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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
yeah u didnt make me wait long! 😃 😃 😃 that was an awesome update! 👏 👏 👏 hmmm so bani went to toronto b4 and met jai...hmmmmmm culd somethign have happende btwn them while they were there? yeah the skunk and reptiel are out of the picture! 😃 they can be 2gtehr wehreve they are and never cum back...not that they can anyway! hmmm bani has resigned and jai hates her i think sum1 shuld clear the air btwn these two! pls update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
With each part you are getting better and better i love that tarun is Bani's past and so is Jai i love that Bani handed in notice so typical of her LMAO!!!
please continue i would love to meet Bani's children !!!!

sharan XXX

PS thanks for PM
Edited by shaz81 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
loka
that was a brilliant part u r getting better n better at ur writting (not that u were bad at it or n e thing)
what is up with Jai why is he sooooooooo rude to Bani do they have some kind of a past? would love to know

cont soooon

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
wow awesome prt, u write so well yaar
i just love d storyline of ur ff, its g8t
mm.. jai knows her ????????
oh god .... why he was baheving like that with her???
well i hope we'll know very soon, right na???

continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
ooo, so he does know who she is, this is going to be very interesting, 😉
and i must say u are an amazing writer, i read all of ur past ffs and they were just amazing, i didnt comment because i ussed to be a silent reader, but your fanfic is great
continue soon! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Part-4
Bani came home looking all tired...
Sneha: you look like you have been hit by lightening
Bani: I wish if it were true
Sneha(concerned): what happen Bani
Bani: I resigned my job
Sneha: but you started working today
Bani: and this is my last day
Sneha: what happen
Bani: I met a monster
Sneha: what
Bani: I met Mr Walia's son....
Sneha: did you tell him that you worked for his father
Bani: well I didn't get to that far yet(although Bani knew Jai was aware of that)
Sneha: well it is his loss...he is going to loss the best P.A and legal advisor...
Bani: well maybe..
Sneha: you know what why don't you come with me so ...I can ask my boss to offer you a job...he is nice and I think that is quite possible
Bani: no I will find my own job...I have another interview to go for tomorrow..I might as well go for that..
Bani went abby and Aji...
Bani: did you miss mommy...
both kids raised their hand so she can carry them...and she did...for Bani her kids are her own relief...and there is nothing that will spoil her day when she is with them..she played with them..she gave them food...they didn't learn to talk yet...but they had their own way if getting what they want ...when they want..otherwise hell will break lose in the house...
The phone rang...
Bani: hello
UdayWalia: so you qiut the work
Bani:uncle
Uday: so you do remeber me
Bani: no uncle I could not work beacue I was
Uday: Bani you are my friend's daughter...and you will not accept any monet from me..but this is the limit..
Bani: no uncle
Uday: no Bani I consider as you my own..so I did something...I had given you house and work at Walia industires as an M.D...
Bani(shocked): Uncle
Uday: no Bani...you won't raise my grand kids there
Bani: Uncle
Uday: if I consider you as my daughter...then their my grandkids..and that is it....the driver will be there..in few minutes to pick you up....but I am very angry with you
Bani: I didn't do anything...
Uday:every week you called me and talked to me that everything was fine but you never told me about your financial burden...I know you told me the reason why you want to move out of Walia..industries...that you want to explore your options..and Tarun i snot fond of it and i actucally believd you ...and now...look..where everything is?
Bani: Uncle..I don't want
Uday:betta...I want you to go home and look after my grandkids abby and Aji where they are safe...not in some ally
Bani: uncle.
Uday: don't argue Bani...the driver will be there to pick you up...bye betta
BAni thought...c'mon..father is one extreme ...the son is another extreme...and she had to get by both of them and she doesn't know where would that lead her to......

Walia Mansion...
Bani came in and saw Mr Walia on the couch...her mouth fell open...Jai is gonna be here too...man this is gonna be extreme....Bani stood there before Jai looked up
Jai: what are you doing here...???
Bani: well
Jai: what now you are stalking me where ver I go
Bani(was angry): yeah right I am stalking isn't that too naive of you to believe that
Jai: then why are you here
Bani(calmed her down..cooly): I live here
Jai(mouth fell open): what
Bani: yes you heard me right I live here (after the office fiasco Bani was getting him back...and Bani is loving it)
Jai: when did this happen?
Bani: uncle invited me to stay here until my house is fixed....
Jai: this house you are talking about is mansion(very sarcastic tone)
Bani: why not a low life like you can liv ein a mansion..then I can do the same right
Jai: you are calling me a low life
Bani(ignorant): well yo are the only one who is here
Jai: Bani..
Bani(cooly): so you do remeber my name
Jai: your name disgust me
Bani: oh then ...I have one thing to say to you ...get used to it....
Jai(angry): and what if I don't
Bani: I have no issue with that
Jai:how long are u gonna be here?
Before Bani could answer..the driver came and the twins arrived...in their car seat....and Jai looked at the two precious things who are sitting on the car seat..he lookd at both of them..........
Bani looked at Jai...his facial expression changed....before she could open her mouth.........Jai left the place...
Edited by loka - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Wonderful part and fanfic ! 👏 👏
It's really interesting please continue soon ! 😉


Thanks hun...........😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: swatinarang

loka,
g8 partsThanks hun😳, but i am somewhat confused whether jai is father of bani's child and what relation he was having with tarun and why he is so much against bani. That is suspence...and we will know only later😆hope he won't accept bani's resignation because of his ego and made her work for him because of her contract. he will but before that there is another twist😆😆

please continue soon.

swati

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: jnawaz

ok im very intrigued as to waht happened with jai and bani...why is he so angry with her...lets see what happens...jai such a jerk...why did u fire her...the fact that she is a singel mother should tell u that she obvisously needs the money...what about her kids...update soon
JAZ


Thanks hun for the comments....and Jai is not gonna get off that easily..you will see😆😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part Thanks hun😳
loved it.
oh why Jai is being such a jerk can't believe he knows her....then why this all the hate, why so much anger. 😆you will see😆
good she left before he said anything to her.....does she have anything to do with Pia's death.
plz cont. soon
there are lot of questions that needs answer as far as I am reading I am getting confused.....I knew it you will do something like that to us. I will ..but this time slowly😆
cont. asap.

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