FF:Unexpected Suprise Part 16 Pg 30 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ofcourse you will HAVE to continue 😳

MJ u started it..?? Wopieeee!! Was waiting for it since..umm..you told me on msn about it..which was like..umm...5 hrs ago 😳 😆

I wonder what the surprise is..?? Is she preggers again?? Orrrr..something else..?? Hmm..very fishyyy!!

Continue Soon..umm..maybe 2nitee😳 😃
Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Mitu, Damilola, Taj, Moonlight, Janoo, banibanijai, nikita28, preet, nir, pachu.

I am so glad you liked the first part. I didn't mean to make it romantic, i was just doing an conversation. 😳

For your lovely wonderful comments.🤗🤗🤗

Nir, no blackmail ok? One update a day.😡
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks everyone for your comments. They mean a lot to me.

Here is Part 2 as an belated Valentines Gift.

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Part 1 pg 1
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Part 2

After taking her shower, Bani decided to wear an off white georgette saree that was splashed with ornate work which comprises of rich red stone and beads, which was given to her as mother's Day gift by her four boys. Even though they made their hand maid craft cards, they make sure their dad bought something pretty for their mom.

Bani's saree



Her tailor Seema, gave her an new style for the blouse, which she was tempted to try, it was with cap sleeve, with an very deep back, and three built in inch straps were holding the sides of the blouse, making it look very sexy. (Its really hard to explain, as its one of my moms designs that she has for her customers.)


Bani looked at her self at the mirror, not satisfied with her hair, she gathered them in pony tail, and started to put it up in an bun, and started to add hair pins, after doing her hair, she started to put her pin, on her left shoulder when she heard and whistle.

"Someone looks beautiful tonight" Bani turned around, and faced her husband, who leaning against the door frame, wearing an black long sleeve shirt the first few buttons were open making her see his masculine hair, and in his hand he hand an red tie which was matching the bead works on her saree.

"You are not looking bad your self Mr. Walia", she smiled at him and started putting on her twelve vivid red rubies are interspersed with eleven diamonds to create a line of brilliance and color. Gemstones are set in 18k white gold for added sparkle along with an matching earring, which was given to her on her 30th birthday by her dearest hubby.

The image

As she was putting on her bracelet, through the mirror she saw her black hair hitting her back, and some hitting his face, as he inhaled the scent

"Jai," she complained. "What have you done?" She frowned.

"Honey, I love your hair down, as he ran his hands through her hair, and hmm, I love the smell of you mixed with your shampoo," he leaned his head on her shoulder, and buried is in her hair, making her get lost in the moment, and in the touch. "And that's an very sexy blouse he mummer as he gently kissed the side of her cheeks."

Jai, how is my blouse pattern going to show?

"Actually its not suppose to show", as he whispered, as he started to play with her three straps. "It only for my eyes to see, but I always love how your silky hair is open, and flys in the wind.."

"Jai aren't we getting late? "

"So let be, I have all time in the world."

"I wish the boys were here."

"Boys what boys?" He stood up straight. "All of our sons are kaab mein haadis." Bani turned around, and suppressed her laughter. Seriously, he scratched his hair, whenever we two are alone, they will come and interfere.

"Movie time, i can't cuddle with my wife on the couch." He made an sulky face, reminded her of their sons.

"That what you get."

"We can't even seat next to each other on the same couch. One of them will come and seat in between us."

"Don't forget we can't even hold hands," she added to his list.

"Shall I give them a call?" Holding her laughter, she started to button her husband shirt, and held her hand up for the tie, which he placed.

" When will you learn to wear your tie?"

"Hmm.. pretended to think, never."

"You are father of three boys, but you still can't wear an tie", she shook her head.

"Why should, I learn to tie my tie, then you won't tie them anymore, and it won't be fun."

"What if I am not here, then what will you do?" She looked into his eyes.

"Simple solution, I will just get another woman your souten." He winked at her.

Her hazel eyes grew big, and her mouth formed into an o, and then noticed him laughing away. Instead of taking the cushions and hitting him, Bani simply turned around, and started finishing putting on her jewelry and taking her evening bag out from the walk in closet, and put her cell in it.

As she was passing him, he grabbed her arm.

"Bani, I was just kidding." Without turning her head, and looking at him, said "let go of my arm", with an cold tone. And she walked outside their bedroom, without saying an word.


