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Posted: 18 years ago
Warning Navs read this at your own risk😉😆😆. Here is your surprise by Sam, Jigs and Me. This deciated to Sam, and her BGB.
*~*~*PART 62A*~*~*

The ride was quiet, Bani was curious to know where the driver was taking her.

Bani: Mr. Walia where are we going?

Jai: Bani have patiences, our destination is near.

Bani just made a face, and blew her on her face, and turned around and looked, outside the scenery.

After 30 mintues of traveling the car came to a stop, Jai got of the car, and opened Bani's door.

Jai bowed his head, with his arms, like a chauffer, and said welcome ot Colva Beach Mrs. Walia.

Bani was suprise to see the scene infornt of. Colva Beach is 12 mine long stretch of fine white sand, surrounded palm trees.

The sun lights were sparkling on the water, and the ocean winds were blowing.

Bani was awed by it and she only can say Beautiful.

Jai came and standing next to her, and whispered into her ears, not as beautiful as you my wife. She just blushed, and looked down.

Bani: Mr. Walia, aap bhi

Jai smiling, shall we, holding his hand in front of her face. She accepted, they worked hand in hand.

Bani: Mr. Walia where are we going?

Jai: Just keep walking.

They walked hand in hand in silencing, just listening the ocean breeze, and the wind blowing into their faces.

After 10 mins of walking to corner of the beaches. Both Jai and Bani heard a voice, and Jai turned around.

Voice: Jai You Made it

His face turned into a wild smile and his eyes were sparkling.

Jai: Hai Sexy Sam, he went and hugged her. Letting go of Bani.

Bani was curious to know who was this lady that her hubby was hugging. Which seemed a lifetime to her, the lady in pink tube top and white pants.

Jai kissed her both side of cheeks, Sexy Sam where is PM, walking toward Bani.

Bani Finally he remembered that he has a wife. Letting go of Sam's hand he walked toward Bani, holds her hand.

Jai: Bani this Sam, my friend from college, and Sam this is my wife Mrs. Bani Jai Walia

Both Bani and Sam shook hands, and said Nice To Meet you.

Jai: Where is PM?

Bani looks at her confused and askes him who is PM?

Jai smiles, Bani PM is sexy Sam's hubby. Bani breaths a sign of relief.

Sam: Jai, he is with my souten! Folding her hands.

Both Jai and Bani look confused at Sam.

Jai and Bani Your Souten?

Sam seeing the confusion on their face. Souten means the tv, he is watching the cricket match on TV.

Jai: whose winning?, Sam rolls her eyes.

Bani elbows him.

Sam: Any ways, the gang is waiting for you.

Bani raises her eyebrow, Gang looks at her hubby.

Jai putting his hand behind his head, and scratching the back of it. Ummm Bani lets go they are waiting.

They all walk together. Bani in between Sam and Jai, Jai on her right side, Sam on her left. (Kya karu sam)

Sam was telling Bani about their college days, and how mischievous the five of them were, meaning Jai, PM, Sid, Janat, and Sam.

Bani: Who is Sid and Janat? Looking at her hubby.

Jai having a smile, Sid is my old friend who is a big flirt, whispering in her ears, be careful he is a flirt even after being married to Janat.

Sam be care ful Bani Sid's son is also a big flirt, poor Jaan she has to keep both her hubby and son out of trouble.

Bani: come on his son can't be that mad.

Sam: smiles, and looks at Bani, agar baap ek numbri toh beta dus numberi, what say Jai?

Jai just laughs and shakes his head.

Bani: well how trouble can a small kid be. Looks at Sam.

Sam: he is a big Trouble with a captial T. This morning Abhi kissed Jigu 9year old baby sister Pachu.

Jai and Bani both look at Sam what?

Sam nods her head in a yes.

Sam: Abhi i mean Abhishek Sood, is 11yrs old, just like his dad he is a big flirt, i feel sorry for Jaan. From childhood he is a flirt, and flirting with girls.

Jai is laughing Haha

Sam We were all having lunch on Sids yachted, and Pachu was watching the water, Abhi went and stood next to Pachu, and she was ignoring him. Abhi is like a beautiful why are you alone?

Pachu looked, at him and gave him glare. Hi

Abhi: So beautiful what are you doing?

Jai: Omg his son his ten steps ahead of him. Then what did he do.

Sam: Abhi is like why is a beautiful girl alone on the yatched. He took out a red rose for her.

Bani: Aww so sweet

Sam he said, a beautiful red rose, for a lady in white.

Bani: hmm that line is familiar. Looks at Jai.

Jai: what

Sam: Any ways, Abhi gave Pachu the rose, and then he kissed her on the cheeks. Bechari Pachu was shocked and she didn't know what hit her. Her small eyes were big, and she was looking at Abhi. Abhi went to her other side, and kissed her other side of the cheek.

