Short FF:Rishta(Updated last chap: pg 11) - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
divoo, that was really cool and well written......looks like fire works are in the offing.......what i mean jw becoming gussa 😆 what were u thinking?

now please update next part sooooooooonnnnnnnnnn 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Divya, you described Bani and Jai's emotional turmoil ver well 👏 👏 especially Bani's. To have expectations placed on her to have a normal married life with Jai, whom she could not stop thinking about as her 'jiju' would definitely be worriesome. But the little actios between both JB have proved that with time they will both be very comfortable with each other like man and wife. Am glad Bani has paid heed to Massi's requests. I just hope jai also agrees now to this wish.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I hear the volcano eputing in the next part.. maybe?

It's so sad... they're all emotionally blackmailing her... poor Bani

She still has to get over the fact that her Jiju is now her husband

Buti hope everything will be alright soon!

Tanu is so cute...'baby' awww... adorable baby! 😛

cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks darling for the long update 👏 👏 👏 and it was worth it 👍🏼

Loved reading about the changing equations of JnB. And Maasi playing cupid as usual?

Bani is in the action mode and JW is angry. Good good 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It was a great part and loved the length of it...😊...you've written this part very well......all the emotions are penned very well....continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
grat part
but it seems that still JB are in forced relationship.Bani is seeing Jai as her jiju not her husband still even after a year.Mausi is emotionally blackmailing JB.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the comments. and yes i can see the length of this part has been abit too long. have to take care of this while posting the next chap😆

due to running out of time i cant reply to each and everyone so plzz forgive me for that.

wanted to clear one thing. Massi aint blackmailling bani it does look this it but no. JB are deffinetly into a forced relation and for one whole year but things are still ame between JB which hurts massi. one year is alot if massi would be blackmailling she would have acted to be ill but no she is actually ill worried about JB ...

and you guys must have noticed none of the family membes had ever told bani or jai about their marriage or regarding it so its all Jai and Bani in this FF and their emotions.

yes milkey007 bani still sees jai as her jiju but one whole year is too much time which all the family members had given to both jai and bani . now its high time both jai and bani take a step further which they will take from their own decisions not because someone is blackmailling them.

Sabby dear i know what u meant. trust me i m not the one taking things in other way sachi 😉i m innocent you see😳...

Next chap tomorrow MAY BE.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Amazing part Divya 👏 👏
Awww Tanu said mama to bani 😳
Poor Jai and Bani, they cant behave like Husband and wife , but Maassi being adamant , got what she wanted 😆
Ooops Jai is angry now, after hearing bani's decision 😕 hope bani will manage 😳
Please continue ASAP 😉
Humera .
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Wow what a beautiful story
Keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
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divs that was awesome
so bani decided to have akid
oh man i can't wait to see what jai has to say about this
please continue soon 😃

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