SS - A Child's View - Page 2

i wish i could change your mind about the epilogue, and make you write one.

It won't make you loose the story line.

I want an epilogue, please 😭 😭 😭

Such a thoughtful story. No matter how old the children are...they can sense the tension between the parents.

The poem said it all...very well written.

Thank you.

Beautiful poem, Shrut, very touching...

Children are the one's who suffer the most in a disagreeable marriage, they should be the ones who should divorce their parents and look for a happy family...easier said than done! But a precedent was set a few years ago when a little kid wanted a divorce from his parents and wanted to look for a foster family. 😭

Jai and Bani are not portrayed in KS as constantly fighting in front of the kids, their problem is they don't talk much...But I have to agree with Sammy, JW seem to yell a lot at Meera and this is definitely not a good thing for an impressionable child to listen to!

Hey shurti.
first of shurti..
i want to say.. that was.. awesome.. the pain.. and the emotions.. that u should that u felt that a child goes through.. during.. the process.. when their.. parents.. separate.it is not easy.. to describe it.. unless u experience it urself.

but.. i agree with sammy.. and shobu di.. for sure.. as.. jb.. never fought in front of K N A so.. it is hard to image this.. but.. i feel so bad for ganga..

i hate those parents.. who left their kids.. to.. live and grow up on there own.. i mean.. if u r not able to nurture a child and love them.. what is the point.. of them.. to bring that child into this world.

Excellent SS Shruti.....lovely poem

You just portrayed a child's pain, emotions and feelings beautifully.....it's true we the adults or parents sometimes don't care about our children and engage ourselves in fighting in front of them.....and ignore their feelings....never think back how they might feel about this.....a child can sense tension between the parents regardless how old they are....but all children have every right to get a healthy home environment to live in......very touching emotinal story.....great job my Lawyer to-be 👏

Shrut,
It was a touching story...Beautifully penned!! 👏 Ganga has conveyed her feelings to her parents through that poem...Great poem!! 👏 you have beautifully portrayed the impact of marital discord on children...Always children are the victims of parents thoughtlessness n ego...Great job!! 👏
Luv,
Ammu.

@ Shoba and Nir

This is not about Jai and Bani or Jai and Meera. This is about a child having to go through parents separating and the thoughts and feelings of that child. In this I have shown Jai and Bani to have been together all the years hence the Jai and Bani bear very little resemblence to the KS JB per se.
So I hope i've brought it across that it isn't JB or JM but about a 6 year old girl Ganga! 😊

Shruti

Beautiful SS, Shruti!
👏
You have portrayed Ganga's feelings on what she was going through very aptly.
I loved the poem; I had tears in my eyes while reading it. 😭 😭
Why does the child/children end up suffering and being the one scarred for life for their parents folly?? 😭


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Originally posted by: shrutichopra

@ Shoba and Nir

This is not about Jai and Bani or Jai and Meera. This is about a child having to go through parents separating and the thoughts and feelings of that child. In this I have shown Jai and Bani to have been together all the years hence the Jai and Bani bear very little resemblence to the KS JB per se.
So I hope i've brought it across that it isn't JB or JM but about a 6 year old girl Ganga! 😊

Shruti

hey shurti..
we totally.. understand.. that i was just trying to say.. that it was a different.. story.. as.. we have never seen.. jb.. fight.. when kids are ther.e. so.. it was something.. maybe.. we couldnt.. image.. as we never saw that..

and we totally.. understand.. that.. it was child's journey..
btw.. thanks.. for clearing.. it.. though..

shu,

You have left me speechless, its been really long since anything related to JB effected me, this is so touching😭, i mean i love ganga, her emotions are so real, i was 😭 like an idiot in school, you are so awesome in writing, I dont want you to continue this its better to be left like this becoz i feel thats the beauty of the whole story, but plz plz pm me everytime you write a short story

Regards

Anju