Pachu was standing still, wide mouth open. She was all day avoiding Abhi and staying away from him.

Bani: Aww how sweet, looks like Sid and Jaan as founded their Bahu.

Sam: look like it.

Voice: Finally you are here!

Sam, Jai and Bani look at the four shadows approaching them.

Sam: look who I found. Jai, Bani and Sam approach the fingers.

When Bani is surprise and shock too see two hot looking guys with the two beautiful young ladies. One of them is wearing white sleevless t shirt, with black cap that is side ways, he is 6'2 has greenish blue eyes. And then she looks at the other handsome tall hunk who is 6*4 resembles Abhishek Bachan.

Bani: OMG, that Steve Nash, (she is excited) Sun's MVP player, and he leads teh NBA in assists per game.

Jai looks at her Bani, you know basketball?

Bani: of course, and then she looks at the other tall handsome, OMG, that Rishi Kapoor, one of the coming pop stars.

Jai is like huh. Bani chill, just relax, and stop squeezing my hand.

Sam: Jai don't worry that how Pachu reacted seeing Rishi Kapoor, and Rishi was such a sweet heart he gave Pachu is photograph and took pictures with her.

Jai: Hi Shruts. Shruts is 5'6, and has dark brown/black hair, wearing black glares, she is wearing a sexy red halter neck matte jersey.

Shruts: Jai its so good to see you. She gives him a friendly hug. And then she looks at Bani. You must be Bani, Sam has told me about you when she went too Mumbai for the meeting with PM to WGI.

Bani looks at Jai, is Awed by him.

Bani: nice to meet you.

Shruts same here, Bani this my finace Rishi Kapoor.

Bani: Congrats to both of you. She hugs Shruts and shakes hands with Rishi.

Voice: Hi Bani I am Jigna and everyone calls me Jigu. She is wearing fern green halter neck top wit Poplin cargo kaki short.

Bani: nice to meet you.

Jai: I Jigu, happy belated birthday. He hugs her and gives a peck on the cheek.

Steve: Haye Buddy no kissing, she is off limits, she is engaged man.

Jai: Hi Steve heard so much about you from Jigu, through email.

Steve: Hi Jai, heard so much about you from all the six girls, and especially Sam.

Jai: wow, I am so honored.

Bani: Six girls.

Steve: They claim to be Six Innocent Angels.
Jigu: Its Sam, Shruts, Me, and you will meet the other three later.

Rishi: Bani, its six of them, lucky they don't leave close by. They are total hungamas, loud, and just so loud and pure evil. And they pretend to be innocent and angels.

Shruts, Jigu and Sam give him a glare, Rishi.

Rishi But you guys are not Innocent Angels, you are Six Evil Girls. The girls glare at him. Shruts chases him and he bumps into a girl who was talking on her pink mobile, and she was al lady in pink. She is wearing pink strapless babydoll tube top with a black the Christie Fit Skinny Leg pants.

Voice: Rishi watch it.

Rishi:Shina help and save me from Shruts.

Shina: why is she after you?

Rishi: because she loves him

Shruts: I love you but you called us Six Evil Girls.

Shina: You did what. She smacks him on the back of the head, and so does Shruts.

Rishi dugging from the two girls. Help, help.

Jigu: Shruts and Shins hit one from me and Sam also. Both Shruts and Shins hit him again. Steve, Jai, Sam, Bani reach where they are at.

Jai: Hi Shina Darling. She looks up and lets go of Rishi.

Shina: Hi Jai darling, kissing his cheek and hugging him.
Jai: Shina meet my wife Bani Jai Walia.

Shina: Nice meeting you

Bani: Same here.

Shina looking at Sam, Jigs, Shruts, Rishi and Steve, you guys hurry up, Patrol Officer is yelling, man she will go crazy with organization and she will drive me crazy.

Bani and Jai patrol office.

Jigu: Crazy Mamta

Shruts: She is after us for the shooting of the video. She is nervous and she is going to drive us crazy.

Sam: She is our patrol officer, when we do our steps for the video write she is there with her dhanda, and she will warn us.

Jigu: She is pagal.

Voice: Well I know I am pagal, but kya karu you guys are my crazy friends its your influence.

They all turned around and look up to see girl wearing navy blue rope back tank and blue jeans with black high heels, she has small glasses and her hair is tied up on top of her hand and she is holding files.

Jigu: Mamta looks who came by.

Mamta: Salman Khan, sigh.

Shina: uff how many times I told you Salman is mine.

Sam: Don't get started you two.

Jai: hi mamta. Mamta looks up, and her eyes are big.

Mamta: Omg Jai its you. Handing Sam the file she was holding.

