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Posted: 18 years ago
you are making Atharva a naughty boy and Krishna an obedient girl. i like it..... actually in many cases that's the truth. oh so JW lost a great friend. hope he forms his complete family soon. (but you are making it too soooon! 2 days and love???) okay no problem! after all JB ke liye anything...
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Posted: 18 years ago
alright...main aagayi...πŸ˜ƒ...sorry for delay in reading updates...but you know...mid-terms and all that 'good stuff' 🀒...so glad that it is over...so here i am...back...finally cuaght up...and so...chali aayi comment kaarne...😊...

Ch 3:
go massi...TV serials zindabad...πŸ‘πŸΌ...we r with u massi...i see you are a TV despo...just like me...😳😳😳....mom gets mad at me for too much TV and now too much IF ...lol...but haila...massi...we feel your pain...joh daard aapka hai, wohi daard humara hai...kya kya dekhne ko milta hai serials mein...😑...we get some good stuff...*cough*JANI*cough*...but then we get tons of bad...repto, cobra, jiggy-poo, karuna, bhoot 🀒...kya kare...cant live with it or with out it...πŸ˜•...oye hoye...jai likes her in pink...shocker! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰...lol...and bani...tujhe kya problem...😑😑😑jai is flirting with you...aachi baath hai...u flirt too naa...b4 i beat u to it...πŸ˜ƒ...

Ch 4:
haila...jai is straight forward naa...calling her 'unfriendly'...im all...😲😲😲...he did not just say that to her face...lol...and it seems like in your ff...bani is ms. khadoos...πŸ˜†...a restless sleep huh...'saapne mein milta hai, oh munda mere saapne milta hai' πŸ˜‰...the twins speaking hindi was so cute...i just wanted to hug them...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—...i wanted to hug jai more...just for the hell of it...but that is not the point... πŸ˜•...omg...i was all 😲...then all 🀣...when they told bani to sleep in papas baadi bed...🀣...kids do say the darndest things...πŸ˜†...and they called her bua...haila...nahin beta...bani ko bua nahin bulate...mummy...try mamma...akhir aant mein toh yehi hona hai...πŸ˜‰...lol...repto bua...i mean pia bua...πŸ˜†...lol...that right...u teach yur kid jai...good papa......totally approve...jai...tu ek kaam kaar...usse rakhi baandwale...πŸ˜›...at least someone is sleeping peacefully...😳

Ch 5:
again...bani...so what...jai is flirting with you...koi baath nahin...tu bhi kaar...i tell you...if u dont...ill land up at massis house/farmhouse and do enough flirting for me and you combined...😳...lol...bani already sees the 'perfect family' and so does jai...oye hoye..kya baath hai...πŸ˜‰...and right...bani...your eyes just 'wandered'...ha...dont believe that...you looked...you totally looked...πŸ˜ƒ...and haila...cobra...i mean roshni died...had to call her by her name since she was jais friend...that is weird to say......but aww...tahts too bad...well not really...here is where JB come in...😳😳😳...and jai...go for your plans...im with u...😈😈😈..any special needs...call me...😎😎😎...number is J-A-Z-9-1-1...ask guli...she knows all about it...πŸ˜†...

ok...kafi lambi comment hogayi...i think that is enough for today...lol...well...cant wait for next update...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago

davia389: yep roshni WAS his wifeπŸ˜‰.. lol.. thanks

Ravneet_jassal: thanks for liking the FF.. yep jai's in love!😳

angelrockz: yea.. he kinda loves bani.. but but for long! πŸ˜† will put the next part up soon hun.

swati_bhatia: thanks swati.. will continue soonπŸ˜ƒ

Taj: bad place to stop i know! but will post the part up soon.. 😊

ridhijai: thanks! shaadi already i know! civil convo?? lets see!πŸ˜‰

suimi: thanks hun.. the attraction is definitely there..atleast from jai's side!πŸ˜‰

ofcourse: thanks Rama... a dip in the pool.. wouldn't mind one myself... as for Bani, JW and the kids lets see!πŸ˜› sorry to stop there but i need to keep you hooked!πŸ˜†

janu_2006: thanks janu!😳

Neetusxm: bas jai aisa hi hai!πŸ˜‰ he just needs to convince bani now! will make the next update longer! *promise*

coolgurl_2005: thanks preet.. Bnai is different.. most ppl would definitely swoon over JW!πŸ˜‰

Bristy: thanks hun..krissy father..? well bani won't say it anytime soon.. but will it do if i say JW is cute..πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

khushboo2006: thanks khushboo.. jai surely is fast!

