FF:Kuch Toh Hua Hai :Part 20pg59(end)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys this is my first time writing a FF so go easy on me! i hope you enjoy this...

Part 1:below, Part2: Pg4 , Part3: Pg7, Part4: pg 10, part 5: pg13, part6: pg15 part 7: pg18, part8: page21, part9: page23, part10: page26, part11:page30, part12: page33, part13:page36, part14:page39, part15, page 41, part16: page45, part17:page49, part18: page52, part19 pg56

Part 1

Bani clicked the save button and closed her laptop. She breathed in deeply and looked around. She loved sitting in the garden, next to the swimming pool while working. It gave her a sense of peace and helped her think.

She had been living here for the past six months and she loved it. An old lady lived next door who had rented out this house to her, Bani called her Massi at her (massi's) insistence. The two houses were very close and shared the garden, with a pool, which Bani rarely used. She didn't seem to have the time.

Massi had told Bnai that her nephew had brought the two houses for her. He wanted to combine into one big house but never got around to doing it. As the other house was lying empty Massi was able to rent it out and now Bani was living in it.

Massi was a sweet lady and Bani was very fond of her, it was one of the reasons she had moved in. She hated seeing Massi living on her own. It was also a quite place which had attracted Bani. Just what she needed to write her books. Bnai was a children's author although she hated children herself. She thought they were too messy and required too much attention.

Bani sighed and looking at her watch, she decided it was time for lunch. Just as she was getting up from her seat there was a scream and before Bani had a chance to move she had fallen over.

Getting up, she saw two kids; twins who had evidently crashed into her, sending her flying onto the floor! A boy and a girl. They looked about five, Bani observed. The little boy had brown hair and big brown eyes with a mischieveous look in them. The girl on the other hand also had brown hair but her eyes contained innocence. 'Where did you two come from??' She snapped.

'She's old.. She should know that by now!' whispered the boy to his sister.

Bani heard him whispering, and suppressed a grin. God he was cheeky! 'Sorry aunty' the little girl replied, 'For pushing you but he was chasing me'

Bani glared at the two kids. The two stared back. This is time in a gentler voice, 'I'm Bani.. and you are?

'Arthva' the boy replied 'and this is Krishna' he pointed to his sister.

'OK, now tell me what are you doing here?'

'Going to play in the pool' Arthva replied as it was the most obvious thing.

'You want to join us, you can teach me to swim' Krishna asked.

'No.. it's alright' .. she again looked at the kids.. 'We came here to visit Papa's massi.. we call her dadi. Papa says now we're going to live here for some time. Do you live here aswell?' Bani barely heard Krishna's words. Live here??Massi?

Bani's eyes widened in shock. No this can't be happening. She had a book to finish. Deadlines to meet. These kids living here? Distraction Disruption. Bani wanted to bang her head against the wall.

Before she knew it the two kids jumped into the pool, soaking her. 'WHAT THE…' she trailed off. Pushing her soaking hair back she looked at the two. They grinned back.

'Get out of the pool'.. They obliged and slowly made their way out.

'Krishna, Arthva' someone was calling for them. A deep male voice Bani noted.

The children obviously recognising the voice, were about to flee when Bani reached out and held on to their shoulders. From the gap in the hedge emerged a man. Black hair and chocolatey brown eyes. Very good looking she

She was able to recognise him, their father. The children looked like him.

The first thing he noticed was the soaking woman. He gave her a sympathetic smile. He knew it was because of the kids.

'I believe these (indicating towards the kids) are yours' she said

So tell me what you think.. worth continuing? Comments, suggestion, ideas are welcome...

I also need some help with the title of this FF.. so if you guys have any suggestions.. leave them in this thread or drop me a PM.. Thanks!

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was a good start and bani is diff ... i think she is lost wife of jw... 😉
pls continue sooon...u shd keep the ff name as book of kidss(bas man se nikal gaya)
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooow grt FF ....loved the first part....maybe she is jai waliaz wife ....i hope so ..anyways continue soon ............ 'Aisa kyon hota' is a good name for this FF .....it just came in my mind 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start...esp liked Atharva's attitude. 😆 Looking forward to more...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start
sounds really intresting
the kids are really cute
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very good start 👏
Looking forward to more

Poo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow ur first ff

itz great 👏


ctn soon !!!!!!



dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start. I loved Atharva! Bani's character seems interesting altho it's hard
to think of Bani as a kid-hater. Nevertheless, I'm eagerly waiting for your
next chapter..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start dear, so bani is not the mother of atharva and krishna. hope bani will fall in love with atharva and krishna and this will help her in her writing too.

please continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyyy Tanu... great start dear 👏 👏 👏 ...really enjoyed it. 😃 Bani a childrens author...but doesn't like kids 😕 , interesting. A & K....awww...such cuties jumping in the pool soaking her 😆 😆 ...i can just see some fun about to happen in this neighbourhood. 😉 Bani Rani ko parishaan karenge dono.. for sure 😉 ...or will their father be the one troubling her 😉Lets see huh...

Excited about the next part...cont soon sweety...as for the title hmmmm...will have to think about that...english or hindi?? If i think of something will let u know! 😃

Keep it coming sweety!! 🤗

Tazo! 😊

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