FF:The Foreign Self. Part IX-C

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priyanka

@mahimn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Armana,
Tnank you first for including an all time time favorite classic and yes, the part was gooood,Kitni baar kehna padega, I feel like a broken record, you totally out do yourself in every FF.

I am waiting for the part where Jai comes to know about Bani's true identity,that she is his angel. Looking forward to the next part which hopefully will describe Bani's journey ahead leaving her GFN people behind and Jai's too.

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archita

@who am i???

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

Armana....

Okay i read it again.
I kinda interpreted his monologue on his way back from bani's guest house wrong from chapter 8. okay let me not go there on wt i got confused.
Thanks for clearing up!!!
Hope JW brain start working fast and he figures it out soon than bunni is bani,his angel.

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Armana

just wonderful.very intense.the protrayal and description of two lost soul finding comfort in each other's arms,just fabalous.beautifully written.loved it.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Hi Armana

hm................mmmmmmmmmmm.....er....................mmmm mmmmmmm.......ermmmm mmmmmmmmmmm........... WOWW!

I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE................(Adipoli..... meaning..GREAT)

IT WAS ACTUALLY DIFFICULT FOR ME TO READ THE PAGE 😕 I HADE TO SCROLL FROM RIGHT TO LEFT AND VICE VERSA BUT IT WAS WORTH READING. GREAT GOING ARMANA... HOPE WE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER REAL SOON.....
LUV
KAMY

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

This chapter is absolutely superb, amazing, one of the best I have read till yet...and the part was extra special cuz it had my favorite song in it, Strangers in the Night...just soooo apt for both of them....and I absolutely second MT's opinion of how deftly you have potrayed the conflicting emotions....

In one word it was Fabulous 👏 ...can't wait to read the next chapter...

Garf

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Armana,

The part was awesome, finally we come to know how they met, the meeting was prophetic, the connection between the two is a memorable one and something not to be forgotten...

Your writing was great!!

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

Armana that was awesome!
their meeting was amazingggggggg
they both had a connection that couldnt be denied
i would write a longer comment but i am getting drowsy because of my cold medicine.
pleaseeeeeee continue soon

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Armana,

It was very heartworming update. Enjoyed every bit. Please continue soon.

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#29

ok since i can't fix the problem on pg 1 of this thread (you have to scroll from left to right to read, which is a nuisance) i am going to start yet another thread.
😕 😕 😕

I am really sorry for the inconvenience.

Happy reading.

Love,
Armana

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armana

@armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#30

And i finally figured out how to fix it!
Yipee!
No more scrolling from left to right.

One very, very tiny, nanoscule bleep on the technology screen but One Giant Leap for Armana!!!

I am so delighted with myself!!!

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