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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

haila...soo sowiee..but Jaz...remind me again naa...what is FOCUS? 🤔
srry..mein hoon bachi..akal ki kaachi 😳



focus- paying attention to the task at hand...

our task at hand...make sure guli-o doesn't get anymore besharam then she already is ok...FOCUS...abhi tik se focus kaarlo...phir...main tume naachne ka mauka dungi...special dance party for u...ok...no focus...samje naa...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena: Great task!! Can't wait to read now 😳

Jaz: Abhi pe hi to FOCUS kar rahi hoon 😍☺️
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~



Jaz: Abhi pe hi to FOCUS kar rahi hoon 😍☺️



...iss ladki ka kuch nahin hoga...now focus...or else...i have saali's in training just dying to be a full time saali...😉...kya yaar...look what u made me do...dhamki to my one and only PIC 😕
JAZ

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆arre joking ree....ok...FOCUS!!!....tere liye to jaan bhi haazir hain...ok...FOCUS!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nibu...

i did ur court case!!!!
pg 22!!!!! 😛
*Guli* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Pachu*n*Abhi~

😆arre joking ree....ok...FOCUS!!!....tere liye to jaan bhi haazir hain...ok...FOCUS!!! 😃




pachu and focus.. what a good joke!!😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Congrats Guli...

Hope you are having wonderful time!

So my task for you,
write a FF about Jai Walia shouting at Jigyasa and Pia and confronting Bani with his love and telling her to choose between him and AD....



What is this jaani.... arre yaar.. ur the 1st that gave me a FF!!!!!!!!!


Jai was in his room!

He was looking at picture of Bani!!!

That picture had a big smile on her!!

Man did she look good or wat!!!!!

He loved her!!!!!!

He did!!

everything he did for her.......

He had no choice!!!!

But in the end

its him who is suffering!!!

JIgs and Pia were happily having nice cocktails....

THey were up in Pia's room!!!!

And they were enjoying this!!!!!!!

Jai and Bani werent no longer together!!!

They are like this is the life!!!!!!!!

Pia is like...

Bani will marry AD!!!!!!

And i can have Jai!!

they were both talking!!!

And thne

Jai was walking by..

And he heard their talks

THey were bani bashing big time!!!

He opened the door!!!

And they both looked at him!!!!!

Jigs is like

Whats wrong????

Jai is looking at them both

ANd he's like

Both of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thats whats wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jigs: Why??

Jai is like....

Dont you to two just give up!!!!!!!!!!!

Why are you always behind Bani's case all the time!!!

Jigs i know you never liked her!!!!....

So I dont care anymore..

But i will not

tolerate anything said about Bani!!!!

And then

He looks at Pia

And he's like

If Bani marries AD

What makes you so sure that i will marry you

I hate you so much

that i dont even want to see your face!!!!!!!!!!

He's like

I will never..

And i mean never

Marry a stupid woman like you!!

Jigs: Who are you calling stupid?????

Jai: Her!!!!!!!!

And then

He's like....

DO you want me to call you something too?

He's like i can care less if you are my sister!!!

Cuz right now

I dont give a crap!!!!!!!!

Jai is like

I will not let Bani marry AD!!!

Thats my promise!!

And infact....

I will go and tell Bani everything right now!!!!!!

And i mean everything

What you did!!!

And how helpless i was

becuz of you!!

Pia is like

U cant do that..

If you do that...

I will send her back in jail

Remember....

I have that CD

Jai: To hell with ur CD!!!!!!!!!

That CD can go to hell!!!

Jai is like u watch..

I will bring Bani back.....

And i will do it......

I am Jai WAlia

And i can do whatever i want

Whenever i want

and no one will stop me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And he walks away!!!!!!!

Pia is like

u better think twice...

Pia is like

dont make do what i did 5 years ago!!!!!!!!

Jai is like

You do anything

And i swear i will literally..

And he grabbed her throat....

Pia was stunned

So was Jigs!!!

Jai is like

u better stay out of my way

cuz if you come..

then you might not see tomorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai left......

And he went to Bani!!!

And he yelled at her name

Bani looked at him!!!

Jai was looking all loving towards her

But she was looking at him in the most hateful look!!!

Bani is like

wat the hell are you doing here??

She's like

I dont want you here!!

Jai is like

I know u hate me

becuz u have the right

but u have to hear me out

Bani is like

I refuse to listen to you!!!!!!

