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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey Sheena…sorry yaar…took my time coming in with my long comments…so lets have a read…badi jaldi update kiya???😉 TATAS-R-US ki dhamkis kaam aa rahi hai…cool…bahut jald BIRLAS….AMBANI's iss naik kaam mein formate ho jaayenge!!! 🤣…

So the Dixit sisters finally land up at the Walia party…yipeee..looking really good too!!! Hai… and that gift….a lucky horseshoe…not so lucky for Jai!!! Bechaare ke per pe gira diya……lekin apna Jai toh lohe ka haina…shayad us horse shoe mein hi dent par gaya hoga!!! 😆


She gave him a once over, taking in the polished shoes, a tailored to perfection dark trousers, an open collared shirt with blue pinstripes. The sleeves were folded casually at the wrists, revealing a spattering of dark hairs on his forearms, and three buttons at his neck were open, revealing the brown column of his neck just over a round collared T-shirt he wore inside his shirt. Bani's eyes traveled to his face, starting with his jutting chin, square jaw and male lips that curved like a bow with a slight hint of smile. Bani's gaze halted on his lips for a few seconds longer as she quickly lifted her eyes and met his limpid, tawny, glittering eyes. Thick, jet black hair fell over his high forehead, silky and vibrant. 😍 😍😍…Haiiii..itne detail se check out kar rahi thi…now I can picture him standing before me!!!! 😳 😳

"We have to stop running into each other like this, although I like bumping into you", a sensual, husky voice whispered in her ears, so only she could hear. Kabhi hum se bhi takrao darling!!! 😉 😳

"Please come into the house, I will introduce you to my family" Jai restrained himself from grabbing her by her hand and pulling her into the house. Badi jaldi hai sub se milwane ki….pulling her into the house!!! 😆

She welcomed both of them with the aarthi in her hand, putting tikka on Jai and Bani and blessing Bani as she touched her feet. Jai suppressed the small groan that came out of his mouth involuntarily at the expression Maasi had on her face. He knew she was already match-making and dreaming of a bahu in the house. Arre…Jai naatak mat karo…groaning ha!!! U want massi to think like that!!! 😉

A polite cough made the three of them look at the two girls standing patiently inside waiting to be introduced. Awww…nice of Jai to introduce the other two sisters…lekin ek ka hi introduction kaafi tha…yeh Pia ka yahaan aana zaroori tha? So what if its her b'day!!! I'm sure she will get up to no good now that she has come to a Walia Party!!!


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A hassled young mother in her twenties was running around after her eight year old. He was an adorable kid with chubby cheeks and naughty smile. He was refusing to sit in one place and eat his food. She was dressed in a beautiful lemon yellow saree that was embroidered in light green vines and was wearing gold hoops that had emerald drops on her ears. She looked at her husband beseeching for help.

"Aimee, chodo na, he will eat something when he gets home" her husband looked least bothered and was trying to talk business with Aditya and Mohan. Hi Aimee…u here too..great!!! 😃

Pia spotted a group of young girls around her age and went close to them. Swati Narang, daughter of Dr.Narang, the Walia's family doctor was dressed in pretty pink, she looked beautiful and was ignoring a young man who was trying to get her attention with disdain. She was 100% sure, it was either her parents or her brother doing their match making. She wished they would stop and let her pick some one to her own liking. Aye Hai Swati…who is the lucky fellow ur parents and brother are trying to fix u up with!!! 😳 Humme nahin bataogi? 😉 😆 Is billi ko sab details jaan na hai!!!! 😉