Jai moving forward to hug and kiss her cheeks. Of course, so how is the video rehearsal going.

Mamta: great we will be all ready at six and on schedule.

Jai: Mamta this is my wife Bani?

Mamta: Hello Bani nice to meet you! Shakes her hand

Bani: Nice to meet you! Looking around.

Shruts: Is something wrong?

Bani: I thought there were six of you! But I see only 5 where is the sixth?

Mamta: Mrs. Faints ki bachi is late!

Shina: Chill, she is with Shiv
Jai: Who is Shiv?

Mamta: Navs ka pati!

Jai: Omg when did she get married?

Mamta: 6months ago. We all went to New York for her wedding.

Jigu: OMG, look at Shiv and Navs they are riding on horse. She points at the direction, and at the distance they can see two figures molded into each other and riding on a horse.

As the horse and the couple riding on the black horse approach. You can see a beautiful girl with her long black hair. The guy behind her is having a close resemblance to Iqbal Khan.

The horse finally stops.

Mamta: Navs you are finally here.

Navs: Yes we are here evil Mamta. Gives her face. Shiv gets out of the horse and helps her navs out who is wearing a sexy navy blue halter neck top and blue pants.

Navs then look up and she is surprised, and her eyes are big, and her mouth is open with an o.

Navs: Oh My God, Jai its you, Its finally you.

Jai: Just gives her his dashing smile. OF course it me Navs Baby.

Navs has her hands on her forehead, like she is going to faint. Haye Ram but luckily Shiv was by her side.

The five girls look at each other and are like hear she goes again.

Jai moves forward and kissing navs on the forehead, and then on both of cheeks and then he hugs her. Luckily Jai was holding her, varna she would have hit the sands. Her legs were about to die on her.

After a while he lets go of her.

Jai: Navs how could you get married without inviting me? Giving her a sad face

Navs:Same goes for you. You are also married.

Sam: Guys Chop Chop Lets go. And get ready.

Shruts: We have everybody?

Shina: Where is my Jaan Prem?

Everyone looks……

The End.

Thanks for reading
Love Piku

Navs i hope you loved your surprise. You can guess where this heading, and who this Prem is. What the video shoot is for.😉😆

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
In order of there apperance and introduction.
1. Sam


2.Shruts


3. Jigs

4 Shina


5. Mamta



Small ABhi

Small Pachu

Edited by ziddi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok i am savinf for comments!
i get to be first this time 😃