And she's like

By coming here

ur not going to make me change my mind!!!!!

She's like

I hate you

And i always will!!

Jai: Yes I made you hate me!!

the things i did..

i wasnt suppose to...

But i did!!!!!!!

Jai is like...

You are marrying AD in 3 weeks!!!!!!!...

But i came here to tell you something

And without me telling

I am not leaving!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani looked at him!!!!!

Jai is like

what happened 5 years ago....

Is something i regret today!!!!!!!

But i was hopeless....

And i couldnt do anything to help you out!!!!!!!!

He's like Pia made me do all those things!!!!!!!

And i had no choice but to listen

Or else

You would have been in big problems!

Bani: Look..... i am pretty sure...

that you two planned this!!!

Just to ruin me!!!!!!

Its okay!!

I mean..

You two.... you had a ONS!!!!!!

Jai was looking at her.....

Jai is like

U know damn well

I was drugged...

So u cant blame me for that!!!!!!!!!!

Bani is like whatever!!!!!!

Bani is acting soo cold towards Jai

That Jai literally snaps at her

And he's like

YOu want the damn truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Right???

Well the damn truth is......

That i had no option

but to listen to that low life......

And to ruin you!!!!!!!!!!!

I had to listen to her

and you were put in a mental asylum for 5 damn years!!

And what do u think....

that i am happy that you were in there

5 years..

5 damn long years

Our kids were without their mother...

The house was without a malkine......

And JAI WAS WITHOUT HIS BANI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Becuz if there is no Bani in Jai's life...

Then Jai's life is meaningless!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She looked at him!!!

Jai is like

for 5 long years...

Every second..

I was aching...

Only i knew wat i was going through....

Becuz you are the one that taught me to love!!!!

Ur the one....

that taught me how to be calmer and nicer

It was all you!!!!!!!!

And one day

I ruined everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I took 2 kids from their mother..

I put my wife in a MA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And now today...

I am seeing her..

Marrying someone else!!!!!!!!!!!!

And i will not let that happen!!!!!!!

Jai is like i love you!!

I always did and i always will!

And you cant change that!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani is looking at him!!!!!!!!

Today for the 1st time

She saw the true love in his eyes for her!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is like...

Today....

You will have to choose...

Who will it be....

Me and AD!!!!!!!!!!!!

AD came out

And he's like

wats going on??

Bani was looking at AD!!

Jai was there

AD is like wat are you doing here?

Jai is like

I came here for my wife!!

Ad is like ur wrong

She's going to be my wife!!!!!!!!!!....

Jai looks at her!!!!!

Bani is totally confused!!!!!!!!

AD is like

ur not going to go back to him are you???

He ruined ur life!!!!!!

Bani was in a rut!!!!!!!

Now she was completely lost

and didnt know wat to do!!!

Meanwhile

Jai got a phone call

And he was like WHAT?????

My kids!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani's eyes shot up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wen he mentioned the kids....

Jai is like

I swear if Pia does anything

I will kill her today!!!!!!!!

Bani was stunned!!!

Jai left from there...

Bani was going to go

AD stopped her...

AD is like

why are you doing??

Bani: my kids!!

AD: Arre... why do you worry soo much!!!

Bani: Becuz they are my kids!!!!

AD: yeah but....

Bani is like

my kids are in trouble and they need me!!!!

AD: Who said???

It was Jai that kept them for 5 years!!!!

Bani was like

why is he talking like this

Jai went!!!

Pia had the kids tied up!!!

Krishna and Athrav were crying

And yelling Papa!!!!

Pia is like

Well Mr. Walia!!!

Jai: Pia what the hell are you doing????

Pia is smiling!!!

Pia is like

this is the easiest proposition!!!!!

The kids are free..

You just marry me!!!!!!!!!

Jai was pissed!!

Jai is like

I will kill..

Pia is like oh no!!!

U harm me

And i harm the kids

its easy as that!!!!!!!!!

Bani had come

And she saw her kids....

They were crying and everything

It hurts a mother wen her kids cry

Bani yells at Pia

to release the kids!

Pia is like shut up!!

U swear i am going to listen to you!!!!

Pia is like...

Jai Walia..

Marry me!!!

and the kids are free

or else..

u may never see them again!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai was stunned

Bani was soooo pissed!!!!

Jai is like....