Anam, a serious looking young woman was dressed in a simple, yet stylish black and gold salwar suit and was sitting with a laptop in a corner trying to chat with Rooj. She kept looking at Jai and was describing in detail to her friend what he was wearing and what he was doing. She predicted to them that Jai would fall in love with a shy, young woman who was dressed in a subtle cream and red churidar. Rooj sent her a picture of Salman Khan to Anam and asked if Jai looked as hot as Salman. Anam smiled dreamily at the picture of SK and replied, 'Close but no sale!'. Anam knew what she wanted in life, she was working in two places, going to school and prepping herself to be Mrs. Salman Khan one day. Keero was hanging around close by with her husband and smiling at Anam in a decidedly sisterly affection. Keero and Justin (?) launched into a debate about college sports and her favorite team, the hornets. Hi Anam…yaar sapne toh hum bhi dekhte Salman se shaadi ka….haiiiiii… 😆 😆

Tink was hanging around with two young men who looked smitten by her and was discussing the merits of Macroeconomics. Tinku…tum yahaan??? Big hug…🤗….Cool now this party is surley rocking!!!! 😃 She was explaining to them about supply and demand theory. Really??? I don't believe that!!! Pata nahin kya demand kar rahi hogi!!! 🤣 It looked like she was extremely in 'Demand'. Tink was giving longing looks at Jai who had eyes only for Bani. One of the young men asked Tink what her name stands for. Tink looked at him flirtatiously and replied, "Tinkerbell, of course!".Duh!!! Of couse Tinkerbell…the fairy who wants to go to never never land with Jai…or is that Ajai!! 🤣 😆 😉 She dressed like her namesake, a glittering dress in mauve with green and mauve dupatta. Looking great Tinks!!! 👏 Tink saw some one entering through the corner of her eyes and jumped up and down animatedly. 'Tazoooooo!!' Half the people in the room turned to look at the new entry. HAILAAAAAAAAAA…Mein bhi aaye hoon party mein!!!! Woo hoo!!! …..Sab log meri taraf dekh rahe hai….wow!! Sure made a dhamakedaar entry!!! 😃

A young woman bubbling with energy rushed in with her arms stretched. 🤗 Thats me!!! 😊 She was dressed in a designer baby blue salwar suit. Yahaan bhi bluebird banna diya!!! 🤣 Zaroor mera ulloo bhi yaheen kahin hoga!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 Cool!! 😳 The dupatta had swarowski crystals sown on it and she had matching shoes and long, turquoise chandeliers style earrings on her ears. She rushed to give a hug to Jai who smilingly received her and introduced her to Bani. Haila…I went to hug Jai and he smilingly receievd me……haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iii 😳….margaye re……!!!! Koi doctor ko bulao yaar….feeling FAINT!!!!! [$]

"Bani, please meet my friend and the interior designer who decorated my house. As you see, she has exquisite taste!" he praised Taz who beamed and looked ecstatic. ECSTATIC??? ECSTATIC??? Man….i over the moon!!!! 😃 Per zameen par nahin tik rahe…!!! 😳 Haiiiiiiiii…and I know Jai…I do have exquisite taste!!!! 😉 😳
Taz joined Tinku looking around for her old friend Tarun who was standing by the bar looking bored. De diya na jhatka Sheena!!!! 😲 Yeh Tarun yahaan bhi!!! 🤣 🤣 I knew it woh yaheen kahin hoga!!! 😆 Aur woh bore kyun ho raha hai 😕….don't worry…Tazooo will lighten up his mood…!! 😉 Mein aayiiiiiiii….tere liye!!!! 😆 😆


Jai took the glass from her hands and placed it on the counter, "Dance with me!" he urged her to the dance floor without waiting for her answer.
Bani bristled at his overbearing attitude, but acquiesced. His arm was placed at her ribcage while the other arm held her hand in his large fist and placed at his chest. She could smell the musky aftershave lotion as his cheek lay close to her hers. Her palms felt sweaty and she thought that her knees would buckle and she would fall in a heap at his feet. It was only his arms that held her stay grounded. Not fair…mujhe bhi ek dance chahiye Jai ke saath!!! 😔

"Bani, would you like to come and see my mother's garden, I could use some fresh air" Jai asked her after they finished dancing. Garden??? Fresh air??? Puhlzzzzzz….Jai koi aur bahana nahin mila Bani ko akele bahaar milne ka!!! 😆


