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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
Yes, torture him more....I'm supporting your mission 😆

very cute part piku, this sweet tortures are much better than hiding things from husband track....Bani is voicing out whatever she feels and Jai have to cope with all her tantrums and mood swings 😆....I'm liking this track 😃

please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Kk, felt really bad for Jai. Bani is totally losin it. She should leave the guy along. Poor baby. But, kind of feel 4 Bani 2, I mean shes havin a kid at that age. Bechari. Cont. soon.
Edited by Mitu1228 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
aww poor jai is getting torture..

that was so cute.. hehe lolzzz

bani.. listen to what jai is trying to say.. and not waht he is saying hehe lolzz

their lil conv was really cute

continue soon piks
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
jai... watch wat u say!!!!

this is not cool!!!!! 😆 😆

plz cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Thanks Tropa, Pachu, Ridhijai, Niruba, Mitu, Nir, Guli for your wonderful comments.🤗

More Jai getting trouble in next part.😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
Previous Part 7 pg 11
Part 8

Bani day didn't go to well, she was in an bad mood, she wasn't her bubbly self, because of the argument she had with Jai.

During lunch time, as Bani sat with Kamlesh in an bakery down the block from the caf. She twirled with her spoon in her cappuccino cup, as she had an slice of chocolate cake by her side.

"Honey what's so wrong?" An concerned Kamlesh asked.

"What are you talking about?" Bani tried to avoid her friend and business partner.

"Something defiantly is wrong, you drinking cappuccino, and eating an chocolate cake, during your lunch break. It's symptoms of boyfriend or hubby problem." Kamlesh stated.

"You are right its hubby problems" She agreed with her friend, as their eyes meant.

"What to talk about it?"

Shrugging her shoulders, "ok." "Why can't men have brains?" She asked her friend.

"Most men don't have brains. She moved her eyes up so she is looking at the ceiling. "Bhwagan Ji why don't men have brains?"

"I am serious." An laughing Bani said.

"Look on the bright side your husband is still hot." She winked at her part, making Bani smile which reached her eys.

"True but can't he have little brains left for his wife. I know he has brains for his business but not for his wife."

Putting her hand up in to her face, explain from the starting.

Bani explained to Kamlesh everything from how she was feeling self conscious about her self, and then of her sudden outburst to Jai and his answers.

"Oh no he didn't", as she took an bite of her cake. She was shocked and angry and surprised at what Jai called his wife pregnant or no pregnant.

"Yes he did"

"Bani how dare he calls you old and fat", she raised her voice little bit.

"Shh, someone will hear you." As they both looked around, and Kamlesh whispered."He called you old, and fat?"

"Honey, where was your shoes, sandal, chapal, high heels, and fry pans?" Bani stared at her friend like she was some crazy person.

"What don't look at me like I am crazy? Honey if he was my hubby, and he said that to me, I would have killed him, or smacked him behind the head with my sneakers, sandals, high heels, so his brain starts working."

"Kamlesh, she exclaimed I can't do that."

"Your hubby called you old and fat? If he was my hubby, i would have smacked him with my sneakers, sandlas, and my fry pan behind his head for some brains." Both were giggling.

"I think I have enough of your silliness'

"Seriously what are you going to do with jai? Mar Diya Jaye Ya Chor Diya Jaye Bhol Jai ke saath kya kiya jaye?

"What? I am not going to do anything with him."

"No way, you can't leave your hubby of the hook, by hook or crook you should punish him or this crime."

"Well I have something in mind, but I don't know it will work or not. "

"Oooh, tell me, I have all ears." As Kamlesh leaned forward to hear what Bani will have to say.

"Promise not to tell anyone, she meant her friends eyes.

"I promise, cross my heart, swear to die."

Looking to see if no one was listening Bani explained the plan to Kamlesh, who had an mischief and sparkle in her eyes.

"Your plan is good, but you are not going to succeed until you get some make over."

"Make over?" Gave a question look to her friend.

"Of course sweetie and you need to go shopping, to make you feel better."

"Ok," not sure about Kamlesh idea, and what her make over was about What about the caf?

"Our manger Rita will manage, why do we have employees." She ignored Bani's problems". Besides I don't want you sulking or anything, I want an smiling Bani, who is going to teach her hubby an lesson."

"What do you get out of this?"

"Nothing, but after this you can bake me an cheesecake or one of your delicious double decka chocolate cake. Deal?"

Ok deal, as they shook hands. "You should stop watching desperate housewife."

"But I am not an housewife, and neither are you." As they made way to the door, and Bani asked Kamlesh to stop at their Kafe, before going to the makeover trip. Mission Torturing and Killing Jai had just started.

***
Walia Group of Hotels

Meanwhile on his lunch break Jai was thinking about the morning incident with Bani, and how she got angry at him.

It wasn't my fault, why should I say sorry to her Jai thought..

When the door opened and Jigaysa stormed into his office.


At first Jai was surprised to see his Di, but when she addressed his name he knew he was in trouble.

"Jai Krishnen Walia, " She called him.

Di, what an pleasant surprise to see you? Do you want something to drink

"Good to see you Mr. Jai Krishnen Walia," her tone was very cold.

