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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Miss_Diey: You have your own FF now, awesome!

I am the first to read and comment! Actually, I have to go and pick up some one right now, so I will come and comment.

OK, I am back a day later, but I am loving it, Jeena is so cute!! I love her already, and she is like you! 😃😃 Thank you 🤗

But it was really sad that Bani and Jeena's parents passed away and they told her to take care of Jeena and about her adoption. Yeah i hope when Jeena will learn the truth she won't be too bad and leave Bani😭

Jai is the youngest child of the Walia family and he is out of town. Can' wait for his entry! Loved it...Miss Diey! Finally he's not the youngest anymore, i changed his age. He's the eldest now it's better for my story😆😆

👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: ridhijai

awesome start
liked it.
but yeh kya ND and KD died...it was quite emotional part...made me cry 😭 😭 Sorry didn't intend to make you cry 😭
but over all you did a wonderful job 👏 👏
eagerly waiting for the next part. Will update in few minutes 😉
plz cont. soon

Thanks to all for your comments. The silent readers please at least clik on the thanks button😉. I will post the next part in few minutes.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I have changed the age of some characters to give the story more sense. Also, I didn't paid attention when I was writing the 1st part, Jai can't be at the breakfast table cause he's in Dubai so I just change Jai name's in Ranveer.

Part 2
Walia Mansion

All the Walias, and close friends of the Dixit were there for the funerals. It was a painful sight. In the background we can hear "What if God was one of us" (it's a song from Joan Osbourne, I like this song very much and the lyrics too. I just want say sorry if some of you are offended by this lyrics it's not my intention to hurt you, here is the link if you want listen the song >Clik here to listen the song<, it's a very good song I don't know how the funeral are done in India, I just saw in movies, so I won't describe the rituals cause I don't want tell and make stupidities.

If God had a name what would it be?
And would you call it to his face?
If you were faced with him in all his glory
what would you ask if you had just one question?

Yeah, Yeah, God is great
Yeah, Yeah, God is good
Yeah Yeah yeah yeah yeah


Bani and Jeena were holding each other hands during the prayers. They want to be strong in front of their parents. Uday and Krishna was proud of them, by the way they welcome people and the way they deal the ceremony.

What if God was one of us?
Just a slob like one of us
Just a stranger on the bus
Trying to make his way home

If God had a face
What would it look like?
And would you want to see
If seeing meant that you would have to believe
In things like heaven and Jesus and the saints
and all the Prophets


The ceremony was reaching the end. It was time to do the late ritual. Nishikant and Kiran didn't have a son so Bani and Jeena with the help of Uday have done it. It was time to say the last good-bye to them.


Yeah Yeah God is great
Yeah Yeah God is good
Yeah Yeah yeah yeah yeah

What if God was one of us?
Just a slob like one of us
Just a stranger on the bus
Trying to make his way home
Just trying to make his way home
Back up to Heaven all alone
Nobody callin' on the phone
cept for the Pope maybe in Rome


Bani and Jeena was praying for the peace of souls of their parents. They cry but not very much.

Yeah Yeah God is great
Yeah Yeah God is good
Yeah Yeah yeah yeah

What if God was one of us?
Just a slob like one of us
Just a stranger on the bus
Trying to make his way home
Like a holly Rolling Stone
Back up to Heaven all alone
Just trying to make his way home
Nobody callin' on the phone
'cept for the Pope maybe in Rome


So the funeral got well and everybody needs to get back on their life and move on.

Two weeks later

Even with the Walias reluctance, Bani and Jeena go back to live at the Dixit Residence. It was time for Jeena to go in France for her finals. She will be back in two months. She has missed many courses and if she wanted work with her sister at the Waxit Group Industries, she should just go. Jeena was sad to let her sister all alone in this big residence but promise her she will be back soon and will never let her again. The last will has been read one week back and Bani and Jeena are the new C.E.O of the company. Bani had new responsabilities and wanted to fulfill them. She will work with Jai directly because Uday uncle didn't want to work anymore. He retired cause he was tired and not in good health after the death of his friend.