I will never marry you!!

NEVER!!!!!!

Pia; Not even for ur kids??

She's like

u dont love ur kids or wat??

Jai was pissed!!!!

Jai is like

I love my kids

And i will do anything for my kids

But to marry you...

Is one thing i will never do!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is like u ruined my life 5 years ago!!!

And i will surely

Not let you ruin my future!!!!!!!!!!

Bani already knows.... about wat u made me do 5 years ago!!

Pia is like so wat if you told Bani!!! I dont care!!!!

I want you and only you!

And i can get you at any cost!!!!!!!

Bani is pissed now!!!!!!!!!!

She walks to Pia

Pia sees her walking

ANd tells her

dont come near me!!!!!!!!!

She is threatening Bani!!!!

Bani is coming closer

Pia is like

closer you will come

U wont see ur kids

Jai tells Bani to come back!!

BAni isnt listening!!!!!!

Bani comes to Pia

And looks at her

Bani is like

U will harm my kids???

PIa looks at her

Bani says answer me

U will harm my kids?

If He doesnt marry you

then you will harm my kids??

She says that sooo many times!!!

And thne

Bani pushes Pia!!!!!!!!!!!

And i mean pushes her hard!!!!!!

Bani is like i will see how you will harm my kids!!!

And i will see how much you marry mr. Walia!!

Pia gets mad

she tries to get up

Wen she does

Bani twists her arm really hard

Pia is screaming!!!!

And she's in pain!

Bani is like u will harm my kids???

Bani is like i am their mother!!!

And as a mother

I will make sure that my kids arent harmed!!!!!!!!!

And that too...

From a person like you!!!!!

Bani takes Pia out

Jai was looking on

He went by his kids....

Untied them

they hugged him both and werent letting go!!!

He tried to calm them down!!!!!!!!

Bani dragged Pia..

And boy did she drag her or wat.....

And she kicked her out on the roads.......

And she closed the gates on her!!!

And there was no chance of her coming in!!!!!!!!!

And no chance at all!

Pia was yelling!

Bani closed her ears

and Went back!!!

Pia was 😭

Bani went back inside....

Jai had both kids!

They were hugging him!!!!!!

And werent letting go!!!!!

Jai was looking at her!!!!!!!

bani was looking at them!!!!

Krishna saw Bani

And she ran to her

and she hugged her crying!!!!!!!!!!

Bani was consoling her

While Jai was consoling Atharav!!!

Both Jai and Bani were looking at each other.....

Afterwards

Jai told Bani

That was is she going to pick!!!!

Him or AD!!!

Bani was looking at him!!!

And she's like....

Why are you still asking me this?

Jai: Becuz i want to know!!!!

Bani is like

if u know the answer

then why are you asking?

Jai looks at her!!!

Jai: Well i thought i could change ur mind

But now i know

that ur mind

U will marry AD!!!!!

Bani: Why should I... wen i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He looked at her!!!!

He was like omg!!

He was stunned

But he was happy!!!

Bani is like

I dont want to marry anyone

Only you!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bani is like

U were my 1st love

and u will always be!!!!!!!!

Jai was happy!!!!!!!!!!!!

He came close to her!!!!!!!!!

He held her face

and she hugged him!

the kids were happy

They came to them

and hugged them both!

Jai and Bani picked them up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And they were happy loving family!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End!

Its the best i could do!!!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
ben good job
you are on top of things
okie look i am even on my vacation thinking about tasks for you
see cant u just see mylove???
okie here you go!

writee your dream 21st birthday!
that should be really easy!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: *Guli*



I had walked into the court room

everyone turned around and looked at me!!!

I was looking all around

i couldnt find him

i know he was there

but why couldnt i see him???

Wen she saw the jury box..

There were 10 saalis!!!! 🥳🥳🥳...of course...jai ho aur hum naa ho 😉

How did they get there... 😕that is for saalis to know and you to find out 😛

It was... pachu, mamta, navs, jaz, jigu, shruti, sam, humera, pooja, and nibu...

They were all there!!! im telling you...PARTY at the court room

Apparently....

Jaz figured out what guli told her... So she told everyone... well of course...im smart liek that...and my fellow saalis...how can i not tell them 😃

So they were all there!!!!!

they were on the jury team!

But then they were stunned to see Guli

She wasnt suppose to be there... 😡

Jaz was like uff... kya pagal ladki hain yeh!!!!!! thank you! 😃

Guli was tired..

