Time to move on (2) IMPORTANT NOTE p 51 - Page 29

Originally posted by: nyzbabigyal

welll thats cuz i did NOT write this part.. my jaan evil piku did😉.. so d credit goes to her.. hope u guyz enjoy😳😳

Originally posted by: nastybutnice

wow, dat waz amzing. it waz 2 short though. anywayz hpe u continue soon

Originally posted by: khrhun_sheen

I am saving, saw the teddy bear. Awww!

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Aww i sooo cant wait for the next part!

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful part
cant wait to read part b pls cont soon.........

Originally posted by: laal_mirch

apparently some evil person has been talking lessons .....u know who.................
anyways.............. navy pass this part to ur ............
nice one
Reg
T

Originally posted by: davia389

wow soo cute update.. pls continue soon..
davia

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

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Originally posted by: K__S

Lovely part! So Bani continued to be angry towards Jai? How on earth did she survived 😆
What a place to stop.. 😔

Kajal

Originally posted by: InTheZone123

AWW, that was so cute!!!!
Cant wait for the next part
Continue soon!!!
Nikita

Originally posted by: cute1228

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, really so cute. thanx janu.. piku's a fulltooos romantic nah.. toh cute toh hona hi tha😉 My hubby will dis-like u, u mea piku.. haha.. look piku ur already gettin enemies.. my jaan's future hubby😆 i mean my jiju.. ahem😳 cause now he will have 2 do thins like that 4 me whan n b4 we get married.sachi na.. if my bozo husband can't think of such stuff.. im gonna make him read d ff's.. but i hope he's a bozo😆 Man his already has a whole bunch of stuff 2 do 2 get me n now even more. I feel bad 4 him. Anyways, loved the part. Jai rules. The saree n set were pertty. The teddy bear cuteeeeeee. Loved it, continue soon, thanx jaanu glad u liked d gushy gushy update.. aage aaage dekhiye hota hai kya😉 kyun ki mujhe khud pata nahin😆

Originally posted by: sanam84

JRJK JRJK samu😉

Haila haila...delegates from africa...its Botswana...its me ....yeah...i am dealing wid him...yep just letting you know...The name is Sam....yep Sam from Africa..... *FAINTS*

are ab faint ho gaye to sari choc aur teddy kaise dekhen 😆 uff.. get up yaar.. pehle hi faints ho gayi. .baaki toh padha bhi nahin.. and delegates from africa.. jiju was wit u nah😉😆😆

Originally posted by: Dawn-Sunrise

it was so beautiful you made my day after long tiring day, when I read the update it made me feel so good. awww hun.. glad u liked it.. piku did d honors.. of writin such a short and sweet part.. but real glad u enjoyed😳

Thanks for the update. haila ur very welcome.. i just copy pasted😆.

Originally posted by: ziddi

Guys do not listen to Navs, my Mrs. Sir i am not an evil piku i am sweet little pyari si choti Piku.😳😳😳 wat a joke yaar.. hassa mat.. im so tired.. my body fails to comply wit me today.. but u a pyar si choti piku.. haha..

I am glad you guys enjoyed the part and the coming part, i tried my best to make it all romantic. This was special update because my partner in crime asked me this.yes and it meant a lot to me.. that u wrote it.. i know u were super busy too.. thank u so much😳

Take Care
Mamta

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

A beautiful part... 😛 Eagerly waiting for the next part... 😃 😉 😳

Originally posted by: culgal86

lovely update 👏 thanx jaan..glad u liked it😳
such royal treatment given to bani and more to cum arey yaar it's jai walia after all😉 royal treatment has to be given nah ,.....will b waitin for ur nxt update so read abt the surprises that are to cum 😛 😛 😛 haila will update soon😳

before d update starts😳.. i wanna thank evil piku aka piku aka mamta/ziddi fo writin up 2 wonderful parts to my ff.. means a lot to me🤗..cuz u know i can't write FAINTS 😭 (and that's only cuz im innocent bholi bhali bachi.. lekin piku's evil😉)but thank u so much.. i knoe u were super buzy wit uni and exams and u still took ur time.. and wrote d 2 parts.. thanx 🤗

guyz this part again is written by my jaanu piku.. i have no idea wat's in d part.. as i haven't even read it.. im just posting😆 so hope u'll all enjoy😉😉 and **read at ur own risk** oh btw d teaser's just added in d beginnin.. as this is d whole complete part😃😕

Note Bacha Parties Under 18 stay out, and read this part at your own risk.
Guli Jaanu stay out Stay out😡😡😡

Another Important Note: This part and the idea was taken by my ff Kuch Na Kaho, and i have used the kissing part from Hum Dil De Chuke. So do not tell that navs is copyright or stealing ideas, because actually i am copyrighting from my own ff😆😆😆

This part is dedicated to the birthday girl the youngest member of the Beedi Girls/Innocent Angels along with Sisster/Saalis of Guli n Garu bhai Jigna
Happy Birthday Jins🤗

*~*~*PART 60B*~*~*

One week passed with Bani pretending to be mad at Jai. Whenever he tried to go close to her she will just move away, from him. He couldn't think of an idea to make Bani forgive him. He wanted to kill Pushkar for his joke, because of his one joke his wife was not talking to him and Puskhar could have not disagreed with him.