Jeena: Didi, I don't want you come at the airport. It's hard enough to leave you.
So take care of you. I said good-bye yesterday to the Walias and thank them too.
Bani: You're a big and lovely girl. Make sure you eat on time, don't skip any meals.
Sleep enough, and call me. Oh yes, don't talk with strangers.
Jeena: Ok, muuuuuuuuum.
At her last word, an eerie silence took place.
Bani: It's ok. I love you, and don't forget call me when you will reach your university.
Both sisters were in each other arms.
Jeena: I love you my diamonds.
Bani smile at her and kiss her on the forehead.
"I love you too" said Bani.

At this moment, Ranveer car just arrived it was time for her to leave. Ranveer didn't want to let Jeena take a Taxi so he proposed her to drive her at the airport. Bani was happy and bid them good-bye. She was teary but she wipes away her tears. It was time to go at work. During the two last weeks, she realized it wasn't easy to be one of the heiress of a such empire. But she wasn't alone, her Uday uncle was there and they are her family so she could count on them. At the airport, Ranveer was teasing Jeena.

"Just focuse on your studies, don't trust the boys" said Ranveer.
Jeena was smiling at him and teases him at her turn.
"That's why I don't trust you too" said Jeena.

She was giggling and Ranveer couldn't help to notice how beautiful she was when she was smiling. He rarely saw her smile this last days. After what she has gone through, it was normal. Without knowing why, he just kisses her on the forehead and told her to take care. Jeena was surprised by his gesture. She was to the point to ask him why he did that but her flight has been announced. She just asked him to keep an eye on her sister because he's her bestfriend. Jeena took her flight and was on her way to France.

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Bani has changed into tailored suit and was ready to meet Jai, her new associate. How she will miss to work with Ranveer. She doesn't know Jai properly and is a little scared of him. So, she took her car and drive toward her company. At the entrance she meets Ranveer and ask him about Jeena leavings.

"She took her flight on time and tell me to keep on eye on her diamonds" he said laughing.
"Pagli" said Bani.
"So, are you ready to meet Jai" asked Ranveer
Bani smiles fade and has been replaced by a worried look.
"Hmm, euhh, yeah it's not like if I'm going to meet Akhsay Kumar, yes" said Bani.

Bani didn't know Jai. She meets him at the office, but never talked with him besides work stuff. She has noticed how cold he looks. She was try to look calm and didn't want Ranveer tease her.

"No, it's just that now you will work with the great Jai Walia the man who can eat you alive" pleasanted Ranveer.
"Huh" said Bani.
"I was just joking" said Ranveer.
"Chalo" said Ranveer.

Both of them made their entry and once in their floor, all the glare were on Bani. All the employers welcome her, and greated her as Mrs. Dixit. Bani was going to her ex-cabine and Ranveer stop her.

"Bani, tum kahan ja rahe ho" said Ranveer.
"On the moon, I'm going to my office" replied Bani.
"Bani, you're new office is right there" said ranveer and pointed his fingers at Nishikant cabine.

Ranveer explains to Bani she's the new owner so her new office is at the other side. He guides her and let her enter. Bani is mesmerized by the dcor of the room. She doesn't remember that her father cabin was like this. Ranveer noticed her confusion and told her it was Jeena doing. She wanted surprise you and to make you comfortable in your new office. It was beautiful well decorated. On the wall we can see a picture of the Dixit family took during Holi. They were smiling and happy. Jeena knew it was Bani favourite pictures. On the table, some white lilies. Seeing them Bani smile. She misses her sister already. At this moment, someone was knocking at the door.