She was running ...oye...r u on the track team...or just practice for when the saalis really come after u 😆😆😆😆

this wasnt time for games

She was looking for him

but why couldnt she see him

And thne

her heart was racing

Dhak Dhak DHak Dhak... oh...dhak dhak kaarne laga, mora jeeyera daarne laga 😳

And then

she spotted him!!!! bout time...man...u r SLOW 😆

She was smiling

She saw Jai!!!!!

She smiled!!

Judge was thinking wat was going on..

Guli walked up to him.....

And she was standing right there

Jai was confused......

She was smiling...

Saalis were looking!!

They were shocked!!!

What was she going to do!!!

Guli got down on one knee........ 😲

And starts telling him

from the 1st time i saw you..

i knew you were the one......

She's like..

ur hot.. dashing..... and very sexy!!!!!!!

No matter what you wear.....

You look damn good...

Especially in ur black silk boxers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳
😲,.....WHATT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guli is like

i know that you are the only one... for me

and i am the only one for you

I dont care... What you did..

whether you killed Sahil or not

but i love you!! 😲...besharam...jiju ka kya hua 😡

And i am asking you

in front of everyone

Will you marry me?????? 😲

Jaz; WHat?? I object!!! hell ya i do...he is MINE...MINE i tell ya...ok..well navu's😊...but not yours 😡

Judge: Quiet!!!.... 😲...haila...mujhe kyun daante rahe hai...stupid judge 😭

Judge tells Guli to carry on!!! BESHARAM JUDGE 😡

Jaz; But..

Judge: Quiet.. this is getting good!!!! 😲...apparently judge watches ektas serials...😆😆😆

Jai was looking at the judge....

Guli winked at Jai!!! 😲....see...this is why we call her besharam...big besharam...QUEEN OF BESHARAMS 😡

Jai was looking at her

he came down to Guli....

And he told her to stand

She stood up!!

Jai: really??? no...for fake...uff...jai...

Guli nodded her head yes!!!

And she came closer to him

and she put her hands on his bare chest...... WHAT the H*LL...trial pe half nanga hoke chale aaye...😲....murder trial!...is the judge gay...is jai trying to patao the judge...chi...i didnt know jai swang that way....🤢

Pachu: Oy... touching!!!!! PIC...see...she can focus...good job jaanu 👍🏼

Judge: Shh!!!! 😲

Pachu sat down!!

the officer was trying to hold all the saalis back!!! haila...tell me the officers were atleast cute...😳

Guli was happily touching him........ 🤬...main kuch naa hi kahoon to aacha hai...varna i will get banned...🤬🤬🤬🤬

And Jai smiled at her....

ANd he said yes!!! 😲...Navu...roh maat yaar...hum zaroor kuch karenge 😃

Guli was happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She was like yes!!!!!!.......

She hugged him!! 😲....BEHSARAM!!!!

JAz: Arre.. i am gone!!!!!!..... 😡

everyone was like awww!!!

they all clapped!! haat khaat kaar rakh dungi!!!! 😡

Saalis are like...

NOOO!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

Jai: Black silk boxers DEAD...im so dead...maar gayi jaz 🤢

Guli nodded her head yes!!!!!!!!!

Pooja: Oy.. no talk of boxers!!! good pooja...+5 👍🏼

Navs almost fainted!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guli tells the judge..

My Jai is innocent..

He didnt do it!!!!!

Judge is like...

Awww that was sooo sweet

He's like i am dropping all the charges... worthless judge 😡...who the h*ll passed him on the BAR exam

Saaalis are like

we say

he's guilty!!!!!!!! totally...aare humare lawyer kahaan hai 😕

Judge is like

You guys are guilty.... 😲.....

For almost trying to stop this love connection!! 🤬....love connection my a*s 🤬

I sentence you guys to 1 year of community service!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤬....😲...what...what is that...yo no entiendo...no hablo english 😳

The End!!!!!!!!!!😆

tujhse main baath nahin karungi...😡😡😡..saalis...meeting...tonight...MSN...mandatory...we have to do somethign about this Queen of Besharam!!!!

JAZ

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Guli,

That was a great FF, totally loved it... you rock...sorry I don't leave comments on your FFs, the only reason is because you update too fast and I don't get to keep up with them.... 😆

But they seriously rock...

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