FF Kahin Pyaar Na Ho Jaye Ch13 Pg26 25/09 - Page 15

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part, please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Nazneen, finally got the time to read the update..Fabulous 👏 👏 👏

Ranveer is in deep love with Rano but is married to Rashi under unavoidable circumstances. OMG..why can't Rashi go out of his life when he hates her and they dont even share a proper relationship. Poor Rano..Both are having a difficult time.

Oh our munna also has suffered a lot in the past due to "LOVE" and is dreading now of his feelings towards Bani.
haila..it was soooooooo close...their Kiss!! The tension in the car was really intense.

Pls continue soon..

Rama
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks for all the comments, I really appreciate them. I'm sorry, but no update today - i'm really busy, with guests coming over, so haven't had the time to write the latest chapter. Once again sorry - i'll try and update ASAP 😃
Edited by chickster - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
no problem will wait for your update eagerly
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Posted: 18 years ago
No worries. Take your time. 😊 We can wait. 😊
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aww no problem it k will be wating
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sorry for the ultra long delay - to make up for it, I tried to write a longer part. I also apologise for the language in advance - I was trying to convey the righ amount of hatred. If anyone dislikes it, than sorry😳

Chapter 11

"The most eloquent silence; that of two mouths meeting in a
kiss."


~ by Unknown ~



The mehndi was in full swing at the Walia Mansion and Bani had done her best to stay away from Mr. Walia. She still couldn't understand what had happened in the car - one moment he sarcastically telling her off and the next moment their lips were about to touch. She was so confused - every time she would hear his name, her heart beat would speed; it would feel as if a stampede of horses were having a race in her chest, or if their eyes met across the room, everything around her would recede and it felt as if there was just the two of them in that room. Even now, her eyes searched for him among the noise and crowd, hoping to catch just a glimpse of him. However, she could not indulge her heart, she had work to do. Lately Pushkar was acting very awkwardly around her and always forgetting things that he had to do - she had to pick up the slack for him, not that it bothered her, because it would stop her from thinking about Mr. Walia. It seemed as much as she tried to avoid him, her brain would not let her live in peace; he occupied her every silent moment. She was busy with work and her thoughts, but she had seen the changes in her sisters; Pia was so happy it was almost annoying watching her and Rano had become withdrawn and smiling less than she did. Rano had always been the moody one, but she had never shut her sisters out of life, but that was what she was doing at the moment. She had decided that as soon as the wedding was over next week she would talk to Rano.

Jai stood in the shadows of the upstairs corridor, intently watching the figure in the burnt orange sari - the figure mesmerised him. She had the gracefulness of a swan, her steps small, the sway of her hips subtle and her smile dazzling. He had been watching her for the past fifteen minutes. As hard as he had tried to not look at her, he had been drawn to her like a moth to a flame. She captivated him like no other. It had been a week since he had nearly kissed her and every night he was tortured by images of their lips touching, of them in the throes of passion. A rueful smile touched his lips as he thought about all the cold showers he had had to take like a sixteen year old boy in lust. But even he knew that what he felt for her was much deeper than lust. He was shaken out of his thoughts when Adi slapped him on the back.

"Jai, what are you doing here in the shadows? Your not spying on a pretty girl are you?" Adi asked.

"What? Yes! No! - I mean who would I be staring at anyway?" Jai managed to fumble out, since he was caught off guard - he been so deep in thought.

Adi just smiled, he knew who jai had been staring at, since Adi had been watching Jai watch Bani. He had heard the gossip from his mother that Jai was infatuated with her, since Massi had seen a "look" in Jai's eye. He couldn't help but smile, he had laughed it off at first, thinking that the two were day dreaming. But today he had seen the "look" in Jai's eyes as well. As much as he loved his friend and brother in law, he was anticipating the fall that Jai was about to take; as the saying went the bigger they are the harder the fall and what a fun fall it was going to be to watch.

"Come on Jai, lets go downstairs, I don't want to miss my daughters sangeet and you don't want to miss your nieces sangeet," Adi said and forced Jai to come down with him.

Rano was depressed and angry at the same time; angry that she was in love with a married man and depressed because she knew that she could never have him. Over the last few weeks, she had tried her hardest to pretend as if nothing had happened, that she didn't feel anything for Ranveer. But as hard as she tried, her heart wouldn't listen to her mind. She pretended that everything was okay and that it didn't hurt - but it did, it hurt like hell. Whoever made up the saying its better to have loved and lost than to never have loved again was a liar; they obviously had never been in love. Rano made her way up the stairs, she was dying to pee and finding your was around this place was like a maze. As she turned a corner, she could hear loud voices. Her heart beat immediately picked up its pace, as she realised that it was Ranveer's voice.

"I said stay away from me Raashi, I don't want you anywhere near me!"