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Looking at her retrieving back, Jai noticed the blouse she was wearing, and he headed for their walking closet, where he took out an white shawl, from their drawers.


When he came downstairs, he saw that she was already waiting for him by his car, without saying anything he opened the door for her, and she got in.

"Seems like I will have to fix her mood," he said to himself, while having an smile playing on his lips, after he got into the car.

The drive their destination was quite as his wife avoided him, and stared out the windows, as if lost into her thought. As the car stopped at the light, bane notice someone in another car, that caught her attention, which made her break the silence.

"Jai," tapping her husbands hand, and pointing, "I think I saw Pia."

"Pia, how can she be here? Isn't she supposed to be in London for her modeling?"

"Yes but I saw her", she folded her arms cross her chest, but the lights turned green.

"Maybe your eyes are playing tricks on you." He shut his mouth, as soon as he saw her look at him. Or maybe you can call Pia, and ask her where h, he suggested the idea.


She nodded her head, and took out her cell, and dialed Pia's number, but it went to her sister's voice mail.

"Hey Pia, happy valentines sis, call me back. Take care Bani."

After her hanging up, she looked at Jai, who was concentrating on the road.
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You Belong To My Heart
(Elvis Presley)
You belong to my heart now and forever
We were there beneath the stars while a million guitars
Played our love song
When they said I love you
Every beat of my heart said it too
Do you remember
Darling you'll hear that song
And you'll always belong to my heart



As the song came to the end, Bani was holding her husbands left hands, as he was using his right hand to steer the steering wheel, and he gently brought her hands to his lips to kiss it, when her cell stated ringing. He let go of her hands, and swore under his breath.


"Hello Momma, the sweet voice of her youngest son rang."

"Hi Atharva, she looked at her husband who gave her the look, I told you saw that they are kaab mein haadis, and put her cell on the speaker, while he turned of the radio, so they could here their youngest son.

"Momma I miss you."

"I miss you to honey."

"Are you and your brothers behaving at Rano Massi's house?"

"Yesh, we are, why did Papa drop us at Rano's massi house?" She gave her hubby an side way glance who was smiling.

"Well little one, papa and momma are going on a dinner."

"Yuck, is it an business dinner? Rano Massi says it's boring."

"Where are your older brothers?"

"They are watching an Disney movie, that Ranveer massa put on."

"How come you are not watching one?"

"I was missing you."

"Aww my baby."

"I am not an baby, I am big kid."

"Ok you are an big boy, give your phone to Ayush or Amit."

"Wait momma, I was going to say?Happy V-Day

V-Day? What's that little one?

"Oh happy vale," getting lost and forgetting.

"Valentines" finishing it for her son.

"Yes momma, happy valentines day."

You to baby, oops I meant honey.

"What about me?" Jai interrupted the conservation.

"Happy Valentines day Papa. Here is Ayush Bhaiya," handing the phone to his elder brother, and going away.

"Happy Valentines Day Mom."

"Same to you beta"

"Mom where is dad taking you for your date?" She could imagine her son giving his grin, and having mischief in his eyes just like Jai.

"I don't know beta, why don't you ask your dad?"

"No thank you, he told us, its an surprise for your mom."

"Oh really. Why don't you ask your dad?"

"Then it won't be a surprise."

"Ok honey, good night and sweet dreams. Here is Amit."

"Happy Valentines Day mom, make sure Papa doesn't hold your hands in public, its going to be embarrassing." Amit shook his head.

"I will make sure your dad is two feet away from me."

"Make it three feet. Deal"

"Deal"

"All my sons are against me, in romancing with my wife," Jai said to himself

"Mom did Papa say something?, he asked.

"No, Amit, I didn't say anything beta."

"Good night dad, good night mom. Dad remember the no touching and kissing policy."

"Good night Amit, and say good night to Atharva from me."
"Our sons are crazy Jai, just like you." She looked at her husband, with an smile playing on her lips.

" Bani, all of our sons are going to be an law enforcement officers."

"Why is that?"

"Asking you questions, as you are their daughter, and they are your father, and I am taking you on our first date?. Lucky my father-in-law, didn't ask me that much questions, on your first date. He laughed."

