Anokha Rishta -Chapter 18 & Epilog, pg42 - Page 9

Hey Tiny,

a very interesting update,I am so glad bani has decided to step out of the house.Roshni not wantin to share a bedroom,foreshadowin somethin abt he future.very interesting.loving it.lookin forward to the next part. 😊


preet 😳

Awesone part Tin.... Bani's emotions very well written... 👏 👏 👏

Hey Tinnie,


I see you've started a new FF. Good news for me, cause your FF is always a thing that I look forward for.


The theme of this FF is really different from any other FFs, and frankly, me myself was thinking about writing something like this. Just didn't do cause I know I'll not be able to do justice to such a complicated story line. Thanks to you for starting this.



Though, the story line is very much interesting and taken from the realty, the situation is really awkward and disgusting for all of them, Bani, Jai, Roshni....even for Jigs and Adi. Only because of Dai Ma's influence Jai took the step and Bani was bound to do this.


Moreover, she's getting no attention from any of them, not her own family, not her husband's family. And Roshni's ignorance is also very disturbing.


In total, Bani's condition is something no woman will want in their life. But still now, our society leads many of them to such position


Kudos to you to pen it in your FF.



As for your writing, after all those lovely FFs, there's nothing to say about that. You rock as a writer.


Best of luck....😊

Wonder how J is going to explain bigamy to his friends (it's probably illegal under some Hindu Marriage act) 😆 Most of them are going to be like "What? Lucky guy" like Adi..
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Great part!! Poor Bani and Jai.. in a realtionship which neither want!

Still llying to Pushkar? 😕 Wonder what he'll do when he comes to know the truth!

aww... Bani's jealous!! justified 😊

WOW roshni is refusing to share her room with anyone...... This would become tough for Jai and Bani.... .But good that Bani has got herself a job.

Tin,

Great update. My heart breaks for Bani. All her dreams have been shattered by Dai Ma 😡. What a selfish woman.

Still can't get over the ewww 🤢 factor of Bani being the 2nd wife. Roshini just makes me ill. She can't share a bedroom but is willing to share her husband - how repulsive.

As for Bani being jealous of Pia - I feel for her. How sad to think that she will never be the queen in her home or husband's heart. I'm glad that she has gotten a job - but I'm sure if Dai ma finds out she will put a stop to it 😡 After all she only wants Bani to be a baby machine for her beloved Jai. Sorry but Dai Ma makes me ill.

Tin - I was reading this part thinking - get a job Bani and then escape from this disgusting situation. I didn't realize that in reality there are 2nd wives who exist with first wives. My father-in-law visited this weekend and we were talking about this topic - and he enlightened me about his grandfather who had 4 wives simultaneously - 3 were sisters 🤢 🤢 🤢 .

This is a different story and can't fathom Jai Walia sharing a room with his wife, Roshini then going to Bani and simply having her around to produce an heir. This Jai Walia has no personal integrity if he can be so easily swayed by Dai Ma and Roshini.

Tin - although I get 😡 reading this story - I can't wait to read what happens next.

Hi Jayati,

awesome update

continue soon

Hi Jayati,

Fablous update, really you have written it so beautiful but the reality of such situation is so digusting, it's like people like Dai ma(I don't want to call her "ma") are so selfish for her benfit, for her beloved Jai that they could hardly look her person they are using, their emotions, feelings,dreams... And as fos Bani's parents, how could they find Bani's life as a commutate for their debts to Dai ma???

Bani is caught in all this vicious situation where she hardly feels that someone is with her or she can tell/share her feelings with someone else , I feel for her, seeing her like this, jealous of her sister .

Really I do hope that Dai ma and that heartless Roshni surfer equally and Roshni she's such a , she can't share her bedroom but her husband ...Jai is a looser right now by not facing the reality, how he could do what his wife and that Dai ma had said about having a second wife, and why not a surget mother??

I feel lil happy for Bani, now she can go out and work, earn money by herself.

I feel so angry while reading this kinda storyline but I eagerly want to read this ff and read what will have Jani's future.

You're doing a excellent work, please do continue .

Just saw that you started a new ff
loved your previous one and this one is also ver good, like the story, very different.
Plz cont soon