Opening & Closing of Wounds/ Pt E pg6 End

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Hey kanta di.
wow.
they both are violent much.
hehe.
anyways..
continue soon please

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Kanta thanks fot he updates. 👏

Very aptly described feelings and situations, wish they had shown some confromntation between the two at least.
Hope you will update soon. 😊

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tropa

@moonlitnight

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

gr8 parts di 👏
both r fighting with their emotions
eager to read what happens next
plz cont soon

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Twinkle20

@Twinkle20

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Whoa...Read the three parts in one go! Loved the way you made Bani's character into a strong woman...Liked how you gave her the strength to actually 'talk back' at him and retort...

She is one STRONG person I must say...She moved away at the end...Wow! Eagerly waiting to see Jai's reaction...And of course to see if Bani will give in, in the end... 😉

👏

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Fianlly the truth came out and anger erupted from both. I liked how you have made Bani's character really strong and loved the way she lashed out at JW and didn't accept his apology. The man can grovel and plead but still it wouldn't make to much of a difference cause he always resorts to the same mistakes. 😡

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

haila... part c update... 😲 dii... u r so sweet... just do me a favor... after updating the next part... just pm me... otherwise i would have to search for the link... 😃

coming back to the update... i like this self-control and outspoken nature of Bani 👏 👏

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

great going Divan read the last two part very good. the emotions apt.. continue soon
love
kamy

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Hey kanta di..
btw can i call u Kantu di..please

anyways.. aww i like this bani.. who can say what is in her mind.. without over thinking the matter.. to omuch..

continue soon please