Very funny, she smiled.
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After ten minutes, Jai parked his car in front of an Italian restaurant which Bani had wanted to go to since it got renovated. The valet took the keys from Jai, and the mate' d (that) escort them to their table, which was in an corner, giving them privacy, and they could see the dance floor. Each of the table was round shape, with an candle holder in between, with rose petals on the table, and the lights in the entire restrauant were dimmed.

After taking an look at the menu, they ordered their dinner.

"I will have chicken with rice, along with vegetable entree, and I will have Marchese DI Barolo Barbareesco with two wine glasses," Jai said.

"Its an excellent wine sir"

"And for desserts I will get back to you later."

"Sure sir", turning is attention to Bani."What about you madam?" The waiter asked gently.

"Make that one wine glass for the sir only. As I will have an ice tea please, along with Fettuccine Alfredo, as for my appetizers I will have spiced olives with lemon and fennel, and some salads."

Madam do you want to try some?

"No thank you, but I will have double chocolate Biscotti Toscani for dessert, along with ice vanilla cream."

"Sir do you want desserts?" The waiter asked.

No thank you.
What are you looking at?

"You!" as he leaned back, and the waiter poured is glass with the wine and brought her ice tea.

"What about me? "

"Today you are glowing, and smiling."

"Really, am I always grumpy?" As took some sip of her ice tea.

"No, but something is different about you today, and I can't figure it out."

Because my husband is romantic that's why? And I am lucky to have an husband like you and our children are lucky to have an father like you. She touched her husband's hand across from the table.

And they are lucky to have a mother like you. They stared into each other's eyes, and looked until they were interrupted by the waiters with their food.

Someone has and appetite?

"Excuse me?

"I mean you are eating like you didn't eat for ages."

"Well I didn't have my lunch," trying to make an excuse, and trying to eat.

"Hmm, not satisfied with his wife's answer but agrees for the moment, they ate their meal in silence, just listening to the music in the background. After they were done finishing their dinner, and waiter had come back and taken the plate away.

"Mrs. Walia would you care for an dance?" Jai held is hands in front of her.

Certainly Mr. Walia, I would love to have an dance with you." As gave her hand in his, and let her husband lead her to the dance floor.

Their was an fog mist, with spotlights moving from one couple to the another, while dj played an slow romantic song, from the 70s.

Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil
Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
(Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein
Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein) - 2
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho
Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana
Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko
Nazar nahin churaana sanam
Badalke meri tum zindagaani
Kahin badal na jaana sanam
From the movie Yaado Ki bharrat.


Bani rested her head on her husbands shoulder, as the music played on, and he held her by her waist bringing him closer to him, and once in an while he mummed/whispered lovely words huskily into her ears, as she blushed and inhaled her hubby's cologne throughout the songs, that were played on the danced floor.😳

The End

Happy Reading and please do leave your comments, good or bad. Your comments encourages me to write and continue the story. Sorry for any errors.😳



Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Piku, i truly enjoy reading both parts.....the kids are too cute......Jai is lovely.....Bani is sweet as usual....great work 👏!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part mamta 👏 👏 👏

aww jai and bani areee sooo cute

and d kids 😳 😳


aww bless dem

loved dis part

Edited by damilola - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
great part
they are a sweet couple 😳

plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great parts
That was so sweet and I have feeling that the surprise that bani has for Jai is that she is pregnant with their 4th child.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww sooo sweet
JB are 😳 😳
hehehe...the boys are such sweethearts
gr888 part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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buddy i just read all the parts...lol...there were only two... 😆 😆 ...so now im sure that she is perggers...she didnt drink wine...that is definitely fishy 😉 😉 lets see what happens...and haila...fettucini alfredo with marinara...eek...is stick to one sauce at at time...either Alfredo or marinara... 😆 😆 😆 ...mostly Alfredo 😆 😆 ...

cant wait for the next update
JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Piks.. nir is really.. sad.
u guys.. are after.. me..

anyways.. back to the update.
aww i really loved it.. it was so cute..
seriously..
they both are perfect couple.
and.. what is this.. is bani pregnant..
and.. i really hope this a nice happy unexcepted surprise.. seriously.. if not.. than i will..
start crying

PS u told me.. to stop blackmailing u.. and u started blackmailing.. me..

meri billi.. mujhe hi se meow..

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