Woo hoo! i am the first one and with the longes comment comming up! hehe

Ok piku here is your one thousand word comment
Shuru se
Mein bani hoti toh I wouldn't even be curious. Jai hai toh darne ki kya baat…hehe. Dono aye toh aye Colva Beach par…what a beautiful beach.. I wanna go. Aww jai is such a gentleman he was like a chauffer when he told bani to come out…I would come out if he would have said….eh nikal.. Lmao..Now that they arrived at the beach I would have so made a sand castle…mere castles hamesha get ruined…tears….Wow the beach sounds amazing no wonder bani said beautiful par hamara hero neh ek aur romantic hero jaisi line de di…..*big sigh* kaash koi mere liye who line kehta…Ab ayi hamari doosri heroine…sexy sam sexy sam…wham bam….something something…sorry sanju lines nahi yaad aah rahe hai….hmm bani was intimidated by sexy sam well who wouldn't dekh kya outfit pehna hai no wonder she is sexy sam…haha sam ki sautan hai…tan tan tan…the plasma tv….hai who wouldn't be attracted to the tv…high definition…clear images of games …mein toh couch se ooththi bhi nahi…good job jiju. (Sam mujhe maregi ab) Lol Sid ka beta….akhir hai toh baap jaisa hi….I bet pachu ben was happy! She got kissed by abhi…well abhishek bachcha nahi toh kya hua…an Abhi is an Abhi. Regardless. (Now pachu ben will want to kill me) I want to go on a yacht! Sail around the ocean or beach. Kya lucky people hai in this Fan fic. Getting back to abhi…yeh lines kaha se seektah hai…hmmm…..a beautiful white rose…ab choti umar mein yeh karta hai toh bada ho kar kya kya karega… lol…Pachu ben got not one but two kisses! I am emphasize again not one but two! What a lucky girl… (seriously she is going to kill me)
Haila! Mera hero neh entry diya…white sleeveless shirt….che foot doh….green/blue eyes…aur kaun ho sakta par steve nash!!!! My fellow white boy! Bhad mein gaye doosre ladko….steve nash hai toh I am all set! I am drooling as I type this…. Hehe.. Good bani knows about basketball! But on the other hand who doesn't know about steve nash and his assists and his many other skills! Hmmm so shruts ka abhi oopsy I mean rishi bhi hai! Waah shruts kya outfit pehna hai… Abhi oopsy Rishi ke liye??? Why do I keep on thinking rishi is abhi bachchan? Hmm…Are you sure ki pachu aur shruts ke beech no jhagde? Hey now its my turn to make an entry! Yup one and only Jigna..jigu…jigs…jiggy…hmm joh bhi chahe bula sakte ho.. Hehe. Jai Walia ne mujhe wish kya aur hug bhi diya aur kiss bhi kiya! This just is my luck day well lucky FF update! Pehle steve and now jai! Should have tossed in dirk too! I would have been set for life! Haila dekh ab mera hero neh lines boli…it sounds like music to my ears! Yupp I am steve nash's mangetar! Kya karu just couldn't resist! (ab yeh sheen mere peeche ayegi! Sheen he is mine!) Off limits jai…listen to steve! Hey Hey mere steve ko kya hua? What does he mean by claim to be six innocent angels??? We are! I think mujhe uske saath baat karni padegi! Shruts take care of your Rishi! Who dekh keh raha ki hum innocent nahi hum… We don't party…nope nope…We aren't loud either. We sit quietly and watch tv and just chill! Good shruts! Tune tere rishi ko chase kiya aur ayi humari pink lover! Pink top ..pink phone…aur kaun ho sakta hai sivay humari shina maharani or as I call her Shinnie! Lol Rishi neh kaha shina ko ki hum six innocent angels nahi hai…uh oh shina ka love for rishi disappears! Ha good job Shina! Smack de diya na! Aur humari shruts neh bhi deh diya! I bet rishi just feels the love but no daya because he said we arent six innocent angels! Lol meri aur sanju ki taraf se bhi jhapat mila! Bohout accha! Lol humari crazy patrol officer also known as pagal ( I call her that sometimes) has entered! Tan tan tan! Kya kaam karvayegi ab yeh?!? Uh oh Mamta and shina are it again! Kaun banegi salman ki wife! Hey that should be a show! Dono ko daal dege as contenders then salman can decide! If sony or any other television channel decides to make a show anything along these lines… I am suing! Ab aayi humari aakhri innocent angel! Mrs. Faints! Mrs. Se Miss isilye kyu ki SIR he na! Mrs. Faints is technically married to all! Ek Nahi pan teen teen hai! Par ek aadmi khaas hai humari Mrs. Faints ke liye aur who hai shiv!!!! Uh oh navs looking hot too! Lagta hai shiv ke liye! All six of soo hot! Hehe. Lmao!!!! Hamari navs was going to go faint by looking at jai!!! Oh wait she did faint! Par uska hero hai na right by her side isiliye no worries! Whew! Koi injuries ke baare mien fikar nahi karne padegi! Lol navs again close to fainting with jai's kiss.. Ek baat pooch agar har bhar shiv kiss dega and you faint…toh fainiting kucch zyada hi nahi hojata hai…Have you gone to the doctors?? I am sure koi na koi davai hogi that will make you stop fainting. Now navy and jai dono arguing because no wedding invitations! Well naraz toh hum bhi hai jai se… I didn't get an invitation. How sad! Lol Shina prem ka intezar kar rahi hai? I already have an image of what prem is going to look like… I am expecting something like five foot nine…brown eyes…nice body! Hehe did I get close?
Well lets see in the next update!
Here you go piku one thousand words…let me repeat that again ek hazar lavs for a comment on your update for Navs's FF. It took me one hour and eleven minutes to write this! I hope you appreciate it! I hope everyone gets a laugh at it too! Kaafi humorous tha..if I say so myself! Par kya karu… I am naturally a pretty funny person!
Sorry for the spelling errors. Its going to be 2:30 AM now…one paper down another one to go!
Edited by jigna_07 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Mamta made their life. Wats this u r after even the little kids. 9 n 11 year old. Great dresses. Navs enjoy ur time with Iqbal Khan. Continue soon.
Edited by cute1228 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
*FAINTSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS* ☺️


Abhi just kissed me...hailaaa....omg omg...HAILAAAAAAAAAA☺️


*saved*



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Posted: 18 years ago
Oh man!!! 😆

**holding pachu**
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW Di!!!!!!! 😳 😳

okay so this part was just FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

i loved the Jani part!!!! Bani is soooo sweet!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Jai is soooo romantic!!!!!!!! 😳

IT was AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE CONT SOON 😛 😛 😛
Thanks
sunju
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow yaar, this was a whole freind reunion! 😆... Jigs and Steve?? Ahem, since when 😉.. okay I gotta run otherwise I will be beat up. Great job!! Update soooon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part dear, hope navs is okay and still conscious 😉

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey navs lovely update 👏
since all this college frnds have got together with their hubby's, fiance's and kids they are gona have a hell lot of fun......
update soon coz wanna read more abt sid and his son

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