Jai impulsively blurted out, "I can show you more of the garden one of these days in day light, if you like!" He recognized immediately, that he was acting irrationally.Mein aao??? 😳

They sat silently on the swing, Bani focused on her hands in her lap and Jai stared as the gentle wind blew wisps of Bani's hair on to her forehead. Involuntarily he reached to tuck them back behind her ears startling her. Hai…he's getting all romantic again!!!! Kuch hone waala hai…

"You look beautiful tonight!" Jai didn't recognize his own voice as it huskily breathed out the words. Well those words were just bursting to come out!!!

In the moonlight, she looked ethereal, the soft glow from the moon reflected on her smooth, unblemished skin and once again, he was lost in her dark eyes. He couldn't take off his eyes from her soft, rosy lips and lifted his hand to touch her face. Her mouth opened slightly as he traced her lips with his fingertip. He groaned sharply and pulled her closer. "Oh God, I have been wanting to do this since you walked into my house" his broad shoulders blocked the light as he held her face in hands and proceeded to kiss her with unbridled passion. 😲 😲….He just couldn't wait!!! 😳 😳 Now why didn't he say this line when I walked in!!! 😔 😉 😆

As his lips closed over hers warmly, she didn't think about anything or anyone else other than responding to him. Her first kiss and it felt so right! Their lips clung to each other, his mouth hardening as he tasted the honeyed hidden depths. The kiss went on and on…….. How dare u stop there!!! 😡 😆 😆……Sheena…update…update…update….now…now…now!!!!!

Hi All, especially those silent readers, please do leave your comments...I would like to know if you like the FF!!

Yaar Sheena…Thank u sooooooooooooooooo Much for including me in this party…bada mazaa aa raha….haila!!! Tazzoo…in KDKP and CIL….maze hi maze hai….what a fantastic part sheena…superb…mindblowing!!! 👏…ab jaldi continue karo!!!!

Taz!!!!!! 😊

Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok sheena that was not good...that was great!
haha i have been wanting to say that forever
but dude that was awesome!
hmmmm man all these people seem soooooooo familiar
aur meri whacko (Taz) toh kaha se kaha pohoch jati hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
now come on they have been kissing since more than 12 hours you need to bring them back. 😉 😳

please continue...............

pooja
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sheena thanks for the update yaar and that too before the weekend and loved reading it well over the moon i was at the party yaar why did you have to bring in my kids and hubby at the beautiful party as is i deal enough of them at home i dont want them here and haila how did you know that my hubby is a very shrewd businessmen and yes thats exactly how my life is whenever we go to a party me running around the kids to feed them he standing with his group of people discussing business as usual 😡 the only thing is that he takes full responsibility of kids and lets me enjoy the dancing part in the party he lets me be as i enjoy dancing and he being too older than me he lets me dance and mingle with my age group of people how nice of him 😳
now back to ff wow their first kiss 😳
him calling pia 16 yr old 😆
yes masi the LAXMI of the house has entered on the very auspicious day so when do we hear the wedding bells are you in need of panditji for no mangni zhat shadi and then seedha to honeymoon for your munna and munni contact me i can arrange that 😉
when do we see another update sheenu since you decided to end the part when it was just getting all hot and sizzling pls update soon...........
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

wow 😃 😃 ....sheena yaar..u are soo quick 😆 😆 ....another update 😳 😳 😳 ...thanx jaan 🤗 ......will be bck 😉 ..... i am saving 😃 ......



HI Tinku jaan,

Kaise ho?? See my update is faster than your reading, now I have to say, read!! 😭 Read!! 😭 Read!! 😭
Ha, ha, Ha!!!

I am totally kidding yaar!! Take your time!!

