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@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#11

gr8 story divan..Cant you continue this for some more...

👏 👏 👏

Shan

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#12

That was a very sweet and romantic story, Divan! I really liked it!

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Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Divannnnnnnnnn u must continue it...no "The End" in this one...not this soon...plzzz come on...Jiggy ke liye yeh part tha toh doosra part mere liye kardo. 😊

That was a fantastic story 👏 👏 ...loved it...at 17? 😊 Ahhh...at that age the things that happened in my life 😕 😆 ...a long story...but this story was great. How Bani became stronger and stronger worked her way upto a good position and came across the same person she fell for at 17... 😳 😳 😳 so romantic. Loved that part where Jai took a snap of her on his mobile. 😳

Divannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...u have to continue...pweeeeessseeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I am begging. 😊 😆

Beautifully written 👏

Tazoo! 🤗

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bugs_bunny

@bugs_bunny

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#14

.. loads of people want you to continue and if it sways your decision to do so then i want you to continue aswell... PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago

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Auditi Ahsan

@Auditi

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Its A-W-E-S-O-M-E buddy!!!! Toooooooooo GooooooooooooD!!!! 👏

Plzzzzzzzzz cont it soon..... 😃

It was really.... really GoooooooooooooooD!!! 😃 👍🏼

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kiranc

@kiranc

Navigator

Posted: 18 years ago

#16

That was really sweet love story, enjoyed reading it.

Kiran

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#17

Hey Divan,

Liked it very much 😳 😳, very simple yet beautiful story.

👏 👏 👏

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Bristy

@the_rain

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Divan,

it was another wonderful SS from you....but I'm a bit confused....wasn't Bani Puskar's sister in the first para? Then how come he became her friend in the second one? care to explain?

And, I too want you to continue this...may be not too long, but 2-3 more parts won't hurt...will love to read more...😊

Or you can write another short story....😛

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Rimpy Kaur

@punjabi#1

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#19

please continue this, its a beautiful story.

-Rimpy

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#20

Hey Divan

that was so sweet and simply.as they say good things come in small packages,indead they really do.very well written.truly enjoyed it. 👏

preet 😳

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