FF Ajab Si....last part pg 75....21Jan - Page 2

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amiee thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful character sketch and great beginning looking forard to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will like to thank
livelikeaqueen, davia389, Yoousha, Heartbreak, SonamKHAN, Sheena_Row, nir_jaanu, aNsHu-tEjPaL, amiee and all the silent readers
for reading my ff and commenting. Its a pleasure to know u all liked the storyline so far. Hope to get more response as it will encourage me to write this ff.

Thanx again,
Harpreet
Edited by hipreet - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the next part and hope u all will like it........if can do comment

Part 2

Bani woke up with a start and she was sweating a lot as droplets of sweat can be seen on her forehead, eventhough she was sitted in the plane which was full with AC. She was shivering as she remembered the dream that she had that was haunting her for years now. She tried to calm herself by having a glass of water but she still couldn't forget that horrible truth and her eye filled up with tears as she told herself that "I will never be able to be happy as my past will always haunt me and maybe it is fated that happiness is not written in my life". She was brought back to reality as she heard the stewardess announcing that they will be landing shortly.

Jai has just checked out from the airport and was heading to his car where his driver was waiting for him when he caught side of the stranger that he bumped into getting in a taxi. He wanted to call out to her so that he could return her payal that he found in the airport which had probably fallen when they bumped but before he could, the taxi just zoomed past him. Sighing he kept the payal in his pocket and convincing himself that maybe they are fated to meet again and maybe that time he could return it and could get to now her cause she is the very first person in his life that he could not stop thinking since he got drown in her eyes. Soon he got into his car and headed home.

Dixit Mansion

Bani was standing outside the door of her house and was thinking how to surprise everyone at home as now probably everyone must be having their dinner as it was late at nite when she got an idea and took out her cellphone and dialed her house number.

Everyone in Dixit family (Nishikant,Kiran,Pushkar and Rano) was having their dinner together when the house phone rang and everyone was looking at each other wondering who could call them this time when Kiran told them she will get it and went to the living room to answer the call.

Kiran : Hello, who's speaking?
Bani : Hello mamma its me Bani.
Kiran : Are Bani beti kaisi ho sab kuch theek hai na, achanak phone kiya tumne usually tum to waha jab raat hoti ha tab hi phone karti ho ab to waha subha hogi na.

From where Bani was standing she could clearly see her moms back and she slowly walked behind her mother while answering back to her moms question

Bani : Mamma I'm fine aur rahi baat phone karna ki who kyunki mujhe aap ko ek surprise dena hai.
Kiran was wondering what Bani meant by she wanted to give her a surprise when she heard Bani telling her to turn around as her surprise was waiting for her.

Puzzled, Kiran turned around when she came face to face to Bani. Happy to see her daughter after so many years she just screamed in delight and took Bani in a tight hug.
When the rest of the family that was in the dinning room waiting for Kiran to come back after answering the call got scared when they heard Kiran scream and they rushed to the living room to see what happened and they got confused as they saw Kiran hugging someone as Banis back was facing them and they could not see her face.

Kiran that was so happy to see her daughter had tears in her eyes and when she saw the rest of the family she could not hide her happiness as she told them look who has come back.

Bani was feeling so happy to meet her mom after so many years that she didn't feel like breaking the hug with her mother but when she heard her mom talking to the rest of the family, she turned to look at the shock and happiness on their faces as they was not expecting her to be back so soon.

As Bani saw her father, she ran to her father and gave him a tight hug as she has always been the apple of his eyes. Nishikant that was so happy to see his youngest daughter back home could not hide his tears and while stroking her hair said " Bani beti I'm so happy u r back and I missed u so much".

Bani with tears in her eyes replied that "I missed u too papa" and gave him a hug again but she broke the hug as she saw her bhaiya standing behind her father still with a shock expression. She went infront of him and waved her hand in front of his face dazed face and telling him "Bhaiyya aap apni choti behen ko gala nahi lagaoga".

Pushkar that was still couldn't believe that Bani was back, came back to earth when he heard Banis voice and in happiness he just straight out hugged her and said " Bani u r back finally, I missed u yaar". Bani come out of the hug and said to her brother "Are u sure bhaiyya u missed me cause I thought that now that u r married u will forget me" (Pushkar got married just a month ago to Rano and Bani could not attend his wedding cause she was having her finals)

Pushkar a little hurt replied "Bani how could u say that u r my little sis and I will never forget u eventhough I get old and have grandchildren". Bani who realized that she hurt her bhaiyya just hugged him and said sorry as she was just kidding. Before things got to emotional Bani with her chirpy voice asked her bhaiyya that wont he introduce her to her bhabhi that's when Bani and Rano met for the first time got along like two best friends till Kiran told them lets have their dinner together as Bani must be starving as it was a long journey back.