Huggies.....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kubare

Krishna and Reshma were hanging out together; they both lived in the Middle East and came to India for a vacation. Krishna loved reading and heard a lot about the library at the Walia Mansion and was eager to go and explore it. 😆

Shoba dear first of all thank you so very much🤗 for the mention in your lovely fanfic👏 and yes yopu described me perfectly, I am defintely in the party to raid Jai's Library.😆

You, and me and probably Sangita - looks like she loves books too!!!

Aww....so she got him a horse shoe for luck and loved the whole entrance scene with her droping the gift on his feet😛, bumping in to a wall of steel😳, and massi already match making.😆

An iron horse shoe for a man of steel, I like it!!! 😳

😆 Loved it when Jai called Pia a 16 years old😆😆😆

Put her down and cut her to half!! 😆😆😆

And what a way to end, with him kissing her and her first kiss being so great.😃

Yep, first kisses should always be memorable for a gal!! 😳😳😳

Cant wait to read what happens next.😳😃

Over the weekend, sweetheart!!

Till your next update dear.😃

Au Revoir, till then - mon ami!!

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sangitadas

A lovely FF i must say and I love it alright.

Sangita,

Thanks sweetie,


And I alos liked the way our members were beign involved.

I loved writing that, I have been only on the IF from November, but I love these folks - I look forward to trading comments, reading their FF and sending PMs late night - it's awesome to have my own pen pals, and so many wonderful people, from all over the place!! Truly colorful folks!!


Great going girl 👏
Thank you, Sangita --- 😳

Very beautiful indeed, please post next part soon. 😊



Will work on it this weekend, if there are no parties....We have a big Indian parivaar where I live, and we keep meeting almost every weekend..it's a lot of fun!! 😛😛😛

🤗🤗🤗🤗Thanks for reading....and leaving comments!! Truly appreciate it...
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: divan

Hi Sheenaji:

Have been silent reader of ff on the forum and is the main reason I come to the forum. Love this as much your other one. Like the way you describe the setting and feelings. Waiting for you next part like lot of your fans. 👍🏼



Thank you sweetie,

Please call me sheena, it's fine!! 😆😆😆 Makes me feel younger!! 😉😉😉
And welcome aboard!! Thank you for breaking the silence and writing, it's really nice to know who is reading the FF!!

I am glad you like 'Adhura Zindagi' and 'Blackmailed Bride'!! I tried to make this a little different - so cross my fingers...



Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bkeero

Hey Sheena. First of thanks for including me the Walia Party. I am honored to be a guest among all my friends from the forum. Yeh Anam bhi na, doesn't give anyone else a chance. I guess Sallu Jiju should be happy that she is loyal to him and only him..

Hey Keero..Howdy buddy? How is school and work? I am trying to figure out the Sallu and Anam thingy...I am drawing some parallels with KS. Young, pretty thing, serious and straight forward going for an older, handsome, large chested hunk....where have I seen that before??😆She will probably kill me, if she sees this!!


That was great yaar, I hope Pia doesn't get too drunk and do something stupid which where Bani is going to have pick the pieces.

You know Pia, Bani always there to sweep the dirt Pia leaves behind...

I love Rano, I hope she will get a the scholarship to study abroad. Hopefully things will work out for her…

Yep, she is too smart to waste her brains! Who was it who said, A mind is a terrible thing to waste, a waist is a terrible thing to mind (RANO with the mind and JAI with the waist)
😆

Bani and Jai. What a couple. Very cute of Masi to do aarti for them. I think Masi's brain is working over time to see those grandchildren. Jai better move quickly….

Hmm, Maasi always thinks she is the cupid, and she is yaar!! 😉😉


You described everything so well it felt like I was really there watching Jai and Bani in the garden and on the swing.

Thanks Keero, my dad is a keen gardener, he has this huge garden with everything I mentioned and lot more, a true vrindavan!! 😛😛😛


She had her first kiss, isn't that special and a moment to cherish forever. He waited all night for that moment how cute is tha..

Very romantic!! Jai bhi na...some times gets all romantic!!


Looking forward to the next part.



Thanks for the comments sweetie, when are you updating??

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