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Posted: 17 years ago
hey tam good update hopefully you mood is improved now that jigs gat a beating from jai please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Omg, I'm like having a heart attack! June 19th!!!! Really?!!! 😳 Omg Holly, if u are joking around, you do know what i will do to you! 😡

Haila, i am so excited!!! 😳

When are you updating!!! 😭

Come on jaani, i came out from the hospital. Update for this sick girl. 🤢 😉 😆 Please. 😳

Can't wait to read it! 😳

Love you loads,
Dil ❤️
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
waiting for the next update please 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

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savhii mein bahut angyr hoon kay liki thi end emin june 19th will follow muje laga is udpate mein hogii kay baang ke nashe mein😳june 19ith happen?😳bani dari huyi jai comforting and rthen😳.. em gogin red kay jkiay naughyt jai ne apllied cream on abni woo bhi 😳 i am goginr ed.. age comment bhi nahi liek par rahi hoon😳

ppls continue soon ...hey Davia thanks for ur comments and blushing as well...😆...will be updating soon....😳...

😡dav


Originally posted by: YOOUSHA

gr8 part ...hey Yoousha...thanks for ur comment...will cont soon...😃😃😃...
plz cont soon


Originally posted by: moonlitnight

saving

aww... Bani bechari ... thinking about Jai 😭 ...it's love..😆...so she has to think na...😳😳😳...😆...

hehehehe...Jai beta controoooooooooollllllllllll....😆😆😆...yeah control ...😆😆😆....

sabar ka fal mitha hota hai😉 bohoooooooot mitha 😛...yeap...u got that right...😆...

ermm...i dont think Jigs is the main culprit. i think its sm1 else....ur right it's not Jigs...it's someone else...😉...

19 June coming 😳😳😳...

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont sooooooooooooooooon...will do...thanks for ur comments Tropa...😃😃😃...


Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

great part
awww Bani is all worried about loosing him 😳 ...so sweet na...😳

i dont think jigs is behind all this 😕 wonder who could it be ...will find out soon...and thanks for ur comments Taj...😃...

Taj


Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr88 paret
cant wait to read the next part ....thanks jeenal for ur wonderful comments...will cont soon...😃...
plz cont soon


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Jai beta, controll yaar!!😳 There are innocent childeren around here (Tam do you know anyone?😆😆😆)
Aw Bani is so sweet, but she is doing her jasoosi again and drawing the wrong conclusions.
As for you hindi lessons, hum chaalu kar dete hai.
As long as the subject is male ( and I guess Jai is one am I right Tam😉) the verb will have the male conjugation and in this case it will be chorunga. (female will be chorungi). Kuch samajh me aaya?
Aye hai, my Hindi teacher will be proud of me. 😳😆.
aaj ke liye itna kaafi hai, kal phir hum kaksha aarambh karenge (good hindi na?😉)

Hey Ranjana...thanks for ur comments ... loved reading them...and thanks for ur Hindi lesson as well...😳😆... at least learnt something...😆...Thank you...😃😃😃...

Love,
Ranjana


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

hey tammy jani
loved the holi special episod it was grate
....Hey Sonam...thanks hun for ur lovely comments...and June 19th is on it's way...😆😆😆...
so june 19 next 😉

do continue sonam


Originally posted by: chander992

yay!!!...gr8 part... ...Hey Chander...
i couldnt comment before cuz my p.c was screwed....well at least u commented now...😃...hope ur computer is well...even I hate it when my computer causes me trouble... ive been readin it from the begining.......thanks for reading...so yea...june 19?? doesnt he have to know that she is BAni??? ...well he will find out about that but not now...😉...
anyways cont soon...will do and thanks for ur lobvely comments...😃...


Originally posted by: ruma

excellent part, cant wait 19th june coming up soon 😃 continue soon...thanks Ruma for ur comments will update soon...😳


Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

Hi
Just today i read ur all FF
loved it
jai and bani are too gud
that sari event and anu's innocence was too cute
emmm so june 19th in next chapter
waiting for it
thanksssssssss
....Hey Pooja...Thanks for ur comments and reading...glad u liked it...and will update soon...😃...


Originally posted by: Twinkle_23

Jigs- 😡
Bani- 😉
jai- 😍
pls do smth about jigs ...hey Twinkle...Thanks for ur comments ...and sorry for the delay... will be updating soon...and June 19th will be there...😆😆😆...
so is next update gonna be 19 june? 😍
plsssssssss cont soon


Originally posted by: culgal86

hey ...

awesome part.... ...Hey ...Thanks for ur comments...will update soon...😃😃😃..

update soon


Originally posted by: Hritzfan

Read the last two parts.loved them.cont soon...Hey Thanks for ur comments will update soon...😃😃😃...



Originally posted by: purpletoxic

hey tam good update hopefully you mood is improved now that jigs gat a beating from jai please update soon...hey thanks for ur comments dear...and yeah my mood is a bit better...😆...so will be updating soon...and sorry to keep you all waiting...😃....


Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

Omg, I'm like having a heart attack! June 19th!!!! Really?!!! 😳 Omg Holly, if u are joking around, you do know what i will do to you! 😡 ... No...not joking...😆...you will find out in next part...😳😳😳...

Haila, i am so excited!!! 😳 ...me too...😆...

When are you updating!!! 😭 ...just in some time...😃😃😃...

Come on jaani, i came out from the hospital. Update for this sick girl. 🤢 😉 😆 Please. 😳 .. what a way to blackmail...chalo thik hai...will update soon....

Can't wait to read it! 😳

Love you loads, ...love you too...and thanks for ur comments...😃😃😃....
Dil ❤️


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey guys sorry for the delay and here goes the next part... this part is dedicated to Davia...who was after me for an update...and also to Dil...as she was unwell....and to all my wonderful readers who were waiting for this special part....sorry for any mistakes...Love you all.... 🤗....


Jai: kya baat hai Bani... he couldn't finish his sentence as Bani hugged him tightly as if he will go away from her... someone will snatch him away.... it didn't take much time for Jai to realize why she behaved that way... most probably sahe remembered that women....so hugged her back wrapping his arm around her....

chapter 40
Bani was thinking she has to do something before things get out of control and since today is holi so it was not possible for her to go out at the hospital to meet that doctor... since she has waited that long...so one more day of wait will not harm...but she has to sort things out very soon...especially she needs to take a step forward to advance her and Jai relationship that too soon...very soon.....

Jai separated themselves from the hug and asked if she was ok...Bani you ok na....don't worry mein hoon na...Bani just nodded her head in a positive direction and hugged him again....

Just then Rano came saying aare wah...kya romance ho rahin hai... hearing Rano's comment both Jai Bani untangled themselves from the hug....

Rano: Di woh dekho Pushkar aan rahan hai... isn't he looking so cute in that white kurta...

Bani: Rano chup kar...
Jai: my dear saliji ab romantic kaun ho hara hain...haan....
Pushkar came forward towards Masi and wished her happy holi and took her blessings afterwards he came forwards and wished Jai and Bani happy holi he hugged both of them...afterwards Pushkar wished Rano happy holi too and hugged her... Rano was in 7th heaven... did he really hugged her... oh my God it feels so good...Jai was laughing slyly at her facial expression...

Rano: Jiju chalo na aap mere aur Anu ke saath holi khelo ge...Di ke saath baad mein romance kar lena...
Jai: lekin Rano... he couldn't finish his sentence as Rano drugged him from there....leaving Pushkar and BAni behind...

Bani: Pushkar...we can't go today to meet the doctor ... you know na...it's holi and everyone will be looking for us if u leave this place...

Pushkar: I understand Bani and you don't worry about anything...we'll go there first thing tomorrow morning…
Holi was full of masti as they had lot of fun… had bhang and all...played with colours of different rang.... the day almost came to an end after so much bhagam bhag everyone was tired and retired to their respective bedrooms....

Jai was sitting on the bed as he got all cleaned up of the rang and was buttoning his night top…while Bani was in bathroom washing herself… Bani looked at the mirror inside and looked at the tiny box that was near the basin… she took it in her hand and open it …

Flashback:
Rano: Di pehle ke mein bhool jao… yeh lijiyein aap ki aamanat…
Bani: yeh kya hai Rano…
Rano: Di aap bhool gayein… remember Jiju sent you a gift in our place… so I thought I'll give it to you…
Bani: thanks Rano….
Flashback end…

Bani opend the small box and took out the golden colored small nose ring out of it… well accrding to her…it was really beautiful… it's the first gift Jai has ever given to her… so bound to be beautiful and most precious… she loved it… she hasn't wore a nose ring since she had left Mumbai to London 2 and years ago… a bit hesitantly dhe put the ring on her nose…and looked herself in the mirroe…there are no rang on her face…only sindoor is adorned on her forhead…that was placed by her sweet husband while playing holi….

...She looked at the mirror again and thought she did look good wearing that nose ring… felt like old Bani who used to wear westernize cloth… all tomboyish… but she also loved the fact that she's not that tomboyish girl anymore … but a grown up women… wife of someone… not someone…but wife of Jai Walia…Mrs. Bani Walia… she blushed at her own thought … and slowly made her way out of the bathroom thinking what will Jai think seeing her wearing the nose ring… would he like it…

Jai heard the bathroom door clicked open and looked towards the door… and he remained rooted at his place…she looked gorgeous… since the morning he was waiting for them to be alone… she was still in that white saree… her hair are opened across her back… and she's wearing that nose ring as well… and it didn't take him much long to guess Rano must have brought it with her today… she looked exactly like that rainy day… the day he met her for the very first time… even in that day she was wearing a white saree and a nose ring as well… the only difference is that that day she was a stranger to him … who touched his heart just in one look… but today that very stanger is none other than his wife…yes HIS WIFE… she is only his…

