FF: MIRAGE part 41pg53Updated 20/04

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hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#271

Hmmm. So was it Jai eavesdropping??? And is he really really in love? I think the suspense is killing me. Obviously JB are starting to behave like a couple now and Bani's defenses are dropping. I hope Jai doesnt have to learn the hard way that hes actually in love.
Lovely update dear and a pretty quick one too.

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pptm469

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Posted: 17 years ago

#272

One of your silent readers..

Love your story and looking forward to the next update..

Please continue soon

Rgds

Sangeeta

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suwas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#273

Like how Jai's dad is. Silent observe who knows his son too well. he is so right. Just wonder when Jai will know he is love. Bani melting a little . How much can she resist the man of her steamy dreams.

Continue soon.

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btkr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#274

Haila, what a show - couples in the making, couples already in their own little world, pretty pretty costumes and cameras clicking away. Did u say no updates for a while?????????????????????????????????????????????????? You want us to die of suspense?👏

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#275

Bani having dirty dreams,,😲 if jai could get a to know that he would have use it as his weapon,,😆 so now they are talking like they are a couple odd,, cute update,, u pairing all the men up,, pls continue soon

Edited by ragamthalam0 - 17 years ago

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pooja1_76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#276

this was like dream come true.

amezing part

i liked Bani's wild dream

as well as Jai's getcrashing.

it was so beautifully written i could picture the whole scnerio in front of my eyes.

well done

please continue soon

pooja

(Sorry for the delay i was out of town for long weekend)

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pooja1_76

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Posted: 17 years ago

#277

ab aap kab update karoge ?

pooja😳

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#278

hey just wondering why did u edit the beginning part out ,, 😆,, i thought u update again and reread this update ,, then realized its the same ,, so i noticed u edited the beginning part of the dream out ,,