Dinner was full with laughter and talks as Bani told them about her university life and her course finishing early and how she wanted to surprise them. Soon everyone retired to bed as Bani was tired after a long journey and she told them that tomorrow first thing in the mornig she will be going to her di's place to surprise her and no one should inform her about her arrival.

Sorry if there are mistakes........


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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice start
looking forward for the next update


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Posted: 17 years ago
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just read the 2 chaps of ur ff....very interesting storyline...the payal part was really cute...do cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start.
liked it.
fab updates.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its good start just wobdering what could be bani past that troubling her?
Anywaz will be waiting to see some more JB moments
Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey ...........

lovely beginning ...............

just love the song.........ajab si........

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will like to thank
davia389, sadsunzarsum, teenbeauty, YOOUSHA, MusicIsDivine, tam2,ridhijai, Heartbreak, culgal86
for reading and commenting.

Also thanx to the silent readers who read my ff.

Thank U,
Harpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the next part.........hope u like it.

Part 3

At first Bani wanted to go to her di's place to surprise her di but she couldn't go as she had to go to the office as she was gonna join her father's company and help her bhaiyya in business. So she told her mom to inform her di that they will be coming for dinner in their place but not to tell them about her.

Walia Mansion

Raashi was in the dinning table preparing everyone's breakfast when she got the call from her mom telling that they will be there for dinner. She was so happy that her family was coming but inside she felt bad cause her younger sis was not there with them but she didn't know the surprise that was waiting for her.

As she was on her fifth month of her pregnancy she really wanted her sis to be there to give her support but she was happy cause she got support from all the family members and her husband Ranveer was always there for her and if he wasn't there she always have her devar-Jai. At that moment she remembered that Jai still wasn't down for breakfast so she sent Tony butler to call him.

Jai has just came out of the bathroom after taking his bath and was getting ready for office when his gaze when to the dressing table where he kept the payal. Looking at that payal he remembered those beautiful eyes that kept haunting him from the moment he looked at them. He came to reality when he heard a knock on the door and the next moment saw the Tony who came to inform that everyone was waiting for him for breakfast.

As Jai come to the dining table he saw that his bhaiyya, bhabhi and massi was all waiting for him. He quickly apologized for being late and took his place. As Jai sat on his chair, his bhabhi started talking to him

Raashi : Are Jai tum kal raat dinner khai bigar hi sogaya, I'm sorry who mujhe neend agayi aur maine tumhara intezaar nehi kiya.
Jai : Are bhabhi aap kyu sorry kehrahi ha, agar aap mera intezaar karti to mujhe bura legta kyunki main to der se aya tha kal aur is haalat mein aap ka itni der tak jagna acha nehi hai aur rahi baat dinner ki to main bohot thak gaya tha isliye.
Raashi : Oh ok acha ab breakfast karlo warna sara din bhook laga gi.
Jai : Ji bhabhi.

So everyone started having their breakfast when suddenly Raashi said "Are main to bhool gayi aap sab ko inform karna ka aaj raat mummy papa aur saab araha hai dinner par".

Massi who heard that said " Yeh to bhoot achi baat hai bhoot din hogaya hai unsa mila hua isse bahana mulaqat bhi hojaagi".

So Raashi told Ranveer and Jai to be back early from work and she will be also calling Jigyasa di and family for dinner. Soon Ranveer and Jai head to office after having their breakfast.

Dixit Industries

Bani came to the office with her Pushkar bhaiyya and he showed her around the office and introduced her to the staff as she will be working with them in future. Once finish he took her to his office.

Pushkar : So Bani kaisi ho kal theek se baat nehi hui tumse.
Bani : Bhaiyya mein theek ho aap fikar mat kijiye aur ab bataye mera cabin kaha hai.

Pushkar knew that Bani was trying to avoid from talking about herself cause she didn't want him to talk about the past and he knew better not to ask more so he said "Bani tumhara cabin ab renovation mein hain aur tab tak ke liye tum mera cabin use kar sakti ho and u will be handling a project with the Walia Industries".

Bani on hearing Walia Industries got confused and said " Bhaiyya isn't that jiju's company and since when we do projects together with them. Pushkar replied "Bani u are rite its Ranveer's company and just few months ago we had a merger with their company so half of the project is handled my them and the other by us and u will be handling from our side and Jai Walia, Ranveer's brother will be handling on their behalf'.

Bani hearing that she will be handling the project with Jai Walia didn't give it a second taught as she was ready to handle the project and give it her best and soon after receiving the file from her bhaiyya started to go threw the file and write down her points regarding her views and got busy with her work till she was ready to go back home and get ready to go to her di's place.

Sorry if there are mistakes and please do comment.
Thanx.

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