Time to move on (2) IMPORTANT NOTE p 51

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Kajal

@K__S

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Posted: 18 years ago

#301

Thanks for continuing so fast! 😆

Lovely part Mamta!
Ehm...Navs...You too innocent for writing a part like this? Who you kidding? 😛

Loved the update...Bechari Bani forgot her own anniversary! But I guess no worries on that front what say? 😉

I'm just wondering...what will Jai do when he finds out she was just messing with him? WILL he (ever) find out? 😉

Waiting for the next part! 😃
Kajal

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

Dazzler

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Posted: 18 years ago

#302

Haila! Kya scene tha!!! 😳 Need i say more?! 😆 😳 Absolutely loved it, Mamta! Nice job hun! 😃

Love,
Goddess

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#303

ok tum dono are pagal
dono not innocent
how sweet jai did everything for bani
hehe
soo he wants his gift
and he alreayd started working on gettin it
hehe
pleaseee continue soon

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Rupal

@culgal86

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#304

hey update was toooooooo romantic....truly was just awesome......will b waiting for the next update and hope to read something on the treasure in couple of next updates 😊

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 18 years ago

#305

🥳 i FINALLY catch up....yipeeeeeeeeee.........took me like couple of days....ummm....5 max?☺️...maine kuch nahin kiya...ur FF is just too addicting yaar...☺️....just too good...and omg...i cried for bani/raashi in the beginning...then did same for Jai/Ranveer...aur Poosh?...tu jaane de....no need to worry about him...he's happy in his own world?..own?..i meant to say Aarti world 😆

And...OMG OMG OMG....MJ...omg...she wrote last part?...haila...i was thinking MJ to be seedhi saadi chokri...but haila....very naughty naughty MJ ☺️☺️...aur Navsss jaani...dont end it soon naa...let me enjoy the "peace" of caughtupness 🤗

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 18 years ago

#306

navu!
def. a great Part!
i guess Piku did a wonderful job in giving u instructions 😉 😆
i really love it!
that was really romantic Piku! i know its your work since navu is really innocent! 😉 😆 😆
i really love it!
plz continue soon
rooj

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Sanjana

@basket

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#307

hi di

thanks for updating !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it !!!!!!!!!!👏

Jai is soooooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!! 😳

bani is sooooo cute!!! she is also veryyyyyyyyyyyy lucky !!!!!!!

i hope that jai and bani have a good future!!!!!!!

poor pushkar his one joke made him into a babysitter!!!!!!!

please cont soon
cant wait to see what happens next!!!

thanks
sunju

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#308

Piku darling,

You really are the Queen not Princess od seduction and romance dear.😆 Fantastic part dear and did Navy baby survive reading this part I am asking myslef😆. I bet not, she must have fainted and gone directly in to a coma.😆

Loved each and every deatial dear, wow, only if my hubby dear could be so romantic, but some men are such duffers.😆

Loved it dear, and very beautifulkly written.👏

Love

Krishna

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NaV

@SIKinLoVE

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 18 years ago

#309

guyz evil piku'll be wriitn d nxt part 😉 😉 .. when.. i don't know man.. u guyz ask her.. 😃 😃 cuz me right an aftermath to THAT.. haha.. 🤣 u've got to be kidding me right .. me?? d bholi bhali sweet sweet grl.. that i am 😳 😳 😳 .. mujhe toh sharam aati hai 😳 😳 😳 arey don't laugh.. sharam aati hai ..