FF Ajab Si....last part pg 75....21Jan - Page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys,

Thank u for reading my ff and also for the comments. I'm glad that u all are liking it so far.

The reason for this note is that I wont be able to update this ff till Monday or Tuesday as I will be going on a vacation with my family for 3 days. Tommorow I will be busy shopping and packing so I really dont have time to update but I will try my best to post an update before I leave if can.

Till then.......take care and bye.

Harpreet

Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
momtajbegum1 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey
enjoy ur vacation 😉

thanx for leting us know

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
wonderful parts loved it
have awonderful vacation will wait for your update
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi guys......i'm back and thanx 4 waiting

I will like to thank
monix1981, davia389, jeenal20, janu_2006, *Guli*, sadsunzarsum, tam2, ridhijai, nir_jaanu, momtajbegum1, Ishk4u
for the wonderful comments.

Harpreet
Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
give me 30 minutes as I'm writing an update now and soon will post it
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi everyone.......sorry couldn't update before i left so thought of giving a bit of a long update.........hope u like it


Part 21

It was lunch time and they decided to head to a famous restaurant to have their meal. They just sat on their table when suddenly a voice called out " Jai……….Jai Walia"

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When Jai look up to see who was calling him he cursed under his breath cause this person was the last person he was expecting to see of all person here…….it was none other than Tarun Sablok (Jai knows Tarun through business parties and he never like this man so he never did any business with him)

Bani who was facing Jai had her back to Tarun and when she heard someone calling Jai she turned around and got the biggest shock to see Tarun here after so many years and she was feeling scared too……so she quickly turn around and try to hide her face cause she didn't want Tarun to recognize her cause if he does and Jai get to know that this was the man she told him about god only knows what will happen.

Tarun came to them and he shook his hand with Jai while Jai tried his best to keep a smile on his face and greet him. Tarun soon realize that Jai was not alone cause he saw Bani who who was looking somewhere else and her long hair was covering side of her face.


Tarun : Jai who is this lady with u………he ask curiously


Bani who was trying her best not to show him her face thought that what the hell why should she be scared of him cause Jai is with her and she knew he will always protect her so when Tarun spoke up she turned around and came face to face with Tarun.

When Tarun saw Bani he was shock to see her but decided to insult her in front of Jai to take revenge on her as he couldn't get her 5 years back ( Tarun doesn't know that Jai has married Bani and thinks that she is one of his girlfriend)


Tarun : Bani its you……nice to see u again …wow 5 years is a long time…he said mockingly


Jai was confuse as to how does they now each other and he looked at Bani who was a bit tensed and when Tarun said 5 years he immediately knew that this was the same person Bani told him about…….his blood was boiling and his hand made a fist to control himself

Bani looked up at Jai and realized he already knew and saw his fist so she hold his hand for support and also cool him down……….and when Jai felt her hands on him he relax a bit but what Tarun said next was unbearable and his anger shot up


Tarun : Jai tum iske saat ho………tum aisi larkio ko nahi janta…….they look innocent from on top but in real they are a b***h


That was it Jai couldn't take it and before u knew it Tarun was on the floor and his nose was bleeding cause Jai has gave him a solid punch and he got hold of him by the collar and said


Jai : Watch what u say…….u b*****d………u are talking about my wife and the love of my life……….i feel like killing u but I dont want to dirty my hands with ur blood……..and if I see u any where near my wife or my family I will not spare u…….with that said he punched him one more time which knocked him down


He looked up at Bani and saw her crying and shaking badly……he quickly went to her and took her in his arms and she hugged him tightly afraid of losing him……Jai could feel her fear and took her out of the place and held a cab to take them back to their cottage.

The whole drive back Bani didn't leave Jai and clinked at him like a child seeking for reassurance and warmth…….Jai understood her fear and didn't leave her but gave her the warmth that she need by stroking her back and whispering encouraging words and also his love towards her……….by the time they reached to their cottage he realized that Bani has fallen asleep and he didn't want to wake her up so he paid the cab and carried her to the cottage.

He tucked her in on the bed and sat beside her just staring at her and stroking her hair……..her face was stain with tears that has dried up and she looked disturb in her sleep……he felt bad for her but he promise himself that he will never leave her side and will always love her.

He was lost in his thoughts and gazing out of the window that he didn't realize that Bani has woken up and was staring at him……he soon realized when he felt a hand on him and looked down at Bani who was staring at him……he smiled at her and Bani straight out hugged him while sobbing again……Jai was taken aback when she suddenly hugged him but soon steadied himself and put his arms around her while stroking her back said


Jai : Bani tum daro mat......mein ho na tumhara saat.......i promise tumhe kuch nehi hona doga.......aur tum Tarun ko bhool jao…..woh humare beech nehi ayega……..mein tumhe vaada karta hoon………..i love u Bani and I will not let anyone harm u


Bani felt happy to hear this from Jai and knows that he will always be there for her……she broke the hug and stare at him and said thank u………he just smiled at her and stroked her cheeks lovingly……Bani saw his hands and realized that it hat few cuts and blood on it and she tensed up and caught his hands


Bani : Jai ur hand……..I'm so sorry yeh saab meri wajase hoya hai
Jai didn't realize that his hands was bleeding until he saw Bani getting tense up…….he pulled his hands and said


Jai : Bani its just a small cut aur tumhe sorry kehna ki koi zaroorat nehi kyunki its not ur fault understand……..he said sternly


Bani got up and got the first aid and bandaged his hands with tears in her eyes cause she couldn't even see a scratch on him cause if anything happens to him she will die……..Jai just stared at her as she carefully bandaged him and he wiped a tear that descended from her eyes and at that moment their eyes met and their staring season started but somehow Bani successfully bandaged him.

Jai told her to rest as she must be tired after a long day and Bani obliged him like a good child and slept while Jai kept looking at her and decided to do something special for her tonight so that she will cheer up………..with that on mind he left the room to arrange somethings.


Sorry for any mistakes........pls do comment


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Posted: 17 years ago

haialaa tarun .. use too tum ... high mountain se dakkke amrdoo and he will fall downa dn die😆 by his own girl friend pia.. and while alling pia also shd be dragged y him and both die😆 so more taruna nd n pia in jb's life..

pls cotnineu soon..

honeymoon mein tragedy?????????acchi nahi algthii i mean to say with jb not with taruna dn pia

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a really sweet and lovely update...Tarun deserved that punch 😆 .... reallly nice part...do cont soon... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
haila!

tarun deserved it! 😡

hmm wonder wat he has planned!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh jai is soo sweet 😳 just loved him there 😃 and that Tarun 🤢 could go to hell


Taj

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