweet part yaar! Loved the emotions in jai, made me cry 😭...and bought happy tears after bani's recovery!! 😳


Pleaseee pleaseeee continue soon!!


Loved it!! 👏

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