The price of stolen emotion:Previews Pg67 - Page 12

sizzling hot update- jai is straigth out of a mills and boon ( i luv them!)

Oops…I seemed to have stumbled upon the wrong website….
Is this a mills and boons story and are you actually a romantic author in disguise?
"Dahling" what an amazing update...just hot and sizzling. My eyes were glued to the page as soon as read chapter six. JW what a character a real asshole 😆 . My, my I didn't know the man liked to play games...but now I can't wait to see what happens next. It's good that he at least has some "control" over his feelings!

Poor B, my heart goes out to her...what a wretched thing for JW to do...leave her begging and humiliated.

Like I said many times before JW needs to cool his head a little, perhaps dumping it in a freezing ice cold bucket of water will help? It might awaken his brain cells...as at the moment the man is acting like a jealous green alien 😆 ! Where did all the intelligence go? It is an embarrassment to see such a wealthy man act so dumb....over love!!

An amazing update...I am now positive that you are secretly a mills and boons author in disguise...my my, now I really do want your autograph and am even more proud to call myself you fan!

I cannot wait for the "payment" episode of your ff....but I did enjoy my semi finished "autograph"....a real treat!

Please do continue soon or le diable dans moi will awaken once again...oh what torture you must put your chocolate through. Damn, I hate waiting 😆

Standing ovation my mills and boons author...just amazing. You make JW sound like a man from a romantic novel!

Lots of love
Your chocolate ❤️
p.s. so sorry for replying late, had a very horrible day and am dead exhausted- literally! I fell asleep and only woke up a few hours ago...damn how I hate working!

Awesome work di.... 👏👏

I'm so love in it... the story 😛

pleaz continue very soon, I cant wait what happens next. 😃

Ashoo

P.S. sorry for the late reply.

Sorry dear, managed to catch the latest part now only. 😊

Very well written and the tug of war between the characters is too good. 👏

But poor Bani, this AD is such a weirdo that he has managed to turn JW against her completely. 😡

Am waiting eagerly to read the next part. 😛

These two really do mess each other up, don't they. Great description of their thoughts and emotions.
👏 👏 👏

Jia is truely messed up in the head, believing in all the crap Aparjit has told him. And poor Bani has no idea that the man she thought was her friend was actually a snake ready to strike behind her back and destroy her marriage...whether it was loveless or filled with attraction.

I felt really angry on Jai for behaving like a b*stard towards Bani. She will not be able to take this pain and humliation as she had done earlier. Please offer her some respite before her self-respect is totally torn into shreds 😭

Jojo,

I really love the you are portraying JB's feelings towards each other. JW is so confused and his background and his childhood is making him see Bani as unfaithful.

Their chemistry is really awesome.

Loved it, please continue,
-- SR

Hi jojo,

Awesome chemistry between the lead pair. One of those stories which makes you pause and get completely involved into the lead pair. I love their conversations. Who is this AD. Though he is not present physically he really seems grip both Jai and Bani's life. A wonderful play with emotions and scenes. Loved reading them and look forward to read the story.

Swathi

Why is JW behaving like this? Is it jealously speaking volumes or simply his male pride being hurt…

Once again a wonderful part… Continue soon…



Nandita.