FF: Pyaar Sirf Ek Baar Hota Hain - Page 103

Guli roola diya na mujhe 😭 😭 😭 ...after so much time I finally finished reading and I am in all tears now 😭 ...please don't let any thing happen to Bani pleaseeeeeeeee 🥺 🤗 ...and Guli I am not going to send one Belan but all the belans that I can gather around here 😈 😈 😈 ...Pls cont soon dear 😊 , and I want a happy part 😃 👏 😳 or else Jaz you are also responsible😆😈😆

😡...jaaaaniiii....not fair!!...u soooo cannot stop there...how dare you?..i mean?...dont u feel pity on us? *puppy face*


please please please please continue SOOOONNNNNN ☺️

OMG I count up, and I am a massi, 😭
That was beatufully parts 👏 👏 👏

ok ben i know you have more parts saved on your computer
so bring them out
don tmake me come there

Part 499

Bani is like I am sorry!!!

Jai is like God cant take you away from me!

He just cant

This is just the beginning of our lives

And u just cant…

And he cries!!!!!

Bani is crying to

She's like

I don't want to go!!!!!!!

She's like

I want to see our kids growing up!!!

I want to hear them calling me mom!!!!!

She's like

U think I want to leave!

And she's like and u…..

You are my life!!!!!!!

My better !!!!

And she bursts out crying!!!

Jai hugs her

And they both hug each other tightly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The scene shifts

And everyone else is in there

Bani is lying down!!!!!

Everyone is crying!!!

And it's a very tensed atmosphere!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is looking at her

And his tears haven't stopped once!

And then…

Bani starts breathing heavily!!!!!!!!!

And everyone is tense!!!!!!!!!!!

Doc comes in

They are all yelling BANI!!!!!!

They put the mask over her!!!!

Jai is looking and he's like no this cant be happening!!!

Part 500!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (THE LAST AND FINAL PART)

And then…..

She stops breathing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doc is like I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is like no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is standing there like a statue!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Raashi is hugging Ranveer and is crying her eyes out!!!

Jai is telling everyone that Bani isnt dead!! She is alive!!!! ! You are guys are mistaken!!! My Bani cant leave me alone!! She's not dead!

He tells Raashi to stop crying!! She isnt dead!!! She's only gone to sleep!

He yells at Raashi saying she's not dead soo stop crying!!!!!!!!!!!! Jai is like Bani is sleeping!!!! She's only resting! She's really tired!!!!!!!!!!

Jai looks and Bani and tells her to wake up!!!! She's like its getting late! And he's like if ur joking I don't like jokes!!!!!! Jai is like wake up!! He's like whos gonna watch the kids!!!!!

He shakes her and tells her to wake up!!!! Jai is like u think u can leave me! Its too early!!!!!! He's like yell at me!!! Do something but u cant leave me like this!!!!!!!!

He's like I want you to wake up and tell this people to stop crying and just wake up!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HE comes and sits next to and he holds her hands and he's like Bani u cant leave like this! I want you to prove to the world that nothing has happened to you!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's like WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!! BANI WAKE UP!! U can hear me!!!!! You know u can hear me!!!!!!!!!!!

Its such an emotional state!!!! Jai is telling her about the good old times between them and about their honeymoon and everything that happened!!!!!!!!!!! And he's like u wanted to come back there and we still have to take the kids!!! U cant leave the kids! The kids need a mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And its soooo tensed!!!!! And he puts his head on her shoulder and he whispers in her ears…. And he's like I need you!!! He's like I will just die without you!!! I cant live my life without you!!! You are my world! You are my everything!!! This heart beats for u!! You live in this heart!!!!!!! And if u aren't here then how will it beat????? It will stop beating becuz the one that makes it beat isnt there!!!!!!!!! You need to give me a good of why u should leave!!! And there's not one one good reason that u can give me!!!!!!!

