FF: The Crushed Innocence,Ch 19 & Epi-p61

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 17 years ago

#431

Sigghhh, nice ff khatam ho gaya...it was very well written, loved the different characters...the steadfast support and love of Dhurbo and family, the strength that Bani begins to bring to the rich but dysfunctional Walia family, and the JB scenes..Have a good trip.
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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#432

Very nice version of Pretty woman. Started off like the original & then you Indianised it in youur style. Loved it.

JAi finding jacket reminded me of KS during divorce whenn Jai sees white lilies,gets excited & goes around house looking for Bani.

Bani coming to Shakuni to forget Jai 😳 😳 whom was she kidding.

The epilogue with Jai & Bani making their house into home something they both missed so far was perfect.

Wish Bani could control Jigs like this in real KS. 😆 😆 😆

Another great FF Tin. Can't help but be greedy. Waiting for next.

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#433

That great how they planned it and the epilogue where bani is motherly toward jigs is funny ,, I actually like ur version better than the original and how creative u were in changing it and yet sticking to the theme ,,, happy holidays and continue writing

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#434

An amazing end to an amazing FF👏....as usual I didn't want to you to pen the last line but I guess all good things have to come to an end...

Jai's pining...Shakuntala and Ma's plan...Bani going her own way and then the way the family came together after the marriage was wonderful...

As usual, Looking forward to a new storyline in the new years!😛

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#435

Very nice ending!! Thank you for a wonderful fiction again, pretty woman is a perfect movie and yours is not far behind.... 😳

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HalleNJ

@HalleNJ

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#436

Very interesting FF, truly enjoyed it. Very well written 👍🏼.

The jacket was there in all the updates... a very important 'prop' in this story ya 😉 😊.

Loved everything in this story, great job 👏 .