When Jai looked at the calendar, and saw the date that was for Friday, he thought of something, and idea clicked into his head. Even though Bani was joking with him, the prank was killing her, she missed, the warmth and embrace of his arm, his kisses, his touch. She promised her self that in the weekend she will make it up to him somehow.

As the week progressed both Jai got busy at his work has some important delegates had come from Bostswana, Africa and Mr & Mrs. Masson who were also his best friends from college. Bani had busy week at the restaurant, due to wedding ceremonies and graduation parties.
Both of them came home tired, and sometime Jai went early because he was trying to get the contract from his delegates from Africa.


Phew what a day Bani had, after taking orders with Mr.& Mrs. Sood daughter's graduation she had to go and order some utensils, and supplies.
Bani leaned back and relaxed on her chair. maybe Mr. Walia and I can have a nice romantic dinner at a restaurant. Thinking of him, she leaned forehead and picked up the gift box that was delivered to her in the morning. She picked up the rectangle gift box that was wrapped in gold box with red ribbons.

There was a note saying
for Mrs. Bani J. Walia

She picked up the card and smiled. She slowly started opening the ribbons, and untied it on her desk, and when she unopened the box saw red tissue papers on top of that was jewelry case and when she open she saw a beautiful ruby necklace net that was hand crafted with matching earrings, she just smiled and put it on the side.

She slowly opened the tissue papers and when she opened it saw a beautiful reddish pink sare, she picked it up, and felt the soft fabric against her skin.There was no words to describe the Pinkish red georgette saree having resham, sequins, stones and naka tikki work with heavy border along with matching blouse. she just felt in love with the saree just like she was love with the sender. At the bottom of the box there was small red card at the bottom of the box.

She picked it up, while having the saree in her hand.
The note said
Hi Beautiful
Will the lovely lady care to have dinner with me at our Juhu Beach House.
Be ready, do not take your time to be beautiful because you already look beautiful no matter what you were.
Love you
your hubby
Jai Walia.
She just smiled, and kissed the card.

Bani went inside her personal bathroom that was inside her office, she went and took a good hot shower and got ready. Wearing the matching set that came with the saree,her sindoor making sure it showed, having her ms around her neck, and she noticed that jai sended her wedding chuddha to her. She gave her self the final look in the mirror, she left her hair loose with wet curls, and she was satifised, and she maked sure that her mangalsuit was on top of her saree.



When she stepped out of the restaurant she saw that a black brand new Jagugar was waiting for her. The chauffer of black jaguar opened the door for her, and she just got inside, and was awed by the interior leather seat. And then next to her seat on the right side there was a white teddy bear with a red bow tie, holding and single fresh red rose, and had small gold see candies chocolate box with another red note card.

She picked up Teddy Bear and placed it on her lap and she opened note


To My Jaan
Here is Teddy Bear for you to cuddle with, and too keep you company for the two hours, when you arrive at your destination. A beautiful red rose for the lady in red to show her my past year has been filled with her appearance, her scent, her aroma, and my world has been filled with love ever since she entered. A single red rose is for you to show you that you will be the one and only for me for the rest of my life.
Love you your
Mr. Jai Walia

PS the chocolates is for to keep you company with the teddy bear
Reading the card she got tears in her eyes, her hubby was giving her the royal treatment.

After two longs house which seemed liked and eternity she arrived at their Juhu beach house, after she got off the chauffer left as per his instruction.

When she got out of the car and approached the entrance. She blinked her eyes on the site that was before her, she felt that her house just stopped beating. This day was just full of surprises.

When she got out of the car, holding the teddy bears with the rose and chocolates she did not feel like eating them, and approached the entrance. She blinked her eyes on the site that was before her, she felt that her house just stopped beating. This day was just full of surprises.

She is awed at the site in front of her. The house is decorated with white lights is hanging from the hangover of the house. The pathway has white lillies mixed with pink lilies, which leads to the entry of the house, on each side of the flower path is the garden lights that are on. When she steps on the flower path, her sandals go in, has its two inches deep, and she can feel the fresh flower on her toes.