"Di, you just sound like mother when you say my full name."

"Good," taking her seat.

May I know what I did wrong?

"You told Bani she was old and fat."

"How did you know?" He looked surprised and shocked.

"Did Bani called you and complained." Over the last 15years Jigaysa and Bani had become friends, Jigaysa treated Bani like her baby sister and pampered her.

"No she didn't but Rano did call. I am very disappointed at you Jai"

"Di, its Bani's fault, not my fault."

"Stop acting like an child, and go and aplozie to Bani." She ordered him

"I am not going to apologize to her and say sorry."

At that moment Aditya worked through.

"Who is not going to say sorry and for what?" Aditya asked, as he saw his wife giving his brother-in-law man looks.

"Apparently your Saalesaab, is being stubborn and not apologizing to Bani for calling her old and fat." Then Jigyasa told Aditya what Rano told her.


"Jai, I agree with Jigaysa, you should apologize to Bani, she is your wife."

"It an crime to call and woman, I mean my wife an fat or old?" He asked looking at his Di and Jij, who weren't happy with his questions at all.

"Yes both Jigyasa and Aditya said in union."

"Why are my family members against me?"

"Jai, I love you very much, but haven't you learned anything you have three women in your family, Massi, me, and Anu."

"I am very disappointed at you Jai," Aditya shook his head.

"Great my whole family has turned against me, I wonder if I was adopted." Jigaysa glared at her baby brother.

"Bottom line is Mr. Jai Krishnen Walia; you are going to apologize to your wife, before the Holi festival at my house. I don't want Bani to be sulking; it will affect the baby, if its affects the baby and her in any way, than you are going to be in trouble mister." She got up from her sit, and headed for the door, Jai got up and escorted his sister out to the door.

"Bye Di, nice of you to stop by."

Before leaving Jigaysa turned around and faced her husband. "Aditya make sure my duffer of a brother doesn't screw this up."

"Bye honey, I will try to do my best.' Aditya smiled at his wife, and waved good bye to her, gave Jai an look like an parent will to an child when they are caught.

***

"Why didn't you give an compliment to Bani? Aditya asked his brother-in-law, when they both took their seats.

"She asked me and I told her about how we are not young anymore, and we are getting old, etc"

"Come on, Jai where is your common sense?" Jai folded both of his hands in front of him and looked at his brother in law.

"Bani is pregnant, and she is going to have an mood swings.

"I know that Jij."

"But you don't know if my sweet wife Jigs meaning your Di, and my Bahu Rano meaning your Sali find out, its going to cause trouble."

"Why does news, travel so fast, its like they were playing Chinese Whispers".

"Always agree with your wife, have sweet comments ready for them its simple. Or purchase them gifts which they will adore." Aditya suggested to his brother in law.

"So you telling me, you have to agree with wife/woman even though they are wrong."

"Exactly, if thought you are wrong, you have to agree. Or you can be sleeping on the floor or the couch."

For an moment both of the men imagined them self sleeping on the floor after an argument with their wife. Nah both said to themselves.


"Jai see you for the meeting with the Khanna's" As he exited to the door.

"Bye Aditya"

Jai ran his fingers through in hair. "Maybe I should call Bani, he thought to himself, as he picked up his cell, and dialed her number, but she wasn't answering or anything, so he text her.

Maybe her mood swings, anger will disappear when I will get home. Jai thought to himself as he picked up the file and headed for his meeting.

Happy Reading
To be continued on Tuesday

Don't forget to leave your comments, suggestions and feedbacks to encourage me.😛

Sorry guys I couldn't resist writing this part out😆😆😆, I hope I didn't screw my storyline up.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
Hey Piku... wow double treat...got to read two updates in a row... 😃 😃 😃 ... thanks for updating...


this Kamlesh is too much 😆 ... instead of making JB's differences resolve she's instigating Bani to take her revenge on Jai... 😆 😆 😆...


will look forward to Jai's torture...Love seeing him getting tortured... 😆 😆 😆 ... very mean I know but kya karen... 😆 😆 😆 ....


Jai is a gonner everyone is against him...😆...


Do cont soon...👏 👏 👏
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
Great part.
liked it.
can't even think what Bani and Kamlesh have in mind to torture Jai....poor Jai
Kamlesh is just too much....aag ko hawa de rahi hai....aag will burn Jai Walia for sure
Jai is not even getting any support from his family his Jigs Di just scold him off and Adi is also disaprove his act....
pretty soon his halat will be like that saying gali ka kuta na ghar ka na ghat ka
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

🤣🤣

this Ramesh is smthing. aag me ghee dalrahe hai 😆😆

poor Jai 😆😛

gr88888888 update👏👏👏

waiting for Bani's action😛

plz cont soon

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Hai Piku,

Loved all the parts 👏

Aww the kids are so adorable....asking papa where the baby comes from......little kids and their questions 😆 😆 😆

JB are so cute.....big trouble for Jai....calling a pregnant women old and fat was not at all the best thing to do 😳

It was nice of him to consider his friends tips 😉 😳

Now I wonder what Bani has in store for Jai 🤔 😆

Pls cont soon 😃
Edited by melonie - 17 years ago

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