Hello guys, it's been a long time that I think about writing an ff.😊
So here we go. I'm not very good in English😕 so please don't be worried about the grammar mistakes. My hindi is poor so excuse me for this too.
First of all, I will thank all the good writers who had inspired me. 😉
I want also apologize to you if some parts or situations are coincidentally the same that yours. 😊
It's my first ff, so please bear with me. It can take some parts to put the story on track. So, there is no Jai and Bani at the beginning. I will go slowly in order to try to make a sense at the story. I don't know how the story will go with time but it depends on you. So please leave your views and comments good or bad are welcome.😃😃
Part1: page 1; Part 2 page 2; Part3 page 4; Part4 page 6; Part5 page 8; Part6: page 10
Here the characters, I will introduce some others characters when time will come.
Krishna(65 years old) and Uday Walia (75 years old): Happily married. They have 3 children Jai, Nattu and Jigyasa. Krishna has stopped to work since her wedding she has preferred to take care of her family and stay at home. Uday was one of the CEO of Waxit Group Industries. The biggest company in India, and has begun to be known in foreign countries…😉
Jigyasa (40 years old) and Aditya Bali (45 years old): Proud parents of 3 children: Anu, Rano and Ranveer. Jigyasa and Aditya live at the WM with Aditya mum alias Dadi. Dadi is almost the same that in KS. Jigyasa loves very much her little brother Jai and can do anything for his happiness. She's not as evil than in KS. Aditya is a very funny guy like in KS, he loves and tease her wife a lot. They are happily married and love each other.
Ranveer Bali (22 years old): The only son of Aditya and Jigyasa. He's a very lovely person. He works with his father in Waxit Group Industries. He doesn't believe in love, he's a close friend of Bani Dixit and works with her. He treats her like her sister and is overprotecting when it's about her.
Anu and Rano Bali(18 years old): They are twins and are the daughters of Aditya and Jigyasa. Anu and Rano are students at the same University. Rano is interested by history and Anu by stylism. Both of them shared a very close relationships with their brother Ranveer. They love their uncle Jai very much. They have keep contact with Jeena who is in France.
Nattu and Purva Walia: Nattu (24 years old) and Purva (23 years old) are married. Nattu works also at Waxit Group Industries. Purva is 4 months pregnant.
Jai Walia (27 years old): Jai Walia is a man very handsome and very attractive. He was known by almost all the women in Mumbai. Yet, he was officially a Bachelor😉 but has many girlfriends that it's impossible to try to count them. But he was only in love with one of them (yeah sorry to deceived you but i'm the lucky one😍, if only it was true😆😆) So for the moment the lucky one in my ff is Pia🤢. He is loved by everyone. He is ruthless, arrogant and without pity when it concerned work. Only his family and his close friends know he's a very nice, generous and a lovely person. He knows Bani but not as much than Ranveer.
Pia Oberoi(24 years old): Pia is a beautiful woman. She's a gold-digger, a very determined person. She knows what she wants and is capable of everything to achieve her goals. Only interested in money, status, kitty parties… She's Jai ex-girlfriend. Today she wants get married with Jai for all his property so she tries to make-up with him😒.
Nishikant and Kiran Dixit: Nishikant has become a successful business man after his association with Uday Walia. They were childhood friends and had built a big company. He was the other CEO of Waxit Group Industries. (Waxit means Wa from Walia and Xit from Dixit, sorry but I couldn't find a better name😵). He loves his wife and daughters most of all. Uday was his best friend.
Bani Dixit (22 years old): She is a young lady, who loves life. She's Nishikant and Kiran Dixit daughter. The only one, so she has had a lot of love. She's a very good person, maybe a little nave, confident, trustworthy, honest and very well cultured. She's open-minded but knows her values. She's beautiful not like the beauty we see on the TV but her beauty was her serene face and not her physical. Her little sister called her Diamonds cause inside she's the most honest and pure person. Her only smile could bright a room.
Jeena Dixit (20 years old): Her father was the brother of Nishikant and was married with an African woman (Why African woman just because i'm an African😆😆 and want to be a part of this ff here and there😆😆😆) She worked in India since her young age. Nobody in his family has accepted his decisions so he has left India with his wife who was 5 months pregnant and has gone to live in France(😃, yeah it's where i live😉) Sorry but I really don't know how they die😕. After the death of her father and mother, she was only 1 year and has lived with her uncle Nishikant and his family in India. She doesn't know that Nishikant and Kiran aren't her real parents. She doesn't know the truth. She lives in France just for studies since 4 years now and will go back live in India just after her finals. She's studying architecture. She comes often in India for festivities, holidays…
Massi, Dadi, Tony are almost the same than in KS.