The ocean wind is blowing her hair, she removes the hair to the right side see sees there's a soft glow coming, and when she comes closer she sees floating candles with shiny pebbles. Inside a red heart shape, it written with red and white lilies I am sorry Bani.She puts her hand on her face, and her eyes is moist and tears seem to forum in them. She did not realize that for asking forgiveness guy or her Mr. Walia will go to this extents. She turns around and starts walking toward the entrance again.

When she opens the door she hears the faint song, of Aya Ho Mere Zindagi Mein Tum Bahar Banke

She takes her first step and feels her feet sinking and looks down and sees path of roses petals, its all shades of from dark red to light red mixed with dark pink to light pink. She follows the path of pink and red rose path, the song of Aya Ho Mere ZIndagi mein from Raja Hindustani plays.

The path leads to the roof top of the beach house, and there is red sticky note saying open the door. She opens the door, and a spot light falls on her face, she closes her eyes, because its hitting her face. She takes a step a head, and she hears a deep husky voice of her hubby.

Bani, he says. She open her eyes, and meets his brown pair of eyes. Both of them have their staring session, and without breaking it they take a step forward. They are two inches away of each other out, from his jacket he takes out a single red roses.
In a deep husky voice he says " Beautiful Red Rose for the beautiful lady in red who has stolen my heart" He places his right hand on his heart.

She takes the rose from his hand and he takes her right hand in his, and brings it to his face, and places a kiss on it. and he takes her hand and holds it, Bani will you forgive me, he says while looking into her eyes. I am sorry if i hurt your feelings, i did not mean to hurt your feeling. I can not see tears in your beautiful eyes. He lets go of her hand and takes a step backward waiting for her response.

She takes a step forward and wraps her arms around his neck, and looks into his eyes, brings her lip closer to his face and place a light kiss on his lips which turn out to be a passionate kiss. She lets go of him, which seemed like an eternity to them which was like only three minutes.

Jai looks at her he is like wow. He looks at Bani whose eyes are averted from him, and he can see the red blush on her cheeks being the same color of her saree.
He takes his index finger and lifts her chin up.

So that's a yes?, she blinks her eyes. He puts his hand forward, and says, will the lovely lady care for an dance. She looks at him, and he understands. He takes out a universal remote from his pocket, and on the stereo.

They dance to you are my angel, his hands on her waist, and she has her head on his shoulder.

After the song ends, he take her hands in his and leads to a small table that is decorated with red table cloth, has rose petals on it.

She is shock when she sees the writing on the round chocolate cake, that says Happy Firs Anniversary.



She gets a tear in her eyes, and looks at him, she can't believe that she forgot her own wedding anniversary. She didn't realize that the blink of her eyes, the year passed by so quickly. Her on move on this day, not her but Mr. Walia's life forever.

With a tear voice mixed with mixed emotions she says, Mr. Walia.

Mr. Walia, I am sorry that i forgot our wedding anniversary. I was just so busy with work that I forgot. She makes a sad face.

Shh she is silenced by his fingers on her lips. She looks up and sees that Jai is in front of her. She just looks at him, and then he says "it doesn't matter if you forgot our wedding anniversary it only matters that we are together and nothing else"
Soft tears roll down cheek. Bani i love you, we will have more wedding anniversary in the future, what matters it wherever we are we just spend our wedding anniversary together and nothing else because I love you.

He wipes the tears from her cheeks, and she looks at him and says i love you to mr. Walia, and they both hug each other. They break apart from their hug, and both of them cut the cake together, and they feed each other.
Jai places his hands on her cheek, he looks into her eyes and with his thumb he wipes her tears, and moves her hair behind her ears, softly kissing her cheeks, which makes her shiver from his touch.

His fingers start trailing from her lips outline them first and then going to her cleavage and outlining the pattern of her blouse. He puts his hands on under her saree pallu, and trails his fingers across her stomach, making her close her eyes He sees the effect that he is having on his beautiful wife, he just smiles and kisses her eyelids, which makes her open her eyes.

He sees the affect that he is having on his beautiful wife, he just smiles and kisses her eyelids, which makes her open her eyes. And then he starts placing the kiss from her cheeks to her neck, and goes behind her, and removes her hair, so its front of her, and starts nuzzling her neck. She has her eyes, close, even in the chilly night her husband is making her body heated. He pulls her back so her back is hitting is chest, and he whispers huskily into her ears, while his soft breath is bowling into them.

.He then takes her to a another table that is set for two with candle light in between which has rice with curry, and nan, all vegetables food just for Bani. They feed each other looking into each other eyes while there is just talking.

After that he takes her hand and he blinds fold her.
Bani: Mr.Walia what are you doing.
Jai: shh it for your surprise
Bani all excited what surprise?
Jai: you will find out soon
He takes her to the far end of the roof and tells her to wait, and after five minutes he comes back and opens her blind fold.