Everyone is sooo sad!!!!!! And they are watching this!!! Jai rests his head on her shoulder by her neck and then…… all of a sudden Bani moves her hands… and her heart rate goes up!!!!!!!!!!!! Jai sits up and looks at her!!!! She is moving very slowly everyone is watching this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And they are like omg! They are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai is smiling!!!! And he's like Bani!! Bani opens her eyes slowly!!!!!!!!! And she looks around!!! Jai comes down to her and hugs her!! She's just lying there!!! Doc comes in and checks on her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1 week later……..

Bani comes home and they welcome the twins in!!!!!!!!!!! everyone is sooo happy and they are thrilled!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They come inside!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They go by the mandir and Masi is praying!! Jai folds his hands and he's like I will be grateful to you for the rest of my life!! He's like u have given my life back to me and that's not that matters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And he's like thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai and Bani take the twins up!!!!!!!!!! They named them Krishna and Aryan!!!!!!!

They both the kids into their cribs!!! And he comes to her and he just hugs her!!!!!!!!!!! And they are in such a long embrace!!!!!!!!

They leave the kids there

And they go into their room!!!!!!!!!

Both are looking at each other!!! U can hear both of their heart beats!!! And its beating Dhak Dhak Dhak!!!! And they are smiling at each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And he comes closer to her and he kisses her!! And they share a nice passionate kiss!!!!!!!!! And they get lost in each other!!!!!!!!

And then the babies start to cry and they break away!!!!!!!!!!!

Raashi and Rano come inside and bring them!!!

Raashi is like…. Now u have 2 more to the kabab mein haddi list!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jai tells her that of course!!! Now they have their masi!!!!!!! Raashi tells him of course!!!! I will teach them the very best!!!!!!!!!!!!

And they all laugh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes Folks that was my very last part!!!!!!!!!!!!

I would like to thank Pachu Jaani!!!!! She gave me this one idea and boom…. I went with that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is how I reached 500 parts!!!!!!! Or else I would have ended this long time ago!!!!!!!!!!! Love you sis!!!!

And my 2nd hand in this FF is my Jaz!!!!!!!!!! The last 100-150 parts……. Were her brains and I just wrote them!!!!!!!!!! Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love my jaani!!!!!

And my 3rd Person Taz!!!!! She knows why!!! Thank you babe!!!!!!!!!!! Love you loads!!!!!!

I would like to thank you guys for reading and for ur comments and thanks to u silent readers as well!!!!!!!!!!! But at least for the last part plz give comment na!!!!!


But please do comment and tell me over all how I did on this FF!!!! if you guys were disappoint… please do let me know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


As for tomorrow….

I will starting a new FF which I have plenty of parts pending!!! (50+)

Look out for it

Its titled:

The 19th……. Will You Be Mine?


(oh yeah like My brain will stop working!)

omg omg omg omg omg omg...it ended?😭


this is the only FF...only FF...that i was a character in😳😆...and it HAD to end soon😭


kya jaani...should've streched 500 more...just like ektaaa😉😆...tabhi to mazaa aata...i just started having fun being kabaab mein haddis...n..it had to be HAPPILY EVER AFTER....ufffff


nyways....awesome part, awesome FF..and awesome characters..*cough* *cough* *raashi*😃

dear really a great ending and thanx for bringing back life in my bani otherwise i don't know what must have happened to u 😉 dear just loved the ff and will be waiting for u to start new one.

swati

haye haye...end hogaya..lol...but haila...kya ending...that was like an essay compared to how u usually wirte...lol...grear job hun 👏 ...loved it from beginning to end...yeh thanks kiis baath ki...anytime hun...besides...half the time you are at my house we r talking about ff...yours, mine or others...lol...anytime jaanu...anytime 🤗
woo hoo...the 19...will i be yours...you know i cant wait...i cant wait...i cant wait... 😃 ...remember our deal... 😉
JAZ
ps: raashi and rano...rocked the ff...lol...all kabab mein hadis...ZINDABAD 😆

👏 Great FF......... Just when I thought of starting to comment, it's over. A great FF I must say............FANTABULOUS.......... loved Jai's display of emotions when Bani didn't respond.

You have an awesome talent hun and a flair with words. Very captivating storyline which makes one wana go on and on 😉

Keep up the good work, can't wait to read your new one 😃