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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part!!!!!!!!!!


awwww its jai's bday!!!!!!!!!!! let's party!!!!!!! 🥳


a request: can we see more interaction(dialogues)b/w jb!!! 😳

really enjoyed reading it!!!!!! great update 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
aewsum part though short one!!!

jaldi jaldi likho yaar!!


gr8 update!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
its gr8 buddy.... plzzzzz cont soon.... 😃 😉
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& i agree wid aNsHu.... plzzz show more between JnB.... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
wonderful story i hope no body comes in between these two people
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

The party started and everyone was having fun. Dadi and Masi were getting filmy. Rano and Ranveer danced on a medley of songs. Jai and Bani danced a lot and everyone had fun. The night ended and everyone went to bed.

The next day at breakfast it was just Jai and Bani at the tableand no one else was there. Everyone was sleeping since it was Saturday, but Jai still had to go to work. Bani gave him company at the breakfast table. Jai was reading the newspaper while Bani kept going in and out of the kitchen. She was making Jai's favorite breakfast, poha and French toast. She finally sat down and started eating together.

Suddenly, Jai started staring at Bani in her nightgown and her hair rolled up. She was even wearing her thick black square reading glasses while she ate breakfast and read the newspaper. He thought how cute she looks just in a mess.

Bani: "Jai what are you doing?"

Jai: "What do you mean?" he said, while winking at Bani.

Bani: "Jai you're dipping your toasted bread into coffee"

Jai: "So what, I'm different"

Bani: "That's not the part that confuses me, the part that your piece of bread has jam on it weirds me out"

Jai: "Haven't you seen anyone do that before"

Jai was just trying to cover up his mistake.

Bani: "Ooooookkkkk. Remind me why I married you again? Oh yea, I remember, it was for the money"

Jai left the table angrily and left for work.

Bani knew she had to cheer him up and make up with him, but she had a million things to do that day. She had to start by watching her favorite serials on IF. She loved the atmosphere of IF and liked the fact that everything was online.

Walia Industries

Jai was actually working today when he got a knock on the door. When he opened the door he saw a girl. She was about five foot seven inches dressed in a sparkly blue saree and wore two inch heels. She also had on a diamond necklace with matching bracelet with her hair perfectly straightened and let down. She didn't need makeup, her simple beauty was enough.

Jai looked at her from head to toe and gasped.

He instantly hugged the girl and painted a smile on his face.

Jai: "Wow, I haven't seen you in the longest time, how are you Nisha?"

Nisha: "I'm great Jai what about you? What's new?"

Jai: "Oh nothing, company is doing well, family is great, I got married and I bought new shoes yesterday"

Nisha: "What?" she was shocked. "You got married, and you're telling me this now?"

Jai: "Yes, I fell in love and got married. I'm crazy about her."

Jai and Nisha got reacquainted as Jai filled her in on his life. They were old friends from college and had lost touch. Jai described Bani as

"……her eyes are like two fishes so soft and colorful. Her nose is as beautiful as a tulip. Her lips are bright and sweet like strawberries. She is just too beautiful from head to toe and cute in height, enough that I can carry her around in my pocket……"

Nisha: "Oh my god Jai, since when did you become a romantic? You have to introduce me to her"

Jai: "Sure why don't you come over to dinner at the house"

Nisha: "That's a great idea"

Hope you liked it. I tried to make it longer and add more dialogue.

Riya 😳

Edited by khwaboon_mein - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwnnn.. i have a feeling mrs. walia isnt gonna be too happy about this old friend.. heheh.. great part.. plzz continue soon.. and yeah im 1st... heheh
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
gr88 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
wonderful part
wud luv to see how bani cheers up jai
plz continue soon.


nim.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
good goin!!! whose this nisha??? any character of KS or sumthin????
but it was a gr8 part!!! 👏 👏 👏
jai described bani quite romantically! 😳 😉

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