Bas Ek Pal Note pg.61 [08/09]

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@culgal86

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Posted: 18 years ago

#141

lovely update maro...............
bani and pillow wat a comparision.................
update soon wanna know wat up nxt when jai wakes up in the morning...........

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Shwetha

@vshwetha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#142

😳 😳 liked the last scene , can't wait to read the next part which is the morning. I'm sure Jai is going to be embrassed . Wonder how the two will talk to each other.

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bccool

@bccool

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Posted: 18 years ago

#143

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brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@ag06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#144

awwwww!!..loved the JB scene 😳 ...continue soon!! 😉

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desi_angel101

@desi_angel101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#145

lol "this pillow smells good"? that's so funny! great update!

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 18 years ago

#146

Aweosme part Maro 👏 👏
Ranveer is in love with Rano 😳 , too good 👏
I hope jai will start to believe in love again 😉
Jai and bani are getting closer 😳
Please continue ASAP 😉
Humera. 🤗

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Taz234

@Taz234

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Posted: 18 years ago

#147

Sorry Maro...got here a little late this occasion...but loved the update!!! 👏 👏 👏 Rano bumped into Ranveer..and Ranveer has fallen for her!!! 😉 😉

Both Jai and Ranveer seriously got drunk, Jai went straight to bed...Bani joined him and Jai hugged her like a pillow...awwwww...that was so cute 😳 😳 😳 ... and the pillow smelt nice too!!! 😳 😆

Wonder what jai's reaction will be in the morning 😉 ...looking forward to the next part!

Tazo! 🤗

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 18 years ago

#148

Haila, Maro! Hun, i just caught up and i absolutely love this FF! 😳 So glad Jai isn't with that rat face anymore! 🤢 But i would have liked it if Jai had dumped her and not the other way around! 😕 😆 Nobody dumps Jai Walia! 😡 But whatever, Jai's married now and to Bani! 😳 I love the storyline! Can't wait for the next part! Please continue soon! 😃

Love,
Goddess

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mb101

@mb101

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Posted: 18 years ago

#149

Hey people, thanks for the great positive response and comments. I'm happy many readers are liking the storyline and where it's heading to. I saw all the comments and they are very encouraging making me write more for you guys. I seriously enjoy reading them and they give me great feedback. So a big thanks to all my readers! 👏 I'm almost done the next part but I'm going to be busy later on so I might post it tomorow if possible.

Maro😛

Edited by mb101 - 18 years ago