Sheena_Row: Hi! Kids are sweet coz they had no influence of Roshni .. only JW!😳 hheeh..

InTheZone123: Jai is thinking about marriage.. lets see...and Bani falling for him.. well she's intrigued but hasnt fallen just yet!πŸ˜‰

ree_views: in my experience boys are naughtierπŸ˜† love only in JWs book.. and that too he is not sure! πŸ˜‰

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jnawaz

alright...main aagayi...πŸ˜ƒwelcome!...sorry for delay in reading updates dont worry!...but you know...mid-terms and all that 'good stuff' 🀒...so glad that it is over hope they went well!...so here i am...back...finally cuaght up...and so...chali aayi comment kaarne...😊...ok.. me ready!

Ch 3:
go massi...TV serials zindabad...πŸ‘πŸΌ...we r with u massi...i see you are a TV despo...just like me...😳😳😳....mom gets mad at me for too much TV and now too much IF my mum's the smae... though she sits and watches all the videos online!πŸ˜†...lol...but haila...massi...we feel your pain...joh daard aapka hai, wohi daard humara hai...kya kya dekhne ko milta hai serials mein...😑...we get some good stuff...*cough*JANI*cough*thank God for Jani!πŸ˜‰...but then we get tons of bad...repto, cobra, jiggy-poo, karuna, bhoot 🀒...kya kare...cant live with it or with out it...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•lol.. there's both good and bad in life..πŸ˜•...oye hoye...jai likes her in pink...shocker! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰i htough why break the norm?...lol...and bani...tujhe kya problem...😑😑😑jai is flirting with you...aachi baath hai...u flirt too naa...b4 i beat u to it...πŸ˜ƒ...i'm sure bani wouldn't mind but a lot of the ppl on IF might not like it so much!πŸ˜‰

Ch 4:
haila...jai is straight forward naa...calling her 'unfriendly'...im all...😲😲😲...he did not just say that to her face...lol...and it seems like in your ff...bani is ms. khadoos...πŸ˜† he did.. to her face!πŸ˜† ...a restless sleep huh...'saapne mein milta hai, oh munda mere saapne milta hai' πŸ˜‰ i haven't heard this song in such a long time!...the twins speaking hindi was so cute...i just wanted to hug them...πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—...i wanted to hug jai more...just for the hell of it...but that is not the point... πŸ˜•...omg...i was all 😲...then all 🀣...when they told bani to sleep in papas baadi bed...🀣...kids do say the darndest things...πŸ˜†.well they're kids.. they dotn know any better.. though i'm sure jai wouldn't have minded!πŸ˜‰..and they called her bua...haila...nahin beta...bani ko bua nahin bulate...mummy...try mamma...akhir aant mein toh yehi hona hai...πŸ˜‰of course! what else?😳...lol...repto bua...i mean pia bua...πŸ˜†...lol...that right...u teach yur kid jai...good papa......totally approve...jai...tu ek kaam kaar...usse rakhi baandwale...πŸ˜›don't worry raska bhandhan is coming soon!πŸ˜‰...at least someone is sleeping peacefully...😳

Ch 5:
again...bani...so what...jai is flirting with you...koi baath nahin...tu bhi kaar...i tell you...if u dont...ill land up at massis house/farmhouse and do enough flirting for me and you combined...no need jaz.. main hoon na!πŸ˜‰ 😳...lol...bani already sees the 'perfect family' and so does jai...oye hoye..kya baath hai...πŸ˜‰...and right...bani...your eyes just 'wandered'...ha...dont believe that...you looked...you totally looked...πŸ˜ƒdont let all of the screets out jaz.. comletely embarasing bani! lol...and haila...cobra...i mean roshni died...had to call her by her name since she was jais friend...that is weird to say......but aww...tahts too bad...well not really...here is where JB come in...😳😳😳...and jai...go for your plans...im with u...😈😈😈..any special needs...call me...😎😎😎...number is J-A-Z-9-1-1...ask guli...she knows all about it...πŸ˜†...heheh.. Jai will keep that in mind if he needs any help!πŸ˜‰

ok...kafi lambi comment hogayi...i think that is enough for today...lol...well...cant wait for next update...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ thanks for the comments! loved reading it!
JAZ

A BIG thank you to everyone for the comments.. Nearly done with the next part... Need to add more to make it longer!πŸ˜• so will post soon!

