FF:Kuch Toh Hua Hai :Part 20pg59(end)

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 18 years ago

#121

Awesome part.
loved it.
So much for their con....first Pushkar then the two little innocent Walia devils 😆...poor Jai didn't get a chance to spend some quality time with Bani. 😆
hmmmmmm....plan....sounds interesting....looking forward to what Jai have in mind
plz cont. soon.

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ofcourse

@ofcourse

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Posted: 18 years ago

#122

Oh no..that dint happen!!! That pot dint break!!! JW, u r going to have a tough time buddy..Bani is not so easy to eb pataofy for bcoming ur kids mom, that too when she addresses ur kids as DEVILS!! Oh god, this Atharva is real shaithan..But what to say, kids r kids..
Yeh Pushy kahan se aaya??? JW jealous..hmm..interesting..
So what r his plans now?? Looks like kids r going away with their Pushy uncle somewhere, while our Romeo trying to fish his Juliet 😉 😉 😉
Fantastic part 👏 👏 👏
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Jesse

@Jesse_B

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Posted: 18 years ago

#123

Hello there im Jesse. Firstly, i wanted to say thank you for welcoming me to the forum, it was really nice of you. Secondly, you are definitely one of those talented writers that i was talking about who has me hooked to this forum with your mind-blowing fanfic.

Im loving the the way your portraying Jai and Bani and i am definitely loving the kids, they are hilarious!! Nice one, keep up the amazing work and i look forward to the next offering.

Jesse.

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#124

thar was funny.. broking potss 😆
ye puskar kahan se agaya..??????

pls continue sooon

davia

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 18 years ago

#125

Its very nice to see JW struggling for a change - poor guy can't even get a word in... 😆 Bani ain't giving him the time of day even...of course the kids have to break a pot in somebody else's house..probably a beige carpet too... 😆
👏 👏 👏

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#126

super update Tanu....hehe you made some improvement in length...learnt from me...

great..cont soon

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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

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Posted: 18 years ago

#127

Great part Tanu 👏 👏 ......JB's characters portrayed beautifully.......please continue soon 😆

P.S. Could you please pm me when you update if possible 😉

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Reeshita

@ree_views

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Posted: 18 years ago

#128

hey you are doing a wonderful job in describing the tension in JW's mind and the cute cute actions of the kids. i like the kids so much. and here we have Pushy too entering the scene... it's going to be more fun. great update.

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Taz234

@Taz234

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Posted: 18 years ago

#129

Hi Tanu...sorry for the delay in commenting had a little catching up to do!!! 😊
Really enjoyed the updates 👏 👏 👏 ...Man...Jai is sooo after Bani...got into the pool with the kids to tick her off a little 😉 😉 Krishna...awww a darl isn't she learning how to swim. Atharv...well he is just a cutie pie...and a brat too. 😆
Jai coming out of the pool haila...all wet...ok...i'm dead!!! Kya descripion tha! 😳 Do u blame Bani for ogling! 😉

Atharv knocking that pot over!!! 😲Bani was mad but controlled herself somehow...but yeh Pushkar the Pilot kahaan se aagaya 😕 ...Jai is not getting the time he wants with Bani...wonder what happens next... conts soon sweety...ur doing a fab job!! 👏 👏 😃

Tazo!

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#130

Fabalous update,very interesting twist with Pushkar.too good.the kids are too cute,love them.lookin forward to Jai's plan,cant wait. 😊

PS: plz call me Preet. 😳

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