FF - Neighbor’s - Complt / Thk Nt - Pg 26 - Page 3

MT,

Caught up with both your parts, it was pretty surprising to see a new FF from you. Anyway lucky us...we get to read another story.

This Bani is very interesting. Waiting to see what happens next.

Hi

Read the whole thing in one go. Must say we have a different Jai and Bani here. But still the arrogance is there in him. So Bani being so open about their relationship. Must say she has guts.
Waiting for the next part to find out what went wrong with their realtionship.
Bye

just read both part
good story.
bani has guts yaar
i hope there is happy ending 😊

hey MT

its gr8 to read a new ff from u i have always been a fan of ur writing
just finished readin both d parts;

Bani is awesome the "know it all" n topper everywhere she goes as u pointed out a character reversal for both of them

its a sweet love story though loved d way she lies at home to go n meet her love

waitin to know who plays villan in this story
benazir

WOW too good again Rekha and thanks for the cute mention , i should be saying to you mention not 😆, as for your latest update very sweet and cute really captured the innocence of youth well OH i miss those days 😆 😆 😆 , i can see trouble brewing between the young lovers Bani is truly being very bold and Jai bless him i just wanna give him a cuddle for being so misfortunate in life (very good role reversal i forgot to mention in last post by the way), i fear the separation is coming up in the next update and i'm sure you will do it complete justice like you always do !!!!!!!!

Sharan XXX

Gosh Rekha, your description of first love was breathtaking!.....That part really stood out of me, as it did Jai blushing when Bani kissed him😉.....

Aww; how chweet!😳

This Bani is so Bindas yaar!😆......very bold; I just hope that it doesn't get her in to trouble!

Btw, we never did find out what Jai's gift to her was!😛

Rekha,

Needless to say its an awsome story...but main gussa hoon...how could u...how could he... 😡
First line ne mera dil hi tod diya 😭 😭 😭

He wanted to be a bengali... 😭 😭
Oye punjaabiyaan di shaan wakhri

The role reversal...very well penned...rich girl... poor guy.. 👏
Bani's dad... I love the way u've sketched his character so far...

Obviously my favourite just has to be JW only 😳 😳 😳 ... rich nahi hua toh kya...style to hai 😉 😳 😆

and oh boy Bani is bold 😆 😆 😆 ..bold and beautiful 😉
She forgot to take Kaibee 😆 😆 😆 ...

The phone call conversation...that was soo cute 😆

The description of the firsts in life.... beautifully penned👏

I'm dying to know ki what exactly happened...please please jaldi post kardo... lets say by tomm 😃 ...

Awesome story 👏

Poo

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Rekha,

Needless to say its an awsome story...but main gussa hoon...how could u...how could he... 😡
First line ne mera dil hi tod diya 😭 😭 😭

He wanted to be a bengali... 😭 😭
Oye punjaabiyaan di shaan wakhri

Poo,

Yeh gana especially tere liye...

Ishq ishq mein, pyaar pyaar mein number 1 punjabi
Dil lene mein, dil dene mein number 1 punjabi
Baisakhi mein bhangra paake mast rahe punjabi
Heer sohni ki dhun gaake mast rahe punjabi
O, ladki jo dekhe gulaabi, kar de dhamaal punjabi
Aankhein jo dekhe sharaabi, hai, kar de dhamaal punjabi

And obviously our Roshgulla Bani also thinks the same...😉

Thanks for the comments! Kaibee name as I mentioned before is taken from the Cantonese word for Pretty and is my colleague's pet's name!

Cheers,

R

PS: Aur Bangali ho ya Punjabi ya Madrasi...phir bhi dil toh hai hindustani, right?😉

Hey MT,

First of all "A VERY HAPPY DURGA PUJA. MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY."

Coming to your fanfic, it is lovely as usual [ whats new].i really liked jai and bani's relationship.
I guess they will be separated by bani's family.but I hope they meet eventually.then I guess JW will achieve lots in life.
I would really like to see a scene where bani comes runnig down the stairs a la devdas style and hugs jai.i have never seen a scene more romantic than that which emotes the sheer desperation of a person to meet his/her love.
Waiting for your update.

God bless.

Dhani.

hello ms Mt... 😆 😆 ...i just saw tha tyou posted a new ss...and of course...main toh dhodi chali aayi... 😳 ...

it ws really great...read part 1 and 2a all in one go...of course im at work and people just have to bug me...its like they know i am doing somethign improtant...so they have to take me away from it... 😡 ...

anywho...it was great...i loved it...i truly enjoyed the fact that u used role reversal...u usually see jai as the one with it all and bani as the one with nothing... 😕 but this was pleseantly different...i love the relationship that JB have going...the arent letting class and all that crap come between theri love... 👏 ...i love how bani is the sort of take charge person in here...she seems to initiate most things... 😆 ...i mean after that virgin thing... 😆 ...i can just picture jais face... 😲 ... 😆 😆 ...too good...

now i cant wait for the next update...part 2b...woo hoo... 😉 😉
JAZ