Sorry but the 1st part is very sad, I know for a beginning it's not nice but I didn't know how begin my ff. Once and again don't overlook at my mistakes I know they are many.
Real love
Part 1
Walia Mansion
It was a dinner time at the Walia Mansion. Nothing seems to make people believe that the end of this day will turn in nightmare and will change their life. All the Walia members were on the table ready for the dinner. Purva and Jigyasa were in the kitchen and had just finished to prepare the meals.
Dadi: Purva beti, you don't need to work anymore you should rest. Don't forget you're pregnant.
Jigyasa: Haan Dadi tum bilkul theek ho. I told her to rest but she doesn't want listen to me.
Purva: Nahi Jigyasa didi, it's just that Nattu wanted some pizzas for the dinner.
Krishna: Are Purva beti I thought it was you who were pregnant. But it seems Nattu is the one who has craving😆😆.
Everybody laugh at Krishna words except Nattu who was blushing.😳
Nattu: Mama you're too much. So are you all jealous because my wife has made pizzas for me.
Ranveer: Nattu, you know you should be the one to take care of your wife she's pregnant not you, by the way I think I would take some pizzas too.😉
Nattu give a glare at Ranveer in order to shut him up.😡
Uday: Ranveer let your brother (Nattu was happy😃 that his father took his side) you know he must be very tired after all he's 4 months pregnant.
Nattu was upset now, he doesn't want eat anymore. (Nattu if you don't eat them i will especially if it's salmon pizza👍🏼)
Purva comes to his side and put pizzas in his plate. He was happy and eat them without complain.
Aditya: Seems someone was hungry after all. 😉
Just before Nattu can retort the phone rings.
Tony took the phone, it was for Uday sir.
Tony: Uday sir, a call for you.
Uday: Ok Tony, I'm coming.
Uday: Allo, main Uday bol rahe hoon.
Bani: Uday uncle
Uday: Haan Bani beti, tum kaisi ho ?
All the family members smile at Uday. They know how he loved Bani and Jeena 😃😃.
Bani: Uncle, main hospital se phone karti hoon, papa aur mama
Bani was now in tears😭 and Uday was worried😕
Uday: Beti kya hua, sab thik hai, why are you crying. Tum hospital mein kya kar rahe ho???
Now all the Walia family was around Uday when they heard that Bani was crying and that she was at hospital.
Bani: Uncle, papa and mama had an accident. They are badly injured. Uncle, please I have no one on my side, Jeena is on her way to the hospital. Her flight has just landed in India. Uncle, can you come??
Uday heard Bani crying and was shocked.
Uday: KYAAAAAAAA!!!!!!:😲
Uday dropped the phone and tears were coming in his eyes.
Krishna: Uday what happened, kya hua, please told us.
Aditya took the phones, talked to Bani and asked her which hospital. He told her that they will be there in few times.
All the family was shocked and was crying. All of them drove toward the hospital.
Shino Hospital
All the Walias were at hospital and gather around Bani. Too many questions but Bani had answered at none of them. She was still under shock.
Uday: Bani beti, what the doctor has said???
Bani: I don't meet the doctor yet and the nurses don't want to tell me anything. Uncle, maybe if it's you who asked them they will answer you, please.
Seeing Bani so sad was heartbreaking. He just go to the reception and ask for Nishikant and Kiran well being. The nurse asked him to wait a few times because the doctor was in operation room and he will come out soon.
Just at this moment, Jeena has reached the hospital and makes her way toward the reception. She met Uday and asked him for her parents and Bani. Uday just told her they need to wait the doctor for more news.
Jeena run toward all the family. When she saw Bani, she cried her heart out. Bani and Jeena were at each other arms and were crying.
Jeena: Didi, how all this happen, do you know if mama and papa are fine???
Bani: Jeena they will be fine don't be worried. We all will go at home tonight hai na???
Dadi: Bani tum bilkul thik ho, nothing will happen to them???
At this moment, the doctor just came out of the operation room and go toward the family.
All go to him and ask about Nishikant and Kiran. The doctor didn't know how to tell them the truth so he asked to talk with Uday and Krishna.