...Jai broke out from his thought as he saw her approaching towards him… he just stand up from the sitting position. And looked at her… from his look Bani could make out what sort of effect she was having on him…Bani made Jai sit on the edge of the bed… she smiled a bit and made herself comfortable as she sat in his lap….making Jai shocked…what is his wife upto… why is she hell bent on seducing him… doesn't she know how difficult it is for him to control himself… damn…that damn doctor… otherwise no-one would've been able to stop him from coming close to his gorgeous wife…he could strangle that doctor with his hand… thinking of his hand he found them resting on his wife's slim waist…

Bani: Jai … aapne batayein nahin mein kaisie lag rein hoon…
Jai looked at Bani ashe said…God Damn Bani … tumne bhag pee rakkhi hai kya… kyun mujhe jaan se marne par tuli huyein ho…

Bani let out a small chuckle …as she placed her palm on his cheek she asked… Jai aapne abhi tak batayein nahin mein kaisie dekh rein hoon…

Jai: you're looking gorgeous sweetheart… ab batao tumhara irada kya hai… jahan tak mujhe yaad hai… tumne tu bhag nahin peeya tha… tu phir…itni azeeb tarah ki bartab kyun kar rein ho…Bani didn't let him finish his sentence as she wrapped her hands around his neck and hugged him burying her face in his neck…

Jai was taken back with her sudden hug…but it felt so good to held her so close to himself… that he wanted the time to stood still…so that she would remain with him for like eternity…

Jai was all concerned as what's wrong with her… is she behaving like this coz she's scared of that women…something has to be done to deal with that problem… but before that he needs to find out if Bani is ok…and nothing is bothering her… so in a concerned voice he asked if she was ok…Bani are you ok… is there something bothering you…

Nahin Jai … I'm absolutely fine… can't I hug my husband… can't I love my husband…Is there something wrong with that…saying that she pulled out from the hug and kissed his cheeks…eyes….nose…and went down kissing his side of neck …and finally she placed kisses on his chest through the opening of his night suite….

Bani froze as she didn't get any reaction from Jai… doesn't he want her… doesn't he love her… oh God did she misunderstood him… thinking the worst tears formed in her eyes… but on the other hand Jai was too overwhelved by the love which Bani was showering on him…he was savouring the feeling of having her so close…

Bani looked up at him as she got herself detached from him… there were tears rolling down her cheeks… Jai looked at her…and saw the tears…' Bani yeh ansoon kyun'?...he asked….

Bani: I'm sorry Jai… shayad mujhe aisa nahin karma chaiyein tha… I understand if you don't want me… Jai didn't let her finish her sentence…was she out of her mind…what rubbish is she talking about…

'Bani ssshhh….kaisie batein kar rein ho…I love you more than anything you know that…phir bhi…' his words somehow relieved Bani … she was feeling very content with the next thing that jai did….

Jai look her face in between his palm…exactly like her…he kissed her forhead…both eyes…nose ….cheeks … and went down kissing nuzzling her neck… shoulder….he slowly unpinned her saree…removed her saree… and looked at her…and laid her down….. he kissed her stomach and went upto her face kissing her…. And asked her…

Bani are you sure about this…subhe ueth kar mujhe maro gi tu nahin…he said smilingly… Bani just looked at him as a small smile apperered on her face… she just pulled him down and kissed him with all the love she has in herself….the kiss was sweet but soon turned into a passionate one as Jai Bani both lost in each other…Jai was creating wonder magic and hot waves inside her with his touch … hand …and his mouth…. The night was full of love that created wonderful feelings and a sense of belonging in both of them as the starts and the moon witness their passionate love throughout the whole night….

The night comes to an end...sorry if this didn't live upto your expectations...I tried My best...I suck don't I in these romantic stuff...sorry for any mistakes...and if it is too bad do let me know and I will edit it...😳😳😳...

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

😳

comemnt later ..

i am fainting here😳

that was a lvoely udpate so rnao flirting with jai and playign holi toooo pusky there too😆

jb huggy huggy🤗kya baat hain donon ko hua kya hia? hm shayd pyaar 😉

hmm holi ke abat gift woo bhi nose ring.... 😉white sareee😉hmm then haila bani ne jai ke lap apr baitgayi hailaa.....

hpir deere dheere hua june 19th 😳

me first

pls cotninue soon mean soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

👏

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
gr88 part plzz cont soon
wow finaLLY JB CONSUUMATE
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was wonderful
Bechara Jai cant come near his wife but I think his all complain is vanished
Waiting for the next one
Dont make it long as before
Thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
Omg Holly!!!! 😳 They've finally become into one! About time! 😆 --that is what Jai will be thinking as well! 😳 Who knew that Bani can be so bold! 😉 😆 😳 Definitely enjoyed this part! 😳 Despite it being short. And thanks for dedicating it to me jaani! 😳 😃 🤗 You're the best! 😉

Love you loads,
Dil ❤️
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😳 😳.Atlast they became one. And dont u dare seperate them .cont soon 😳

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