FF-The Flowers of Spring, Ch 10 pg21..end

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MusicIsDivine!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#41

Wonderful updates, Tintin! Your intelligent, courageous, outspoken and innocent Bani has captured my heart. I am loving this story. 👏 👏

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Swathi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Hi tiny, this part has to be one of the best parts in your ff. Reason, it was a crisp flashback...had all ingredients the initial fight, hesitation, their coming closer and the story moved so fast. I especially liked their conversation in the terrace on their views etc. Not sure if I am able to adequately convey my views but it was great to read .

Swathi

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Jazmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

haila...bani preggers b4 shaadi...haila...aab kya hoga...omg omg...cant wait to see what happens next...

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preet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

Hey Di,

that was just amazing,the story is very fast paced and I am loving it.the developememt of the their relationship over the 5 days was beautifully penned down.Bani is pregnant and Jai never knew abt it.I really hope she can spend some time with him and their daughter.looking forward to the next part. 👏

preet 😳

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Somali Mitra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

Poor Bani, her predicament is every woman's nightmare.

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Abhilasha Sharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

poor bani, had to leave the house to keep her baby alive... now, when i still she might die... 😭 😭

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ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

Hey Tiny, amazing flashback...a small but a detailed one with all the necessary ingredients...
Bani surely is a strong n brave person..she managed to bring her child single-handedly. Due to the unavoidable situation, Jai doesn't even know that he has fathered a child.
Just hope that he is still in love with her like before and accept Bani n Jiya..6years is a very long time..
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