Edited by bugs_bunny - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thanks for all the comments guys!! Really appreciate them! here's the next part.. it is longer than usual i hope! πŸ˜•

Part 6

'BANI' he screamed… she looked up and saw him gesturing. She slowly wiped her hands and moved to open the kitchen door.

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She let him in with a curt 'Good Morning' and then went back to pretending like she was busy, fiddling around with the utensils in the kitchen. This man was impossible… may be she could take this 'bartan' (utensil) and hit him with it.. such an irritating man. Nah.. then she would be charged with assault and what not.. she didn't want to go to jail!

Jai loked at her face.. emotions ranging from disgust to amusement and then a bit of fear! He wondered what she had to be scared of..

'Mind if I have some coffee?' he asked.. he had to start the coverstaion somehow!

'Sure.' She pointed to the coffee pot and the cup stand ' what doesn't Massi give him coffee or tea? That he has to come and drink it here?' she thought bitterly.

'So, what have you got planned for today?' he asked, again attempting to start a conversation.

To avoid you and the terrors your massi calls 'angels'… 'I'm just working on my book..'

'Oh? What is it about?'

From what Bani had heard this man had a lot of money.. he was a business tycoon! 'you have money, you can buy it and read it when it's published' she wanted to say to him but instead she replied ' Just another children's book really..'

Jai knew he was getting no where with her. Just from the occasional glance she bestowed upon him he could tell he was not welcome in her house (which incidentally was actually his he thought) or her life… well he wasn't going to give up so easily.

There was an awkward silence in the kitchen. Bani was just plain irritated. She just didn't want to know him or his kids better…

The ringing of the doorbell broke the silence… Bani vowed to thank whoever it was at the door. 'Excuse me' she said to jai and went out of the kitchen. Jai watched her make her way out of the kitchen and went out himself into the garden and brought Krishna and Arthva in to kitchen.

He heard the door open and a shrill ' PUUUSSSHHHKARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR'. More screams and shrieks followed with the occasional 'Where have you been?' and 'It's been soooo long' thrown in. The kids looked up at Jai, a bit astonished at the fact anyone except themselves could make so much noise. While Jai waited impatiently in the kitchen to see who this ' PUUUSSSHHHKARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR' was!

It wasn't long before he saw Bani entering the kitchen again and with her a handsome young man. Bani had remembered leaving Jai in the kitchen. 'Pushkar.. this is Jai, Arthva and Krishna' Hi's and Hello's are exchanged between them with Jai and Pushkar shaking hands, both sizing each other up.

'BANI.. you got married AND have kids and you don't think it's important to tell me. How could you do this to me?'

'Relax Pushkar' Bnai laughed.. 'they're not mine.. they're Jai's… you know I would never leave you' and she kissed him on the cheek..

'Ohhh…' Puskar smiled and Jai thought he saw a look of relief cross his face. While Bani prepared more coffee Jia and Puskar chatted, while the kids went and explored the house. Jai found out that Puskar was a pilot and he worked out from the airline which Puskhar worked for and Jai's own knowledge of the world that he must earn a hefty six figure salary.

'great' thought Jai. 'That's all I need. As is making friends with Bani isn't hard enough here comes Mr Hot-Shot Pilot who is already friends with her. Jai nearly groaned out loud in frustration.

Bani handed Pushkar placed a cup of coffee in front of Pushkar and went and stood next to him. He put an arm around her shoulder and she smiled up him.

Jai was burning with jealousy.. while Jai and Pushkar were talking Bani went in thought.

She hadn't seen Puskar in years and he hadn't changed much she thought looking up at him with a hint of a smile on her face. He had always been there for her and she loved him to bits. Bani was jolted out of her thoughts by a loud crash and a scream..

'oh No..' thought Jai.. 'The kids '

Bani, Pushkar and Jai rushed out of the kitchen and found Arthva and Krishna in the living room, covered in mud. A plant lay horizontally nearby! Bani looked at the kids in shock.. Arthva was grinning and looked very happy.. like he had just won some sort of prize. Krishna, on the other hand was close to tears. Her emerald green eyes pooled with tears.