At the doctor's Cabin
Uday: Please doctor, now tell us the truth please.
Doctor: I'm sorry to give you bad news but I don't think they will survive. They have lost too much blood and even with a blood transfusion, we couldn't save them. So it will good to send their daughters see them before it's too late.
Krishna: How can we tell them the truth??? They are so young
Uday: We won't tell them the truth right now. They need to talk with their parents a last time.
Krishna: But how, are Bhagvan please help us
Uday: Thank you Doctor, I'm sure you have done your best to save them.
Uday and the doctor shake hands and came out of his cabin.
Jeena and Bani run toward him and ask him what the doctor has said.
Krishna was trying to not cry so just go to the mandir which was near to the hospital.
Jeena and Bani were shocked by their aunty reaction but were waiting for their uncle words.
Uday take them in his arms and told them to go see their parents.
Bani ran to her father room and Jeena to her mother room. They will change the room after talked with them.
Krishna was come back from the mandir and not seeing the Dixit asked after them. Uday told her they had gone to see their parents. At his words, Krishna let her tears flowing down.
Nattu: Mum, kya hua, why are you crying???
Krishna: They really don't deserve all this and shouldn't endure all this at such a young age.
Jigyasa: Mum, I don't understand what are you talking about???
So Uday tell them the truth that Nishikant and Kiran will not survive.
They were shocked and were dumbfounded. Purva was crying her heart out and doesn't let Nattu arm. Seeing, Purva in this state, Uday asked Nattu to go back at home with her because so much emotions isn't too good for her.
Uday: Anu, Rano, aap bhi Nattu and Purva ke saath jao.
Anu and Rano: But nanaji , we want to stay with Bani and Jeena.
Aditya: Anu, Rano it's very late aapka nanaji is right just go home and take rest.
Anu and Rano: Ji papa.
Purva, Nattu, Anu and Rano left the hospital.
In Nishikant room
Bani eyes were red and puffy. She was on the chair near to her father bed.
Nishikant uska rona dekhkar, became teary.
Nishikant: Beti, please don't cry. I don't want to see you crying. If Jeena see you crying, she will cry too. Please you need to be strong enough for you two. I think it's time for your mum and me to go to god.
Bani: Papa, don't do this please. We need both of you. Please don't leave us.
Nishikant: Bani please listen to me. I need to tell you something about your sister.
Bani was now listening attentively her father.
Nishikant: Bani, only your mother, your uncle Uday, your aunty Jygiasa and me know the truth. Do you remember when Jeena was worried about her skin being darkest than yours. In fact, it's because Jeena is not your real sister. Your mother and me adopt her when she was just 1 year. Her parents get married against everybody wish and left the country. They died in a car accident and only Jeena has survived. We were her only family alive so we took her and treat her like our daughter. Don't let her know the truth yet, please beti don't let her alon she needs you more than anyone. Bani, promise me that you will never let her alone and will always be at her side. Please keep on treat her like your sister. I let you the choice to tell her the truth when you will consider it's the right moments. Bani, I know it will be hard for you to take such responsabilities at such a young age but I trust you. I know you will always on the right path. So can you promise me to take care of Jeena????
Bani was crying her heart out and nod her head.
Bani: papa I promise you that I will try my best to not let tears come in Jeena eyes and mine. We will keep on to live and smile.
Nishikant: Thank you beti, you and your sister are the best gift that God give to me and your mum.
Bani hug her father and kiss him on his forehead.
Nishikant: Now Bani call your sister to come in and go to see your mother.
In Kiran room, Jeena was with her mum on the bed. She was hugging her and telling her how she was living in France. She tells hers that she wanted to surprise them but right now she needed to tell her that after her finals which were coming in one month she has decided to come back in India and worked with dad in Waxit Group Industries. Kiran was smiling and stroking her hair.
Kiran: Beti, I'm so proud of you. You are a big girl now. You have grown up and can live on your own. Jeena beti, I need you take care of yourself and your sister. Both of you need each other.
Kiran just see Bani and ask her to join them. Bani lies down on the other side of her mum and hug her. They were crying silently. Rona nahi Rona was playing in the background.
Kiran: Jeena beti, don't you think your dad will be happy to hear the good news.
Bani: haan Jeena, go to papa he asks you.
Jeena kisses her mum forehead, and Bani cheeks.
Jeene: Mum I will be back.
