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@putturani

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#71

Agh! I feel like banging Jai on the head! I mean, he's letting his past
affect his present and future so much. Not everyone who's parents'
had an unhappy marriage turns into a cold, unfeeling stone! I dislike
Jai but I LOVE ur writing!

The emotions, Bani's pain and the warmth of Bani's family is really
well brought out in this fic. I 👏 I can really feel it myself. Another
thing I like is the way you move along time - something I always have
trouble with.

Judging by the way you are moving the story along, would I be wrong
in saying that this is going to be quite a short FF? I hope so, because
as much as I love your writing, I want Bani's pain to end. 😊

Anyway - update soon! 😃 👏

Edited by putturani - 18 years ago

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asha

@sweetasha

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#72

Di....😃

please check your mail box... 😊

And thank you for the prayer...👍🏼

Lots of love

ashoo

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sharan

@shaz81

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#73

Jojo my sweety like I said i missed you loads and i cant believe i missed out on three updates that's loads compared to what you usually give one a week on Sundays hehehe i missed you these last few Sundays so hence i'm making up tonight sorry for late reply but i read price of stolen emotion's yesterday but got busy making a thread for my dear bhaiya of mine on this forum called Ravimalhotra69 or mango as i call him for rakhi so hence i'm replying now!!!!!!

I would like to compliment you on your mature writing style which is complete departure from your last FF (which i miss dearly but this one makes up for 😆 ), also i love the subtle dark shades to the Jai character makes me hanker after the Jai Walia of old *SIGH* secondly the storyline is shaping up nicely i do hope you are writing a long FF and not a short one after the wedding i would like to see how Jai and Bani manage their feelings cause I can use what they might be feeling at the wedding HAHAHA, plus this FF is HOT 😳 WOW when did you learn to write like that WOW well done again 👏 , and sorry for replying late MWAH!!!!

Sharan XXX 🤗

Edited by shaz81 - 18 years ago

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Jojo

@Jojo_han

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#74

I continuously did the instalment twice in a week; I never did that before, although I had considered while ago to participate the FF competition and wrote the first four chapters of this FF back then. I don't know why but I somehow felt it would turn out less appealing, but anyways, I reused and rewrote again as well as renaming and came out with something slightly different. Perhaps I wasn't convinced about that story at that time.

Nevertheless' this story suits now the state of our mind, and I so hope I don't back off in the middle, leaving you all "TPOSE" readers stunned state. 😆

Now coming to the point of this note,

I'm going on a trip for to Germany and I have no idea for how long, which means I won't be updating as much as wanted to till I get back my home in London. Sorry for the unexpected notice, but I'm almost finishing chapter five and it should be ready soon, hopefully. 😳

Sharon,

Thanks for the compliment darling. I'll definitely continue "YAOU" once I finish this. 😃

God bless,

Rgds,

Jojo

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asha

@sweetasha

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#75

Omg... I can't wait to read the next part. 😛

I hope you will be back soon. 😕

pleaze update soon.

ashoo

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Jojo

@Jojo_han

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#76

Thank you once again for the comment!

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

😆 😆

Great part Jojo dear. Wondering when Jai would realize if he loves Bani or not. And for Bani, it's clear that there is no other man in her life but Jai. Hope you would update soon whenever you can.

👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#78

Please dont post ur FF in different threads!!!!

You are suppose to post in one thread only!

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#79

Hi Jojo!!!

Excellent update, loved it 👏

Bani's anxiety n Jai's jealousy are their love, their misunderstandings seems to have no end...The one sided love from Bani's part is very painfully for her but what with Jai??? I don't kow how to express what I'm feeling but I feel for Jai n bani, surfing because of misunderstandings, I think Jai's is n was in love with Bani but doesn't want to acknowledge it 😕

Please continue soon, it's very interesting 👏 👏 👏

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Sangita

@sangitadas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#80

Great part Jojo and I am saddened to know that it will take time for you to complete.

BTW, as part of the KS Development team, it is necessary for me to let you know that please don't start so many threads for a single FF. Please post all parts in the same FF thread and if and only it crosses 150 pages, may you go ahead and make separate threads. Makes it easier to read and archive also.

In case you have any prolem, plese feel free to PM any of the KS Development Team members.

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