"But Ranveer, I love you, we are husband and wife! I deserve your love and your respect."

"You want my love Raashi? My respect? How the hell do you think you can get them, let alone deserve them after what you did to me? I have been putting up with you for the last three years. I hate you, your face, I hate every god damn thing about you! I rue the day that you walked into my life!"

"Ranveer, please, I did everything because I loved…."

"Shut up! Just shut up! You call f*****g another a man behind my back love? You call dumping that illegitimate child on me as mine love? Your love is so mahaan that I didn't even find out until you had miscarried! You and that b**ch Roshni have done nothing but ruined mine and Jai's life! Regardless of that you want my love? You want my f*****g respect? Get the hell out of my sight!"

The next thing that Rano saw was Raashi being roughly pushed out of the way, when she refused to move. Quickly, she hid herself behind a large potted plant, not wanting Ranveer to know that she had witnessed something so personal. Her heart cried out for Ranveer.

Downstairs, everyone was enjoying the mehndi, everyone was singing and dancing, girls were putting mehndi on. Bani was sitting down getting her hands done, since Massi had insisted and hadn't taken no for an answer. Now two hours later, there were only a handful of guests and Bani was walking towards the Rano and Pia, when after a loud clap of thunder the lights disappeared, bathing them all in darkness. Some let out shrieks, the men laughed and other continued talking as if nothing happened. Even though Bani wasn't scared of the dark, she hated standing still and took a step forward to try and find her sisters in the dark. She had taken a few steps, when she bumped into a solid wall of muscle. She let out a muffled shriek, but stopped, when a hand covered her mouth and an arm wrapped around her waist, bringer her body closer. Instinctively, she knew that it was Mr. Walia. In the darkness her eyes tried to find his and they did. In the darkness, his eyes glittered, looking almost like two flashing orbs of silver. As her eyes adjusted, she could make out the flare of his nostrils as he leaned further, bringing their two faces closer, so that he could lean down and whisper in her ear.

"You owe me a kiss and today its collection day, Bani," Jai whispered. He felt the gentle tremor go through her, but he knew that nothing could stop him today, unless she said no. Gently, he wrapped his arm tightly around her waist and lifted her, his hand still pressed against her mouth. Jai let out a deep breath as he felt Bani's body make full contact with his. For a second he closed his eyes and savoured the feeling. Than he was moving again, he was taking her into the corridor and went into the downstairs guest bedroom. Every step was torture for him, as he could feel Bani's body gently rubbing his. He banged the door closed and pressed Bani against it. He removed his hand.

"Last time to say no Bani, say it and I'll stop," Jai muttered through clenched teeth. The need to touch her, was getting stronger by the minute and the chance to say no was issued from the last vestiges of control that he could gather. For ten seconds he waited, he waited for her to push him away. When she didn't, he placed his hands on either side of her head. Jai knew that if he touched her, kissed her or caressed her, once wouldn't be enough, and he wasn't even sure that he could stop at one kiss, one touch. He knew though that today, he couldn't let her go with out tasting her. Inexplicably, he knew that she belonged to him like no other. Looking deeply into her eyes, he lowered his lips to her, he pressed his lips to hers, with as much gentleness a he could manage. Bani struggled against the press of his lips and turned her head to the side and pushed him back. Both were panting hard, desire thick between them. Jai raised his hand to her face and turned it towards him. In her eyes, he saw the same heat and passion that were reflected in his own. Bani's eyes glared back at him with defiance, trying to fight the same thing that he was and for a long moment they just stared at each other. He kissed her again, pressing his lips to hers gently this time. He coaxed her with tender nips, sweet kisses and deep caresses of his tongue, until she was returning the kiss with as much passion and ardour. Pulling her body closer to his, he let Bani feel the heat of his own body. Jai softly nipped her chin, scraped his cheek against her soft one. He blew delicately into her ear, causing her to shiver, he nipped at her earlobe, until he brought his lips once again back to hers. Bani wrapped her arms around his neck, gently caressing the back of his neck.


Edited by chickster - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Me first after a long time cool keep it going finaly jai and bani kiss 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Saving.....will come back in the morning 😊

That's amazing Nazneen. Loved it to the bits. Haila!! Jai has developed feeling for Bani and vice versa. Felt bad for Ran-Ran-Ra. Wondering how JB are going to confess their love for each other. Please continue sooner😊

👏

Edited by khushboo2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow !!!!!!!

that was fabulous!!!!!!!

i just read your fanfic in one go!!!! it was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!

i cant beleive that they kissed!!!

i wonder how bani will react!!!!

i hope raashi will leave ranran alone FOREVER!!!!!

i wish jai and bani become closer!!!


please cont soon
thanks
sunju



Edited by basket - 18 years ago

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