FF:The Foreign Self. Part IX-C

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mistletoe

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

This is the best part of the FF till date! I will be really, really surprised if you still manage to outdo this effort!👏

It had everything in perfect measure!

Hope against Despair!

Innocence against Experience!

Faith against Cynicism!

Smiles against Tears!

Jai's warmth and sensitivity is so moving, while Bani's anguish touches your Heart!

Best Scene was Bani's breaking down infront of Jai and his subsequent assurance of just how desirable he thinks that Bani is! The whole scene was written with such beauty, that I felt like reading and re-reading it several times!

Beautifully penned! The emotions just surge across the pages as you read them!😃

Will add more comments later!

Love,

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archita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

Hiya....

I dunno how??but i missed three parts?? I read all three of them in one go!!Good for me else itna suspense my tender heart couldnt hav beared..
The parts were so well written!!! 👏 👏 👏,all the scenes match up so aptly .
P-P are such marons ,but they always do good for both my babies but still i wanna .
I was doing my happy dance after reading ur last part!!! here is me

Now sice flashback is over!!! i am waiting for ur JW nxt move,hope he will not leave her again!!!

I am waiting

My little doubt when did JW recognize bani is the same gal he met in church??

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armana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Who am I,

Interesting id btw.
I love your choice of emoticons.
As for JW...has he recognised Bani as being the stranger?
Read the part again.....
Armana

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divan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Hi Armana:

Great part. Love the soft and caring side of JW. How appropriate that he becomes Bani's saviour at Christmas time. Two soul with so much pain find comfort in each other.

Like how she takes his sweater because she wants to remember him and he keeps the note and poinsetta to remind him of her. ❤️

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coolwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Hi Armana, loved your FF.

As the Priest said God works in mysterious way.How God meant for them to meet and took solace in each other, and after 5 years they meet again and took solace in each. THEY ARE MEANT TO BE WITH EACH OTHER. Lovely

D.

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@ag06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

OMG! jai n bani spendin the nite in each otherz arms comforttin each other. 😳 😳 ....both desiring each other n needin each other was just 👏 😳 .....hope they meet again .......continue asap

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amisha

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

it was just a wow no words to express
pls cont soon.........

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india06

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Was not disappointed,at all. This part was sensational!! & Stirring!!!!And the intonation of these words conveyed such "volubility".......!!!!

What struck me the most was .. what most devastated Bani was not the betrayal by her sis & her beau (shattered her faith no doubt) but that she was unable to attract a man in the most basic of ways......JW regenerated her confidence in self,as a woman...she was a woman reborn.

Absolute delectation, this part ,to say the least...Thanks.

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piccola

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

In one word Armana..Breathtakingly beautiful ! 👏 Thats 2 and I cheated ! I''be forgiven for still floating in the warmth of the moment !! 😊

Keep goin Armana - its delicious.. 👏 .! Am going back to revise it again !! 😳

In Love Again 😳 , Pic.

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bugs_bunny

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

wow.. 👏 👏 👏 that was really amazing.

first of all .. thanks for the long part..
the update was amaizng.. two strangers there for ech other in the time of need. am so glad that jai didn't apologise the morning after.

But why does bani cry still after soo many years like you mentioned in the second or third part?

hehe.. looks like i made another guest appearance in this chapeter 😆 😳

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