Kiran: Jeena please give me this smile of yours that I love so much.
Jeena gives her big smile and hugs her mother again. She goes toward her dad room.
Kiran: Bani beti, I guess your father told you the truth about Jeena.
Bani nod her head and hugs her mother more tighly.
Kiran: Beti, I know you will take care of her even knowing the truth. I trust you. Just take care of her and yourself. Don't spend your life with tears in your eyes it will be a waste of time. Your father and me will always be with you and your sister. Even if we aren't on yours sides, we'll always be in yours heart. Do you understand what I am saying???
Bani: yes mum I made a promise to papa and will try my best to keep my word. I promise the same to you so please don't worry.
Kiran kisses Bani forehead and wanted to be in the same room with Nishikant.
In the same time in Nishikant room:
Uday was leaving Nishikant room when Jeena come in. He smiles at Jeena and touch her cheeks.
Uday: Jeena he's waiting for you.
Jeena goes to her dad and lies down next to him. She told him how was the life in France, her friends, her studies and her will for the future. She announces him that in one month she will back and will stay with them forever. She has decided to work with him at Waxit Group Industries with him and didi.
Nishikant: Beti, we are so proud of you. I'm so happy, you will be the best architect in the world. Don't give up your dreams. And take care of your sister. And promise me one thing. Whatever will happen you will not let your sister. She's your sister and love you very much. We all love you very much.
Jeena: I promise papa. I love you too.
Nishikant was crying and Jeena told him to not cry anymore. And what Kiran will think if she saw him crying. Nishikant smiles at her and hug her. At this moment, nurse has moved Kiran in Nishikant room. Bani and Jeena hug each other and was happy to be together with all the family members.
Nishikant and Kiran took each other hands. Few minutes later, we could hear a bip in the room. Bani and Jeena started to panic. Jeena was holding Bani hand and tears were coming in her eyes. Many doctors and nurses were gathering around Kiran and Nishikant. Bani and Jeena were in the corner of the room and in state of shock. Doctors were trying their best but in vain. They couldn't save Kiran and Nishikant.
Doctor: I'm sorry but we couldn't save them.
Jeena couldn't understand what the doctor was saying.
Jeena: Doctor what are you saying? Don't waste your time to talk with us just go and save our parents.
Jeena ran to her dad and mum and couldn't do anything else than cry.
Jeena: Mum, dad, please utho na. It's not funny at all. Mum, Dad please get up. It's time to go home.
Jeena was trying to get them up but couldn't. So she goes to Bani and tried to guide her towards their parents. She was thinking that if Bani talk with them they will listen to her. But Bani refused to budge. So Jeena goes to the Walia family and ask them to go to her parents and ask them to not leave her because her and her Bani didi need them a lot. All the Walia members were crying and heartbroken seeing Jeena in this state. Jeena didn't let go of her parents. Bani was still in shock need to gather her thoughts. Seeing Jeena devastated she goes to her and takes her in her arms. Both of them were crying but Bani told her to remember the promises she has made to them, so they should stop the crying and keep made their parents proud of them. Jeena nod her head and decided to be strong for her parents and didi. Ranveer goes to Bani and put his hands on her shoulders to let her know that he's there for her and Jeena. Bani smiles at him and indicates him to take Jeena away. Now Jeena was holding Ranveer tightly and we could just hear her sob, she doesn't want cry in front of her parents and didi.
Bani and Uday uncle just finished the formalities at the hospital and go to WM. Uday pleads Bani to go to sleep because it was a long night for her and that tomorrow will be the funeral of her parents. Bani goes to the room where Jeena was sleeping, it seems she has cried a lot after her leaving from the hospital. Bani saw her sleeping and promise to herself she will try her best to not let any tears to her sister eyes and will always be there for her. She needs to be strong for both of them or else they won't be able to keep on live and smile. She lies down on the bed and hug her sister. After few minutes, she falls asleep.
Sorry for the long i know is too long and boring part😕. Before you ask for Jai, he wasn't in India when the accident happened. He was in Dubai for a contract. But don't worry, in the next part he will make his entry😉.
So, please be honest what do you think of my first part😕, should i continue??
And once again sorry for my awful english and hindi.
Edit: I've changed the age of some characters in order to give at the story some sense. It's true that Jai was at the dinner table, i didn't paid attention while i was writing the part. So, i've changed Jai name's with Ranveer ones.
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