"Come in" said Bani.
Bani was too focused on her new office that she doesn't notice who has enter.
"Bani" a male voice said.
Hearing the voice, Bani knew who was the owner of this voice.
"Ji haan, M. Walia how can I help you" blurted out Bani.
Ranveer was laughing, he couldn't understand why she was scared of his uncle. Bani glare at Ranveer 😡 in order to ask him to shut up.
"I should go" was the last word of Ranveer before came out of Bani office's.
"Bani, you know you should call me Jai, I'm not much older than you" said Jai.
"Ji" was the only word she could say.

Jai explains to her that they need to go in Goa for a contract, and both of them are needed there. Jai had booked the tickets and they will go in 2 days. Bani was afraid cause she has never been in a plane before. Bani was looking down and trying to find an excuse. Jai has never understand why she was so shy when he was around while with Ranveer she was herself.

"The only problem is that we would share the same room, hope you don't mind" said Jai and winked at her.
Bani was looking in his eyes and was surprised to notice how his eyes were not cold. In fact, there is something about them, she couldn't describe them, there was something in there that she has never notice before. It was impossible to her to notice them when she was avoiding him in the past. Now he's in front of her and she was talking to herself.

"Gotcha" said Jai and was laughing. 🤣

Bani was blushing 😳 , how can she watch him like this, what will he think of her now. Seeing not reaction of her Jai touch her shoulders and ask her if she's ok. She just nodded her head. Jai notices her silence and lost look and tried to light up her mood. He was telling her, she has well decorated her office and had good taste. He smells the white lilies and tell her it was his favourite. Bani was surprised how a cold man like him could like flowers and especially white lilies.

"You like white lilies" exclaimed Bani.
Jai was surprise 😲 by the ton of her voice and turn toward her.
"Why, can I like white lilies" asked Jai.
"Because you're a cold man" Bani eyes wide up at what she was saying.
Bani, Bani shut your mouth, big mouth you are. He will eat you alive thinks Bani.
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to say that, it's just that you scared me out" blurted Bani.
"Oups" Bani put her hands on her mouth.
Jai was amused by Bani's, he has never think she was a funny girl. This week in Goa will be very funny. Jai just pretend to be hurt and leave her office.
"Oh God, I'm dead" said Bani throwing her head on the wall.


What she didn't notice what Jai was watching her, and try to not laugh at her 😆 😆 😆 . So he makes his way at his cabin and was smiling. All the employers were shocked seeing their boss with a smile. How it was possible???. Jai with a smile so the famous tycoon could smile, he was definitely a human being. 😃


I know you were expecting more about Jai and Bani meeting. Sorry to disappointed you. I didn't think it will be so difficult to write in English it's easier in French. Writing the part, I decided to give a funny part at Bani character.

How is it?? Please let your comments. 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yess!
! u updated!!! 😃

it was hilarious!!!!!!!!!! loved bani and jai interaction!!!

loved how she kept on sayin the wrong thing to him abt how he's sooo cold and all!!!! 😆

ooooh!!!!!!!!!! goa here we come!!!!!!!!! can't wait for more of bani saying the wrong thing!!!!!!!!!!!!! the melting of jai walia has begun!!!!!!!!! 😆

great part!!!!!!! really enjoyed it!!!!!!!!! 👏

pls cont soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
caught up
congrats on ur 1st ff
omg the 1st part was sooo sad 😭 😭 😭
so Jeena+Ranveer
hehehe...bani is funny
ya the trip is gonna b realy interesting 😉
gr8 parts 👏 👏 👏
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆

pls cotninue soon rest commetn alter
lvoed bani and jai meeting

this bani si didferent jai si funny

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start. 👏 👏

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing start
lovely parts
love jb meeting....poor bani 😆 😆
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Diey... lovely update... I'm liking this JB interaction.... 😆 .... their first encounter was nice...Do cont soon... 👏 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely update sweety......lage raho, me still swimming after u 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Will read tomorrow and comment, it's 2:30am here and I have to hit the sack.

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