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Posted: 17 years ago
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this short story (itz more like just a dialogue) starts from the time wen jai found out that ganga was his daughter and jb are at K/A's memorial thingy. i had been wanted to post it for awhile but never got around to it.

Jai: Tumne kyon nahi bataya ki Ganga meri bachi hai?
Bani stays quiet.
Jai: I had the right to know. Why didn't you tell me god dammit?
Bani (yelling): WHAT RIGHT DO YOU HAVE? KAISA HAQK?! YOU LOST THAT RIGHT WHEN YOU HAD KICKED ME OUT OF YOUR HOUSE 6 YEARS AGO.
Jai looks lost.
Bani Chup kyo ho? Bholo kuch. Chilow muj par. Mein tho hamesha galat hu.
Jai: Bani...Bani...
Bani: KYA BANI?! Kyo kiya apne aisa. Kyon?!
Jai (angry): BECAUSE YOU HAD A GOD DAMN AFFAIR WITH THAT LOVER BOY OF YOURS!!!!!
Bani looses all control and gives him a tight slap across his face.
Bani: KAUNSA AFFAIR?! WOH AFFAIR JO KABHI THA HEE NAHIN?!
Jai: ...Kya matlab?
Bani: Ji haa Mr. Jai Walia. Mera aur Daksh naa hee koi affair thaa aur nahi kabhi hoga. Woh saab apki galatphami thi. IT WAS YOUR STUPID MISUNDERSTANDING!
Jai: Yeh kaisa hosakta...
Bani: Yes, yes how can the great Jai Walia be wrong. Your sister filled you ears with lies.
Jai: But you were in a picture with Daksh.
Bani: THAT WASN'T ME! That was my twin sister Anamika, Daksh's WIFE!
Jai: Yea rite... Stop lying to me. Waise how many times did your dear sister Anamika sleep with her husband?
Bani: JAI!!!! (Jai gets another slap)
Jai: CHILOW MAAT BANI!
Bani: Kyun nahi chilou? Kyun Mr. Walia? Kyun apne saare vaachan thorae. Aap ne tho kabhi bhi mera saath nahi diya. Mein bhi bewacuf hee hu. Pehla kabhi nahi diya tha tho abh kya dega.
Jai: Bani...
Bani: Saach tho aap maan ne nahi walaa. Phir bhi mein aapko bataungi. 6 years back, Daksh's father had blackmailed me into helping Daksh. He had said that if I didn't help him then he would bring you to the streets. Woh shaadi ki tasveer jo apne dekhi thi, woh Daksh aur Anamika thi. In order for Daksh to get his memory back we had to enact his wedding. The wedding was a fake to get Daksh's memory back. He finally did get it back and banished his parents from his life.
Jai: Paar... Anamika kaha chali gayi?
Bani: Meri behan maar chuki hai. She got burned to death.
Masi comes to K/A's memorial.
Masi: Yeh saab kuch saach hai.
Jai: Masi...
Masi: Haa. Mein saab kuch pehla se jaanti thi lekin mein ne thumko kuch nahi bataya. Meine ek din Bani kaa pichaa kiya thaa jab woh Daksh ke ghar gayi thi. Thab Bani ne mujkho saab kuch batadiya tha.
Jai sinks to the ground and starts sobbing like a baby. (hehe sucker 😆😆 sry but he deserves it)
Jai: Meine yeh kya kiya. Meine apni hee zindagi apne haatho se barbbad karti.
Meera comes and sees Jai sobbing. She has a set of papers in her hand.
Meera: Abhi bhi tumhara paas waqt hai Jai.
Jai: Meera...
Meera: Mein tumse divorce chaati hu.
Jai and Bani: KYA?!!
Meera: Haan. Mujhe patha hai ki thum aur Bani ek dusra ko bahoth pyar karte ho. Mein dho pyar karne wala ko alag nahi karna chathi. Yeh paap mujhse nahi hoga.
Jai: Paar Meera.
Meera: Nahi Jai. I want a divorce. Abh tumhe aur Bani ko Ganga ko bechanaa ki liye koi bhi kasaar nahi chorni chaye.
Jai: Mera kuch naseeb tha jo mujko tum jaisi patni mili. Paar mein tumhe kabhi bhi samaj nahi paya. Abh meri sirf yeh ichaa hai ki tumhe koi miljaye jo tumse bahoth pyar kare. I wish you get all the happiness you deserve.
Meera has tears in her eyes.
Meera: Thanks Jai. Abh mujhe rulata tumne. Yeh lo pen aur jaldi se yeh divoce paper peh sign kardo.
Jai signs the papers and hands them to Meera. He walks over to Bani and wipes her tears away.
Jai: Pata nahi mein tumse maafi kase maangu. Sach tho yeh hai ki mein maafi ke kabal bhi nahi hu.
Bani puts her hand over Jai's mouth.
Bani: Tumko maafi mangne ki koi zuroorat nahi hai. Galti meri bhi hai. Mujhko tumko pehle saab kuch bataa de naa chaye thaa. It was just a huge misunderstanding.
Jai and Bani hug while Masi and Meera have tears in their eyes.
Meera: These two are really meant for each other.

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Epilogue- (2 years later)
Jai and Bani have a kid who they named Jani in honor of both Jai and Bani. Jani's bone marrow matched Ganga's and Ganga was now a healthy 8 year old. She was in love with her sister and she couldn't have a better life. She had her parents and her sister.

PS: Jigyasa and Karuna got kicked out of the house. Heehee. Oh and the outhouse raaz was Pia. She got kicked out too. (LOSERSSSSSS! hahahahahha 😆)

i noe it was probably short and stupid. I wrote it in half an hour cuz i was bored. hopefully u ppl rnt asleep by now.

*** im listening to the song tenu leke from salaam-e-ishq and im literally in tears 😭😭 wenever i hear this song i remember Krishna and Atharva and the way they had danced to this song. This ff is dedicated to them. They'll always remain in my heart. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 Jigs n Karuna out?? Yipeee!!

Nice SS yaar..just the way we want in the showw😳


I like ur comments on the side..funny 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

😆 Jigs n Karuna out?? Yipeee!!

Nice SS yaar..just the way we want in the showw😳


I like ur comments on the side..funny 😆



tyty glad u were still awake to write a comment lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol yea :) I wish this is how it happened...cute story
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thank you :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serenna

lol yea :) I wish this is how it happened...cute story



i wished too. it didnt happen so i had to write it for them. lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i really wish tthis is how it went... probably if this really happend meera will understand and leave. i hope ekta reads all this article bt meera leaving and jai and bani reuniting maybe she will consider it..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: 100%-princess

i really wish tthis is how it went... probably if this really happend meera will understand and leave. i hope ekta reads all this article bt meera leaving and jai and bani reuniting maybe she will consider it..



i dont think ekta guru will have mercy on us yet. 😆 shez gonna make us suffer some more 😡. i really want jb 2 unite. itz been sooooo long 😭
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