Jai picked her up immediately and starting to consle 'It's ok beta.. don't cry..' while Bani was still in a state of shock., her brand new carpet, covered by mud stains. The new plant pot broken. 'Oh My Gosh' she whispered loud enough so Pushkar who was standing next to her could hear. Pushar just seemed amused by all of this.

Jai while comforting Krishna risked a look at Bani.. By the shock on her face, she obviously wasn't amused like Pushkar. 'Damn' he thought. Bani suddenly glanced and caught his eye. Hers were filled with anger and blaming him, while his full of apologies!

Puskkar became aware of the tension between them and told Jai to take the kids out of the room. 'Come on kids… doesn't matter.. let's go and I'll get you something to drink. Juice.. Coke..?' he asked the children.

Arthve who was unperturbed by all of this at once shouted 'Coke… I want coke..'

And Krishna just followed. Pushkar led them out of the room and into the kitchen, leaving Bani and Jai alone…

'So Sorry Bani..they're just kids.. I'll even pay for the carpet and the plant pot' said Jai… somehow whenever they were around Bani, they were at their worst! They were that much of a hazard at home!

Bani ignored him and went out of the room and came back a little later with some cleaning supplies and started to clean up. Jai helped. They worked in silence for the next 15 – 20 minutes with Jai glancing at Bani every now and then hoping for a change in demeanour. Nope.. she was still angry!

Bani couldn't get the mud stains out of the carpet (lol. They didn't have Vanish Oxy-action.. heheh anyways). Then Bani made her way into the kitchen to find Pushkar chatting to Krishna and Arthva.

Jai took this opportunity to thank Pushkar and Bani, say sorry once again and take his kids back to their house.

'Have you seen them.. they're so cute! And they talk so much.. especially Arthva.. that boy..' Puskhar trailed off after a look from Bani.

'Come on sweetie… they're just kids'

'More like little devils..' she muttered.

'Bani, Bani, Bani, that's what kids are for… to wreck havoc! Otherwise life would be very boring! Come on.. enough now… come and help me unpack…'

Bnai looked at him.. 'Yes baba.. I got you something..' Bani's face broke in to a grin and they both made their way out of the kitchen.

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Over the next few days, eveytime Jai attepted to talk to Bani or started talking to Bani Pusjkar appeared and joined the conversation. He was getting irritated. He had also instructed his kids to stay away from Bani aunty for a little while.. gove her time to cool down.

But whenever Bani wasn't around.. they would play with Pushkar who had become a good friend to them and even helped Arthva in his little pranks on his father or Massi. Puskhar became a kid when he was around the two of them.

Bani was happy aswell. Pushkar was here which meant no talking to Jai. And Puskhar kept the two children busy aswell, which meant she could work on her book

Jai, on the other hand was getting restless, he hadn't spoken to Bani properly since the incident with the plant pot and he knew if he wanted a mother for these kids then he had to be atleast on speaking terms with the woman without her bodyguard around!

With this in mind he made a plan!

so... was it longer??πŸ˜• then thanks neetu (neetusxm) and bristy(the_rain) Remember to leave a comment...and guys the kadst bit I've said he made a plan.. im not quite sure what the plan is! so if u have any ideas please PM me! thanks!

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Posted: 18 years ago
Me first!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Firstly, I am soooo sorry that i took forever to comment😭😭
But now I'm hereπŸ˜ƒ
I loved the update and poor Bani the kids ruined her carpet by breaking the flower pot....
Poor girlπŸ˜’
And poor Jai... It seems like he's in love with Bani, but his kids are making her hate him...
And plus he's jealous with Pushkar being around😳
By the way, what kind of relation do Bani and Pushkar share?
Hmmm... I wonder what plan Jai has???
Please continue soonπŸ˜‰
Edited by :::pooja::: - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜† These to lil devils πŸ˜†

So Jai whats the plan, huh????? πŸ˜‰
Thx for a long updateπŸ˜ƒ
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey
ohhhhh they are only little kids πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
i hope Jai gets to speak to her more properlyget to know eachother abit better.
im liking Pushkar he dosnt seem to be a treat between Jai and Bani, but jai dosnt seem so sure πŸ˜†

plz update soon

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part hun..

this bani is hilarious hahaha... jai is even funnier...

hmmm i wonder wats going on in that evil head of his πŸ˜†

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