When she opens her eyes she sees, that all sort of candles bed is done are placed in pillars, from all shape and sizes. Its making it have dim lights, in the center there bed is done with white lilies and red roses petals. She looks at the scene in front of her and then she looks at her hubby.
Bani Is like Mr. Walia its so beautiful.
Jai: Anything for my beautiful wife.
Bani: Mr Walia I will like to say thank you… for the beautiful night, and everything
he places a finger on her Lips
Jai: Bani don't say anything just be in the moment, with no worries no responsibilities just you and me. He kes his fingers first he outlines her Lips making her tilt her head up and he pulls her closers, to him so their face is one inches away from touching. Both of them can feel each others hot breath. He brings his face to her ears and whispers into her ears.
Jai: Bani you haven't gave me our wedding present.
She is lost in his touch she replies "What do you want? She looks at him.

Jai smiles, with mischief and softly he says "i want placing a kiss on her forehead and then breaking it, I want, kissing the other side of her face, and trailing down wards, to her neck, i want our precious treasure to be born into this world he turned her around and face her right into her eyes when he said that.
iit took her a minute for her t realize what he said "treasure?" She looks at him all confused.
Jai has a sly smile, yes a chota Munna ya chota Munni.
She just blushs and averts her eyes from him. he lifts her chin up and says Bani inta at sharmao. After all we need a our precious treasure, too show us each day that our love bloomed. And anyways pushar said he will volunteer to be a full time baby sister
Bani eyes went big, Puskhar will be the babysitter. Jai nods is head in a yes.
Bani: Mr. Walia
Jai: Mrs Walia
Bani: phele bache to hone dijye
Jai: so i have a chance

She looks up and she says flirty when did I say you did not have a chance.
jai is confused and then it hits him, and he is like "Bani" She gives him a sly smile, and she has mischief in her eyes "first catch me if you can" She is about to Turn around but is stop because there is something holding her pallu moves her head to the side and sees her hubby holding the edge of her saree and he takes a large step towards her while holding the pallu in his hands without breaking the eye contact.
He goes near her face, and says in husky whisper not so fast.
She looks at him "Mr. Walia i am sleepy. She pretend to yawn, and covers her mouth. His face breaks into a grin and he raises his eyebrows, "really bani lets keep each other company in the chandhi raatein. He winks at her.

She just blush the deep shade of red, he takes that has his cue, and picks her up, and gently puts her down on the bed. Without leaving his eye contact from Bani, he removes her saree, and turns her so is lying on her stomach. He hand touches her bare back, and trails down to where the hooks are and he unhooks the hook button, and places a kiss , and he turns around, and takes out her jewelry and leaves them on the small table that was next to the bed. (He had put the table for the jewelry,) Each jewelry he removes it placed with a kiss, and when he went to remove her earrings he bit the delicate part of her ear. After all the jewelry was removed he slowly takes out her blouse, leaving her in her bra. He smiles and mumbles just "beautiful" She lowers her gaze, and he bends his head down, and removes her bra. Giving him the eyes the access of her n**ed br**ats , he placed a soft tender kiss on her lips, and then he trailed kisses down between the valley between her breast, and then he kissed her br***ts, all the down to her navel, and then his tongue was replaced by what his lips were kissing, and she moaned a soft moan and whispered Jai, in soft seductive voice, and she reached for him, and pulled him on top of her. Her lips where parted and waiting for him, he took her lips into his kissing it very softly, but then his mouth had become sensual where his lips and tongue where invoking new sensation into every inch of her body. she dugged her fingers inside his hair as he continued to kiss her reply back with the same energy.


Her skirt was crumpled between their legs in the heat of passion. Where two souls mates reunited on top of the roof top under the skies and the bright sparkling stars and they were lost into their own world, in each other arms. Rediscovering each other, and making up for the past week until both were exhausted, and they did not know when sleep entered them.

Phew 6 Pages
4pgs before combining no complaints
Hope you guys enjoyed this part

Love Piku🤗

p.s. - a very very special thanks to my readers.. from all d silent ones to all those pm me.. and to all those who leave commentos.... i just realized my ff has reached 60 parts.. and if it wasn't cuz of u guyz.. it would've neva happened.. so thank u so much 🤗so considerin that.. this SUPER romantic update was just fo u guyz.. as a special thanx from me.. wit d help of evil piku😳 .. and fo jiggu jaan - as its her bday.. 😳😉

haila navs gone COMA.. 😳 i don't know wt else to right jaanu.. i just won't do justice.. cuz.. ye well. sighhhhhhhhhhhh.. how romantic..